//MehBeer SS : The Kidnapped Bride\\ - *Part 2 - Page 7 - 8/7/15* - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Kriyaansh-holic

Amazing concept n superb starting..

waiting eagerly...
update soon 😊


Thank you😃
Me glad that you liked the story😃
Posted: 10 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: MahaSrilu

loved the mehbeer version more than ardhika but don't mind u should have used some others name than saral hate that git'' 😕


Oh cool!😃😳
And yeah no one loves even the name Saral, so me gonna change it😆
Posted: 10 years ago
#43
This version is different from the ArDhika one, as there is no revenge drama in MehBeer's case as it is in ArDhika's, no love triangle. Some updates will be similar but some will be totally different! 😉
Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Part Two

Imp. Note - As no one likes even the name "Saral"😆, so now, I have changed it and Saral is replaced by Vikram. Okay?!😆


Meher let out a soft moan as she clutched her head and tried to open her eyes. She blinked thrice to adjust to the light in the room which was dim lighted. It was a huge room, really huge, which was well furnished and looked really beautiful.

It was dark outside and the wind was blowing lightly. Soft wisps of air blowing the curtains that covered the windows. The room felt oddly familiar to her. She hadn't been in such a room ever but still the feeling of familiarity tugged at her heart.

She pulled up her hair in a messy bun and stepped off the bed. She rubbed her eyes and could feel that something was not right. She stood up and walked across the room where there was a full length mirror. It was then she realized many things.

> She was getting married to Vikram but somehow got married to Abeer.

> Right now she wasn't wearing her wedding dress. Instead she somehow had this cute white colored ankle length nightdress.

> She was at a strangely familiar place with no one around.

> She had just got kidnapped by her own husband, who was Abeer!

The last one made Meher shriek loudly. Within 30 seconds the door of her room opened and there he came, running.

"What happened?" asked Abeer. He was panting lightly. Hands on his hips he looked at her with a worried expression on her face.

For a moment she got lost in his handsome self. His ruffled hair, dark eyes, those flaring nostrils, kissable lips and damn that sexy stubble.

Abeer too was staring at Meher. She looked cute and sexy at the same time. The thing that attracted him the most were her expressive eyes and ever smiling lips. His gaze fell at the mangalsutra around her neck. A satisfactory smile came over his lips. He glanced at her from head to toe and then back. His gaze settled on the partition of her hair which he had filled with sacred vermilion.

His. Came the voice of his primal self. It gave him feeling of utter satisfaction and a possessive feeling clawed his insides. He started walking towards her but she kept stepping back.

It appeared as if a lion was stalking his prey. Meher kept stepping back but Abeer wasn't stopping. The dangerous yet sexy gleam in his eyes, was predatory.

"Abeer..." Meher gasped as her back hit the wall. Abeer came close to her and held her in the same position, caging her in his arms. Burying his head in the crook of her neck, he inhaled deeply taking in her scent as he nuzzled his neck.

Lost in him, Meher's hands made their way to his back and clutched him more close.

"I love you so much!"

That brought Meher back out if her dream land. She tried to push Abeer away but he wasn't listening. Meher grew more annoyed as she recalled the number of times be had said that he loved her, only to break her heart.

"Leave me Abeer.."

"No"

The nerve of this man. Meher have had enough! He can't just wander back in her life as her husband after he had shattered her heart.

Her every effort went in vain as Abeer clutched her tightly to him. Meher let out a frustrated groan and kicked him down with her knee.

Abeer yelped in pain and cursed incoherently. Meher when realized that what she had done, got a sheepish expression on her face but shrugged it off.

"Damn-it Meher!! Think before you act! What if something had happened to me because of your kick?? Don't you want our children to come into this world??" questioned Abeer angrily.

"Children!!! Abeer we still haven't talk about you and your deeds and you are talking about children already!" Meher yelled.

Abeer glared at her, his nostrils flared as he spoke, "What deeds? I love you, got married to you then can't I think about having kids?"

Meher gave him a weird, what-the-hell-you're-talking-about look.

Abeer continued, "I want two of them. A boy and a girl. We can obviously have more later on."

"WHAT!!!!" Meher shrieked loudly making Abeer cringe.

"Don't shout! I know you got some really amazing set of vocal chords but my ear drums are not strong enough to bear your shrieking!" Abeer complained.

"I wonder if my kids gonna have your type of vocal chords!" Abeer visible shuddered.

Meher felt offended, "Oh phulleez...my kids gonna be sweet and simple like me. Not arrogant and irritating like you!" she said, pointing her index finger at him. Abeer hooked his finger with hers, then wrapped his other arm around her waist and pulled her close.

"Really? Am I irritating?" Abeer nuzzled her cheeks.

Meher sighed, "That's enough!"

Abeer pulled back lightly, "What?"

Meher freed herself from him and sat on a chair, "Don't act Abeer! You know very well that whatever happened between us couldn't be sorted out like this. Nothing is there between us now!

