ArVi SS : The Babysitter /Chapter2:pg.7/

alicia. thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#1

Hi Everyone ! 🤗
So recently while I was suppose to be studying 😳 I just came up with this random idea . And a lot of had to do with my own life as I sometimes babysit my cousins 😆
And I really hope y'all enjoy ! 😃

TEASER/PROLOGUE

"Who the hell are you!" Arjun shouted. He had just returned from the gym and was shocked to see a woman in his house , in his neice's bedroom , cradling her to sleep with his sister,brother-in-law or father no where in sight.
To say Purvi was scared would be an understand.She was frightened out of her wits ! Here she was babysitting her mother's boss grand-daughter when she heard a man shouting at her from behind.
"Answer me dam it !"Purvi jumped and slowly turned around hugging a sleeping Aneesa as if trying to protect her.
All of Arjun's anger faded . He was to lost watching this 'angel' in front of him wearing a lost white shirt paired with a black skinny jeans.
He could have tell she was nervous by her heaving chest and watery eyes.He covered the distance between them and in a low and soft voice asked this one question for what seemed like the third time for the night,"Who are you? "

Thats the end of the Prologue hope y'all liked it ! 😃
Feel free to like ,comment and criticize !
And do let me know if to continue 😊

P.S Guys please leave suggestions if you would like .. I really love and appreciate them and will use them as best as I can
😳

Edited by ArViAshaRocks - 12 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

72

Views

16.3k

Users

32

Likes

185

Frequent Posters

alicia. thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#2
Character Sketch

Purvi Deshmukh

Currently a law student raised by her single mother . Extremely beautiful, bubbly person . Believes one day she will find her prince charming and prays to God that he is just as good looking as John Abraham , her Bollywood crush.

Teju Deshmukh

The exact opposite of Purvi.Although knowing that she is from a middle class family, she still demands a lot from her mother.She is very cruel to Purvi because she thinks everyone likes Purvi and her mother only gives her attention to Purvi.

Archana Deshmukh

Mother of Purvi and Teju . Though Indian at heart she is a very modern woman . She is the personal assistant to Divya Sagar Kirloskar , owner of Aashna Designs . She works very hard in order to provide for both her daughters and herself.

Arjun Kirloskar

A business student. Comes from a very wealthy family in fact one the wealthiest families currently in New York. Although very handsome and not to mention extremely fit, he can care less about relationships. To him a girl uses a guy to boast that she can have a boyfriend and a guy just uses a girl for his physical needs. But he knows somewhere out there , his mother has already found an angel for him.

Sanya Maholtra

Older sister of Arjun . Married happily to Sidd Maholtra and recently welcomed an angel in their life by the name of Aneesa Maholtra . She also hopes her brother finds his life partner soon so he can be happy after all the grief he has been through in his past.

Sidd Maholtra

Husband of Sanya and brother in law of Arjun and is extremely happy with his life . Runs a successful fabric company and could not have done this without his two angels , Sanya and Aneesa.

Divya Sagar Kirloskar

Father of Arjun and Sanya . Owner of 'Aashna Designs' a company which was named after his late wife.Hopes to live to see Arjun bringing home his true love in the house as the Kirloskar Bahu .

Aneesa Kirloskar

Seven month year old child of Sanya and Sidd . She will also be playing cupid for a certain two people :P


P.S new characters will be added as the story progresses... 😃

And thanks for LIKING ! 😃

Edited by ArViAshaRocks - 12 years ago
alicia. thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#3
>>Index

Prologue/Teaser + Character Sketch - Page 1

Edited by ArViAshaRocks - 12 years ago
Never_alone1 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#4
My law sis 🤗 thank u so much dear, this ss is indeed different frm others and nice start and plz plz update soon btw what u and avni are not updating ur both ss ? Hope u guys update it soon n love u dear :)
alicia. thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#5

Originally posted by: Ashvikfan

My law sis 🤗 thank u so much dear, this ss is indeed different frm others and nice start and plz plz update soon btw what u and avni are not updating ur both ss ? Hope u guys update it soon n love u dear :)


aww thanks law sis <33 😳

😆 As soon as i find Avni . I promise we will update 😊
AnAvidReader thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#6
OMG aliii...LOVED the prologue and Character sketch...
Ohh purvi babysitting arjun's neice and both falling in love wid each other ..awesome..😛😛eagerly waiting for chapter 1..😃
Rituuu.. thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#7
Superlike the prologue and character sketch..Plz update soon...:)
arvifan1 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#8
its awesme dear! Interestng story...Plz update the 1st chapter 😊 and plz do pm me when u update...eagerly waitng 😳
ParinConnects thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#9
Omg...awesme...lvd d prologue and character sketch too
Pls pm me whenever u update

Btw post the pic of d baby na
arjunpurvixo thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#10
Awh, you beat me to it on a FF about baby reuniting Arvi :(

But love the concept! Really cute (:

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".