When Two Worlds Collide//Arvi FF//Ch. 5, Pg. 14

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Sheetal

@arjunpurvixo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: arvifan1
awesome update 😊 wow arjun is so protective of purvi..😳 and loved teju's nature...mischievious 😳 plz do update soon...and plz pm me...eagerly waitng 4 next chapter 😊

Thank you for your comment 😳 and will do. . .

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Sheetal

@arjunpurvixo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: ashvikluverrr
OMG sheets..i was waiting for this from soo long..!!
Thanku for updating first of all..🤗
Loved it..!!
Ohh she broke up with onir..finally..she's free now..😛
umm I m loving purvi and ovi's part..😆
and Yay they are not criminals...they fight for innocent ppl..😛
ohh Arjun is scared and is being protective for purvi..how cute..😳
And he gives her teddy..soo sweet..cant get enough of this mysterious gang leader Arjun..and this sassy purvi..!!
ahh and last part..gunfire..cant wait for chapter 4..!
Plz Update soon..😳

Sorry I took so long to update :( Aw, thank you for your LONG LONG comment <3 But you shouldn't have done this when you have boards Jags 😈 Unless they're over, then that's okay 😛 and nooo, my Arjun can't be a criminal 😳 and well if he's in a gang, of course he'll be scared for our Purvi's safety 😳 and yeah I just. . . I had to add in the gun fire 😆

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peachesnplums

@peachesnplums

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Sheetu 🤗 Thanks a lot for the update!!

Loved how Purvi told Onir off (and broke off with him, thank god! He's such a loser here)

Do you understand the message or do I have to spell it out for you!"

😆

"She doesn't like haddas or haddis," Arjun said with a smile.

Lol, me neither!!

The carnival sounds so much fun...am reminded of my school days now, and also the state fair. Games, ferris wheel, I'm surprised they didn't eat 😛

So is there a gang fight in the carnival, or does it have to do with Arjun's gang vs. Ovi's father's projects.

Love sassy Purvi and Teju! keep it up :)

Edited by peachesnplums - 12 years ago

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Sheetal

@arjunpurvixo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: peachesnplums
Sheetu 🤗 Thanks a lot for the update!!

Loved how Purvi told Onir off (and broke off with him, thank god! He's such a loser here)

Do you understand the message or do I have to spell it out for you!"

😆

"She doesn't like haddas or haddis," Arjun said with a smile.

Lol, me neither!!

The carnival sounds so much fun...am reminded of my school days now, and also the state fair. Games, ferris wheel, I'm surprised they didn't eat 😛

So is there a gang fight in the carnival, or if it has to do with Arjun's gang vs. what Ovi's father's projects.

Love sassy Purvi and Teju! keep it up :)

Aw omg I'm really tired so I'll just stop blabbing and keep my reply short 🥱 Peachuuu 🤗 Glad you liked it hehe 😳 I've always wanted to go to a carnival like this. . . I think you can see where I got inspired hint hint Spring Break hint hint pier ;) and I still haven't decided who will shoot the gun 🤔 But this is going to lead to some MAJOR Arvi cuteness <3

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Sheetal

@arjunpurvixo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: shreya2094
sheetal i cant tell u he much i liked this one...it was too good👏
there r many things tht i like in this part...to strt with ,the way she told onir off and broke up wid him was vry nice...and then the way she was defending arjun whenevr ovi said anything against him was really sweet😳i even like the 'purvi-teju'bonding a lot😆and then there was arjun and purvi going round the carnival and arjun winning the teddy fr purvi😳and then hw she wudnt accept the jacket frm arjun just coz she already had so much stuff frm him tht was unreturnd😆😆and ofcourse the dance...i think fr me tht ws the best parti also loved the concern arjun had fr purvi and hw she was trying to assure him tht she wud b safe in his company😳
well i think i hv mentioned a lot here😆😆in short all i wud wanna say is tht i totally loved this part...plz update soon😛😃

Thank you Shreya! Wow, what a sweet comment! Everyone seems to love Purvi telling Onir off ;) LOL well it's always calm before the storm. . . so I had to add some Arvi calmness 😛 Aw, I'm so glad you liked it! I'll try to update soon :)

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Huma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

sheetu lovely lovely Update 👍🏼 aww protective Arjun lovin it & purvi n teju bonding is really Cute w8ing for Next part update soon n do PM plejjj 😃

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Sheetal

@arjunpurvixo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: Huma-
sheetu lovely lovely Update 👍🏼 aww protective Arjun lovin it & purvi n teju bonding is really Cute w8ing for Next part update soon n do PM plejjj 😃

Aw thank you :D And I'll try to remember to, but am very bad at PMs :( I will always post in AT though when I update and try to keep it on first page so you'll be able to see 😛 Glad you liked it!