The Drabbles of Mr. & Mrs. Kirloskar l note PG17

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SimplyAshVikian

@SimplyAshVikian

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Posted: 12 years ago

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It was awesome sheetal 👏

I was imaging purvi's jealous face when the girl fell on arjun and she asked arjun's help 😳

loved both parts 😃

continue soon ...

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-LiveLaughLove-

@-LiveLaughLove-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

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Once again you never fail to impress Sheetal! Nice job, Im truly enjoying these Drabbles

Here are my favorite parts from Jealousy

"Aren't you gonna look at the stars?" she asked, still lying on her back.

"Nah - you shine bright enough," he winked as he took hold of one of her hands.

Pink hues came up on to Purvi's face before she lightly pushed Arjun with her free hand. "Shut up!"

It was sooo cute! Arjun is such a romantic! Pleasing Purvi! LOL the way he tried to get rid of that girl and Purvi's remarks. I hope we get scenes like that in the show after they get married.

Supermarket

Omg!! Haha Purvi is very particular about her feminine care products as Arjun is about his second love😉
Arjun seemed like the foodie in this one!
I loved the last part alot! Even if Arjun was just buttering Purvi up so he could get his food it was cute!

"Purvi?"

"Hmm...?"

"Can we not buy anything for our baby?"

"What do you mean?"

"I saw you knitting those scarves and trinkets when aai was sick - you should just make things for our little one, okay?"

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Wonderful Job Sheetal!!! Anxiously waiting for the next drabbles!

Edited by -LiveLaughLove- - 12 years ago

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Sheetal

@arjunpurvixo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: sheenamathew93
It was awesome sheetal 👏
I was imaging purvi's jealous face when the girl fell on arjun and she asked arjun's help 😳
loved both parts 😃
continue soon ...

Thank you Sheena - will do! 😳

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--Iqra--

@--Iqra--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Aww! Lol! Shooo cute! Jealousy was dreamy, the perfect outdoor night, looking for constellations together! Then that trippy girl coming and the sarcastic jealous Purvi with a loving, assuring Arjun! Ah! Supermarket was hilarious! Me want ice cream! Great job! Very well written! And I love that you update more than one a time! I'd be dying for more if there was only one! Love it!

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Sheetal

@arjunpurvixo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: --Iqra--
Aww! Lol! Shooo cute! Jealousy was dreamy, the perfect outdoor night, looking for constellations together! Then that trippy girl coming and the sarcastic jealous Purvi with a loving, assuring Arjun! Ah! Supermarket was hilarious! Me want ice cream! Great job! Very well written! And I love that you update more than one a time! I'd be dying for more if there was only one! Love it!

Aw, how sweet! Thank you so much! 😳 I loved reading your comment - it means so much 😃

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Ashlaika

@Ashlaika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Ok - I'm suffering from a lack of ArVi Drabbles.

I meant I read all 5 at once and then it was done and I was sad!!! When will we get more!???

I love them ALLL!!!!!!!!! They were each great and cute and sweet and fabulous all in their own way! From each story, I got a sense of Arjun, Purvi, Rithvik, Asha and of course, the sassy, brilliant writer ;-).

Thats what makes a great story... a sense of being able to picture each and every scene and relating them to make a complete and vivid picture in your mind.

Thanks Sheetu for doing such a wonderful job and leaving us with fun, loving, lighthearted stories that leave a huge smile on our faces and makes us wanna come back for more!

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Sheetal

@arjunpurvixo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Ashlaika
Ok - I'm suffering from a lack of ArVi Drabbles.

I meant I read all 5 at once and then it was done and I was sad!!! When will we get more!???

I love them ALLL!!!!!!!!! They were each great and cute and sweet and fabulous all in their own way! From each story, I got a sense of Arjun, Purvi, Rithvik, Asha and of course, the sassy, brilliant writer ;-).

Thats what makes a great story... a sense of being able to picture each and every scene and relating them to make a complete and vivid picture in your mind.

Thanks Sheetu for doing such a wonderful job and leaving us with fun, loving, lighthearted stories that leave a huge smile on our faces and makes us wanna come back for more!

A lack?! Hehe - you'll get some more after the 20th 😊 This was such a sweet comment, thank you Ash! It brightened my whole day 😃

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Jagruti

@AnAvidReader

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

This is so cute Sheets..Loved It..!!
ur a fab writer..so many cute ArVi moments..
all drabbles were amazing..And I read all of dem in a go..
As someone said..Love when u post 2-3 parts in one update 😆 haha..Par still yeh Dil Maange More..
Hope we get to see Arjun taking care of a pregnant Purvi 😳
and m extremely sorry for commenting late

Thankyou..Thanks a lot for writing all of these..ur amazing..🤗

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Sheetal

@arjunpurvixo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: ashvikluverrr
This is so cute Sheets..Loved It..!!
ur a fab writer..so many cute ArVi moments..
all drabbles were amazing..And I read all of dem in a go..
As someone said..Love when u post 2-3 parts in one update 😆 haha..Par still yeh Dil Maange More..
Hope we get to see Arjun taking care of a pregnant Purvi 😳
and m extremely sorry for commenting late

Thankyou..Thanks a lot for writing all of these..ur amazing..🤗

Would you guys like some more? I'll try and write more after I get back from the movies today 😆

But thank you - I love writing these, it's so easy and I don't have to stick with one though 😳

and yes, I post a lot in one update so you guys won't complain it's too short 😛 😳

and hehe Arjun and Purvi are still early in their relationship 😉

It's okay if it's late or on time, as long as I get a comment! Thank YOU for reading and taking your time to leave such a nice comment! 🤗