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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: crazy2012



ofc..i ll update our FF too immediately next😳😊



Yes bt i want update of ur bezoonba update 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Tarza

Very nice update! Loved it!

thanks zari dear 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 5 –

After the dance Shakti, Rithvik and Asha sat on the bench on the ground of the society and started chit chatting while Parin in the drunk started went near the kids and started playing with them. Shakti sees her lovingly from the distance.

Rithvik(looking at Shakti first and then at Parin) – Shaks do you know what's tomorrow?

Shakti was lost in seeing Purvi and he didn't listened to what Rithvik said. Rithvik now gave a smirked look at him and thought, "I knew you would not be listening"

Rithvik (whispering in his ears now) – Stop day dreaming about your future kids.

Saying this he winked at him. Asha could also hear this and she too starting laughing. Hearing this Shakti came out of the trance and hitted Rithvik hard on his arms.

Shakti – Stop it you both!!

Asha – Why should we stop now. See its not your fault to dream but atleast try to implement this dream in real.

Saying this she also winked and both Rithvik and Asha started giggling.

Shakti was up of all this teasing and therefore he got up and started to move. Asha and Rithvik too started moving behind him still teasing him all the way.

Shakti (moving towards Parin and holding her hand) – Parin come on lets go…

Saying this he made Parin move but she didn't took a step.

Parin (in a shaky voice) – No…No…No…No…I don't want to go. I want to play…

Asha and Rithvik were having fits of laughter seeing Parin.

Shakti (going near her and constantly looking in her eyes) – Parin…please lets go..

Parin (also looking in his eyes with shyness) – Ohk…but promise me that we will go out in the evening…

Shakti – In this condition…

Parin (doing the drama of crying and banging her foot on the ground like a baby) – I want to go..please…

Shakti (keeping his hands on her cheek) – Okay Okay we will go but first lets go and change. Okay happy…

Hearing this Parin stopped her drama and hugged Shakti tightly..

Shakti was first awestruck with a sudden hug but later he too hugged her back.

Asha and Rithvik saw this and smiled looking at each other. Rithvik in happiness gave a side hug to Asha and now everyone started moving up at Parin's house. All the way Parin was continuously talking and Shakti was trying to stop her but she didn't.

At Parin's House –

Linda opened the house and saw Parin in the drunk state and was almost shocked.

Linda – What happened to her?

Rithvik (laughingly) – Bhaang effect…

Shakti – Linda take her inside and make her change otherwise she will catch cold.

Linda nodded her head positively and came near Parin and held her hand to take her in the room but Parin didn't moved from there. Instead she had held Shakti's hand tightly. Shakti tired to withdrew and make her explain to go and change but she didn't.

Parin (shrugging Linda's hand) – Kmh what's your problem? Why cant you see me happy?

Saying this tears welded up in her eyes and Linda was shocked on what Parin told. Shakti, Asha and Rithvik too couldn't believe what just Parin said.

Linda – Parin what happened…Are you…

Parin (didn't let her complete her sentence) – Kmh why are you always behind me. Why do always separate me from Arora Saab…

Saying this she made a sad face and stood there.

Shakti – What happened Parin why are you saying all this things. What have Linda done wrong?

Saying this he first glanced at Parin and then at Linda but found no answers.

Parin (tears rolling from her eyes) – You know Arora Saab what kmh tells. She tell me that you don't deserve me and I should leave you so that you can move ahead in your life.

Hearing this everyone was again shocked and were constantly looking at Linda. Linda couldn't believe this and was getting angry on Parin.

Parin (continuing..) – But she is not wrong. I don't deserve anyone in my life. When I was born my parents left me…The one lady that I loved the most in my life my granny she too left me…and now the most important person that I love will also leave me very soon…(sobbing) …Why it always happens that the people whom I love always leave me and go…Am I a bad person to be loved..

Saying this she broke down and started crying…

Shakti, Asha and Rithvik were looking at her with sadness..

Shakti (coming near and trying to soothe her) – No…who told you that you are bad… no Parin you are the most finest person I have ever met in my life…and who told you that I would stop loving you…I will love you forever…and why would I leave you..

