Kashi's Wait : A Poem

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MsChanadlerBong

@MsChanadlerBong

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Like always, your poems are a treat. Your way with words and the way you play with emotions while balancing the beauty of the poem is amazing!

Kashi is my favourite character and thou I haven't seen the show yet, this one has touched my heart. Kashi's pinning for her husband, all her emotions and inner turmoil has been so well portrayed. The last two line does the magic. Do write more on Kashi and some more poems.

Thank you for the pm.

Sam

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Ramya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: _Eternity_
amazing awesome beauti poem ramya. 👏
thnx for pm dear..

Thanks a lot ranju!😳

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Ramya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: KrishnaPriyaa

UnresWa 😳
Rams, you have no idea how much I love the poem. The call of Nature also makes Kashi see Bajirao, for that deep is her love for him, and that high is her want for him to come. Her separation is beautifully written in deep, heartfelt words 👏👏
Kudos, Rams. You out do yourself ❤️

Thank you, Sru!

Kashi's love for Bajirao was such I believe that all she wanted was his happiness.❤️

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Ramya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Shrinika13
It was beautiful! I always say this, you were made for poetry and writing!
It was like water and the right amount of emotion. You go girl. ❤️

I am grateful!😳

@bold-Now,that's huge! Thank you so much!

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Ramya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: PanchaliKaArjun
Like always, your poems are a treat. Your way with words and the way you play with emotions while balancing the beauty of the poem is amazing!
Kashi is my favourite character and thou I haven't seen the show yet, this one has touched my heart. Kashi's pinning for her husband, all her emotions and inner turmoil has been so well portrayed. The last two line does the magic. Do write more on Kashi and some more poems.
Thank you for the pm.
Sam

Thanks for coming, Sam and thank you so much for the compliment. In my opinion you should try the show although I hate the way Baji treats her here but Ishita is just amazing.

Indeed, Kashi is one of my favourites too and I will surely write more.

Thanks!