//MehBeer SS : The Kidnapped Bride\\ - *Part 2 - Page 7 - 8/7/15*

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Pasya

@Pasya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

wow u updated so soon...
update is great...
abeer reallyyy changed now???
they love each other very deeply...
cont soon...

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Mahalakshmi

@MahaSrilu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

first of all the first page still got a correction to do (have to edit this part after u correct😊)and next the part-2 was awesome I had read it before but still for Mehbeer and u my new frnd i read it again loved it. would I be considered greedy if i ask pls pls continue soon 😳 😊 😊 .

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Megha (Vishav Kirti) Sharma

@dmegha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: MahaSrilu
first of all the first page still got a correction to do (have to edit this part after u correct😊)and next the part-2 was awesome I had read it before but still for Mehbeer and u my new frnd i read it again loved it. would I be considered greedy if i ask pls pls continue soon 😳 😊 😊 .

I have mentioned before that few parts will be same in both the versions but not every.
The 3rd part of ArDhika won't be a part of this 😉

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Mahalakshmi

@MahaSrilu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: dmegha

I have mentioned before that few parts will be same in both the versions but not every.
The 3rd part of ArDhika won't be a part of this 😉

It will be my pleasure to read both of them 😉

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aglaeca9

@aglaeca9

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Awesome...
Already in love wid d story...
Continue n do pm me..
N very well written...

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Alisha

@LoveIshveer

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Read both the chapters together . I just jyst luv them. Update soon dear

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naina

@naina927

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Ms. M that was again brilliantly written...!!! 👏 I think I should get used to this brilliancy of yours... 😉 I'm falling in love with the story... ❤️ Mehbeer are so cute and adorable... Their bickering... 😆 coming to the chapter, Abeer really loves & cares for meher... Won dikhta hai... And meher baby you shouldn't have done that... Kicked Abeer... 😡 Abeer was right meher... At least think about your future children... 😉 Abeer is already done with his family planning... Good going buddy 👍🏼 vikram (thank god u changed the name 😉 ) is really a chicken... 😆 I'm loving this Abeer... ❤️

Waiting for next... 😊

Do pm me...