Parin – Because kmh tells that I should not ruin your life for my happiness.

Shakti, Asha and Rithvik were not able to understand what she was saying.

Shakti – Linda please tell me clearly what she is trying to say.

Linda thinking, "In a drunk state she is about to say everything..No I cant let that happen. I have to stop her at any cost".

Shakti – Linda…where are you lost.

Linda (coming out of thought) – Hmm..nothing…she is drunk right now and is not realizing what is she saying…let her get freshen up then we will talk.

Saying this she dragged Parin in the room.

Parin (while going) – No this is the truth…I should not ruin your Arora Saab for my happiness…

Asha – Whats happened to her? Why is behaving so weirdly?

Rithvik – There is definitely something wrong which she is hiding.

Shakti was lost in the thoughts of Parin and whatever she said. He wanted to know exactly what Parin said and how she is ruining my life.

In the room –

Linda (getting angry) – Do you even realize what were you trying to do?

Parin is seated on the bed with her fingers on her lips as per the order of her kmh.

Linda (taking out her clothes and necessary needs for the shower) – Do to your this behavior I would have atleast be killed by your lover. Cant you even think about me once. If you wanted to say him the truth then you could have said it when you are in your state of mind…you know by this you were trying to ruin things not only for yourself but for me too..

Saying this she gave an angry look at Parin.

Parin (with a babyish face and tone) – Soorry Kmmhhh…

Saying this she held her ears and on her this gesture Linda started laughing. Parin too smiled at her.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update..ur fic Parin is cute..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: afreenaamna

Nice update..ur fic Parin is cute..

what does fic mean 😕
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pkarvi

Part 5 '

After the dance Shakti, Rithvik and Asha sat on the bench on the ground of the society and started chit chatting while Parin in the drunk started went near the kids and started playing with them. Shakti sees her lovingly from the distance.

Rithvik(looking at Shakti first and then at Parin) ' Shaks do you know what's tomorrow?

Shakti was lost in seeing Purvi and he didn't listened to what Rithvik said. Rithvik now gave a smirked look at him and thought, "I knew you would not be listening"

Rithvik (whispering in his ears now) ' Stop day dreaming about your future kids.

Saying this he winked at him. Asha could also hear this and she too starting laughing. Hearing this Shakti came out of the trance and hitted Rithvik hard on his arms.

Shakti ' Stop it you both!!

Asha ' Why should we stop now. See its not your fault to dream but atleast try to implement this dream in real.

Saying this she also winked and both Rithvik and Asha started giggling.

Shakti was up of all this teasing and therefore he got up and started to move. Asha and Rithvik too started moving behind him still teasing him all the way.

Shakti (moving towards Parin and holding her hand) ' Parin come on lets go'

Saying this he made Parin move but she didn't took a step.

Parin (in a shaky voice) ' No'No'No'No'I don't want to go. I want to play'

Asha and Rithvik were having fits of laughter seeing Parin.

Shakti (going near her and constantly looking in her eyes) ' Parin'please lets go..

Parin (also looking in his eyes with shyness) ' Ohk'but promise me that we will go out in the evening'

Shakti ' In this condition'

Parin (doing the drama of crying and banging her foot on the ground like a baby) ' I want to go..please'

Shakti (keeping his hands on her cheek) ' Okay Okay we will go but first lets go and change. Okay happy'

Hearing this Parin stopped her drama and hugged Shakti tightly..

Shakti was first awestruck with a sudden hug but later he too hugged her back.

Asha and Rithvik saw this and smiled looking at each other. Rithvik in happiness gave a side hug to Asha and now everyone started moving up at Parin's house. All the way Parin was continuously talking and Shakti was trying to stop her but she didn't.

At Parin's House '

Linda opened the house and saw Parin in the drunk state and was almost shocked.

Linda ' What happened to her?

Rithvik (laughingly) ' Bhaang effect'

Shakti ' Linda take her inside and make her change otherwise she will catch cold.

