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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is my first os over here I hope you all will like it.Please give your feedback.

Until I am there

Abeers's point of view...

I know this is more like a second home to me since you are here and you know me I am as stubborn as you are...

I won't leave you until I am with you.

Until I succeed in finding a way to live in your warm embrace.

Until I mend my ways and reach to your heart.

Until I don't find the repentance of my gaffe.

Until you don't get tired of my pleas and forgive me for my deplorable

Sins.

And until one last time you just curse me for what I did to you but at least for once say a word.

I know I do mistakes and you know me better than I'll ever find out about myself then why you left me.

In a place where words are taken for granted and vows in real has no meaning to it.

If you were still there this place would have been a better place for me at least.

I know I can't be there with you as I promised I will live for you and for those who lived for you and are still in belief like me that...

One day you'll come back I know I am faking it, they are faking it, everyone is faking it.

But for once can't it be true.

You didn't say a word to prove yourself, and I didn't value your silence.

You accepted my bitter words, and I didn't know why you accepted them.

Now that I know...

You are lost behind the darkness and it's so dense for me to hit upon you since someone above me has kept you under his protective covering.

I am still waiting for that day when I reach you and I know that day is not far enough.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow, great start please continue with this and keep writing more OS SS and FF if u can. Would love to read more on Mehbeer
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Okay..seriously it was very good..
dil khush kar diya :)
write more and do pm me ur all works on MehBeer
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Butfl one..cntnue writing on mehbeer...pls start new ff...n pls pm me.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely os..!!
Do write more n plz pm me..:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res😛
Naki u r here , I'm pleasantly surprised
Chudail hug🤗

Beautiful Ankita , loved every Line , feel in the tone
Keep writing dear
And yeah dnt need to PM me 😉
I can track you
Edited by madhufx9... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This was beautiful!!! Wish that Abeer realizes this
Loved his thoughts and acceptense

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