Kashi's Wait : A Poem - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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My 1st comment here courtesy ur lovely poem..very well written :)
Kashi is such a heartbreaking character and Ishita has brought her to life beautifully.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Spellbound!
Moist, pure and deep are these words. The essence is heart warming.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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very nicely you have pour down those feelings through your words , good one...👏👏👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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its very beautiful poem,😊
which describes Kashi emotions, kashi inner feelings,👏

kashi charcater , feeling very, soothing on screen which way she express her feelings, that's marvelous

little little movements her expression very cool, or heart touching.😊

or your poem penned down all beautifully
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der lagi aane mein tumko shukR hai fir bhi aaye to
aas ne dil ka saath na choDaa waise hum ghabraaye to

suni sunaayi baath nahin hai apne oopar beethi hai
phool nikalte haiN sholoN se chaahat aag lagaaye to
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ethereally presented! Leaves behind a nice feeling! <3
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow, just so soft & spectacular! <3
Your descriptive forms have always been extremely endearing to read.

Amazing :D

Louuu.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: SenAnu

BLEW ME AWAY WITH THE FIRST LINE <3


Rammy, you are truly amazing !! Its the first time reading a Kashi Baji poem on your part and its amazing !!!

Haye, how expressive and presentable !

Though it was short, it was crispy and sweet!!

You be the queen !

Hey Anu! Thanks a lot! Well i'm writing Baji-Kashi for the first time.😆 Thank you girl, glad you liked it! ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: VasusenaRadheya

Loved it so much chutki . 👏 Beautiful words , rhythm and most importantly you captured the feelings so perfectly !

I'm shipping Bajirao and Kashibai already . 😆

Looks like I got a new name, Chutki.😳 Thank you so much, mishit di!
Yeah, Baji-Kashi are adorable and I want to see more of them on the show.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: --BlackSheep--

Another beautiful piece of work Rammy👏👏You have excellently penned down Kashibai's feelings in this poem.

She was truly a poetic character😭👏

Ashi, what a pleasant surprise!😛 Thank you girl and thanks for coming and reading! ❤️
@bold-So true!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: zaniax

My 1st comment here courtesy ur lovely poem..very well written :)
Kashi is such a heartbreaking character and Ishita has brought her to life beautifully.

It's great to know that my poem made you post here! Really means a lot!
Yes, Ishita is a brilliant actress.

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