Linda nodded her head positively and came near Parin and held her hand to take her in the room but Parin didn't moved from there. Instead she had held Shakti's hand tightly. Shakti tired to withdrew and make her explain to go and change but she didn't.

Parin (shrugging Linda's hand) ' Kmh what's your problem? Why cant you see me happy?

Saying this tears welded up in her eyes and Linda was shocked on what Parin told. Shakti, Asha and Rithvik too couldn't believe what just Parin said.

Linda ' Parin what happened'Are you'

Parin (didn't let her complete her sentence) ' Kmh why are you always behind me. Why do always separate me from Arora Saab'

Saying this she made a sad face and stood there.

Shakti ' What happened Parin why are you saying all this things. What have Linda done wrong?

Saying this he first glanced at Parin and then at Linda but found no answers.

Parin (tears rolling from her eyes) ' You know Arora Saab what kmh tells. She tell me that you don't deserve me and I should leave you so that you can move ahead in your life.

Hearing this everyone was again shocked and were constantly looking at Linda. Linda couldn't believe this and was getting angry on Parin.

Parin (continuing..) ' But she is not wrong. I don't deserve anyone in my life. When I was born my parents left me'The one lady that I loved the most in my life my granny she too left me'and now the most important person that I love will also leave me very soon'(sobbing) 'Why it always happens that the people whom I love always leave me and go'Am I a bad person to be loved..

Saying this she broke down and started crying'

Shakti, Asha and Rithvik were looking at her with sadness..

Shakti (coming near and trying to soothe her) ' No'who told you that you are bad' no Parin you are the most finest person I have ever met in my life'and who told you that I would stop loving you'I will love you forever'and why would I leave you..

Parin ' Because kmh tells that I should not ruin your life for my happiness.

Shakti, Asha and Rithvik were not able to understand what she was saying.

Shakti ' Linda please tell me clearly what she is trying to say.

Linda thinking, "In a drunk state she is about to say everything..No I cant let that happen. I have to stop her at any cost".

Shakti ' Linda'where are you lost.

Linda (coming out of thought) ' Hmm..nothing'she is drunk right now and is not realizing what is she saying'let her get freshen up then we will talk.

Saying this she dragged Parin in the room.

Parin (while going) ' No this is the truth'I should not ruin your Arora Saab for my happiness'

Asha ' Whats happened to her? Why is behaving so weirdly?

Rithvik ' There is definitely something wrong which she is hiding.

Shakti was lost in the thoughts of Parin and whatever she said. He wanted to know exactly what Parin said and how she is ruining my life.

In the room '

Linda (getting angry) ' Do you even realize what were you trying to do?

Parin is seated on the bed with her fingers on her lips as per the order of her kmh.

Linda (taking out her clothes and necessary needs for the shower) ' Do to your this behavior I would have atleast be killed by your lover. Cant you even think about me once. If you wanted to say him the truth then you could have said it when you are in your state of mind'you know by this you were trying to ruin things not only for yourself but for me too..

Saying this she gave an angry look at Parin.

Parin (with a babyish face and tone) ' Soorry Kmmhhh'

Saying this she held her ears and on her this gesture Linda started laughing. Parin too smiled at her.

wat a both girl ha (parin n kmh) ...bichare shakti ke emotion ke saath khel rahi hai...very bad bad bad so saddd...😭😭😭😭
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nice keep it up linda 👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
parin i will kill you 🤢 you ruined my image in front of public 😡 you using me for your own reason but now you making me vamp in front of everyone 😡
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: punirashakti

wat a both girl ha (parin n kmh) ...bichare shakti ke emotion ke saath khel rahi hai...very bad bad bad so saddd...😭
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nice keep it up linda 👏


i dint done anything swati , its her plan not mine , she is using me 🤢 🤢
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome updte dear..very nice omgg i m crying for parin.😭..plzz reveal thruth soon hope evrything becomes fine😊
ashvik were asusual cuteee awesome😳
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sunshinesamuef

nice...update soon...😊

thanks debalina..btw where is ur update dear..please update ur ff soon 😳 😛

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