Abeer bend down in front of her, "I am sorry about that Meher. Really really sorry. I'll do anything, anything you'll say. But just forgive me na!" he said softly caressing her cheek.

"Let me go then." Abeer's hand on Meher's face stilled at her statement.

"Meher..."

"Please Abeer..!"

"But why?? We both love each other, can't live without each other and now we are officially husband and wife!! Why the hell do you want to leave me!?" yelled Abeer.

"Try and understand Abeer.." Abeer interrupted her by grabbing her hands tightly. He pulled her close yet again but this time with more force.

"You try and understand Mrs. Meher Abeer Malhotra! YOU. ARE. MINE. And I am not letting you go that easily!"

"You can't keep me here forever!"

"I can." Abeer said as he pulled out something rope like from the closet and started tying it around her hands.

"What are you doing?" Meher tried to move but Abeer was way too strong for her.

"Exactly what a kidnapper does." He winked at her, securely tied her to the chair and walked out of the room.

She heard the click of the four and knew it very well that he had locked the door as well.

"ABEER!!!!", she yelled out loud.

She was sure, she heard dark chuckle in response. That man! That infuriating, stupid, idiot, moron, arrogant and annoying man!! How the hell had he managed to weave his way inside her heart? How!?

God knows that she had always wanted a simple, loving and caring kind of guy who would be the world for her and she his universe. But no, God had to play one of his wicked games and land Abeer - the arrogant - Malhotra in her life.

Abeer was anything but sweet! He was annoying, he's short tempered, tantrum king, sarcastic idiot and really really handsome...aaarrgghhh. She so much wanted to kick herself for still having such kind of thoughts about the man who had kidnapped his own bride! His wife!

His wife! It sounded so wonderful!

Agreed that Abeer wasn't what she had wanted her husband to be. But he is what she needed exactly! If he's annoying, she's no less. If he throws tantrums, he also bear hers! If he is sarcastic, God, she loved to get back at him. And he's passionate, his love highly consuming like a drug, which if get addicted, is impossible to not have a taste yet again. He completes her.

And in some way, he indeed is her world and she knows that he thinks the same for her. Sighing, she accepted that the more she resists, the more she is falling deeper.

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Abeer was grinning to himself as he walked out of Meher's room, after tying her to the chair. He heard her yelling his name and a chuckle ripped out of him. God, he loved her so much! She was a fiery lioness. Soon, she will accept this new arrangement, they love each other after-all, he just needs to make her realize that he indeed has changed. Not fully but just a little bit. Enough to get her back, to deserve her love.

His smile vanished as he stopped in front of another room. He opened the door and there he was. The only person alive whom he hated to the core, from the bottom of his heart. Vikram.

"What's up chicken?" asked Abeer as he sat on the chair in front of Vikram who had black and blue bruises all over his face and arms, and was tied to a chair like a prisoner.

Vikram looked up into the eyes of his kidnapper, "What do you want? Leave me! Let me go!"

Abeer shrugged, "Such a coward! And by the way, I got what I want."

"What?"

Abeer pulled his bruised cheeks and said it grinning widely, "Meher, my love. She's now my wife too!"

Vikram tried to get freed, "My Mehu?? How.."

He was interrupted by a punch on his face, "SHE IS NOT YOURS!! SHE WAS MINE, IS MINE AND WILL REMAIN MINE FOREVER!"

Cooling down Abeer continued, "You manipulated her into this marriage but me, me and Meher love each other. I tried to make you understand by simply talking but no, then again you manipulated the situation and fed Meher some lies. Now enjoy your punishment!"

"She's mine, I know her long before you met her!" Vikram argued.

"Time isn't what love needs, you dumb. And by the way I know her even way before than you, But that's a long story, will tell you not! And don't worry, you are here till Meher agrees to our marriage. I'll free you soon. Till then, here's your phone, call your parents and tell them that you have changed your plan and have decided to take Meher away for some days. Call them!", he ordered.

"Why would I do that?"

"Okay, don't do it, then I just have to free you from the life. What say?" warned Abeer, eyeing him dangerously. And Vikram, the kind of guy he was, he nodded in positive and agreed to do what Abeer asked him to.

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To Be Continued

Edited by dmegha - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45

Um vikaram its great yaar.Very well written yaar though I read real version I can imagine it with mehbeer .u R great dearu👏

Edited by raji_sudha - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
res/unres <3
great updates!
Love the way you describe everything <3
Is vikram hot? I have always had a soft spot for villains 😳
Coninue soon and pm me <3

Cheers, baby!
Edited by Avalanche. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
awsum update... read both parts in a go... luv mehbeer want more romantic scenes of dem... update soon!!
Posted: 10 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: raji_sudha

Um vikaram its great yaar.Very well written yaar though I read real version I can imagine it with mehbeer .u R great dearu👏


Cool!! Glad that you liked it Raji😃🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
i m loving the way story is going yar...👍🏼
MehBeer bickering n kids talk loved it...😆
waiting eagerly for the next update...😳
vikram nyc choice..😉.amazing update...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
res..Need to give a good long reply to this amazing story :)

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