ArVi FF: Meant to be together - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
Awesome πŸ˜›

I like the part where Arjun's POV is highlighted in blue which makes it easier for us as we read.

Very well started especially the description of the mother land 😊.

Arjun and Tej's convo was simple and short. She knows him so well and how he's even feeling at this present moment although he thought that had hide from Tej about his love.

Well as much as he wants time to move slowly but seems like it's not helping him at all😲

Oh so as expected, the tragedy happened to Dr Onir Dutt😭. As he's going upstairs to see her, my heart goes tadap tadap.

Awww so much of 'if'. That itself shows how much he loved and still loves her😳. Seems like he's not going to let destiny to change his Purvi.

The way you described Arjun's turmoil s d Purvi's expression is superb. Even I got shaken for a moment.

A very beautiful poem especially the last part where it says "why even after being so close to water body, our thirst doesn't die" - only we human being can go through such an experience. That's how beautifully God has created us. The heart will stop loving the day the heart beat stops!

Looking forward for your next chapter.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Huma lovely update by your friend...Thank her for writing so good and thank you for updating soo nicely...and ya thanks for pm...update next part faster...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG..loved this chapter..πŸ˜›
onir dead..i figured that out when i read part 1..
arjun is back to India..his home..
tej and arjun best friends..ahh good..atleast we have someone who cares about him..

so in your story,arjun thinks dat purvi doesnt love him, he said that his love is one sided..but lets wait for purvi's POV...the way she hugged him, i think she also loves him and he doesnt know..
loved ur story so far..eagerly waiting for the next part..
ahh and your poem was superb..
'kabhi paas hokar bhi itne dur kyu hote hai
kyu dil se yeh mohabbat kam nahi hoti" loved it..πŸ‘πŸ‘
you are a great writer..πŸ˜›
thankyou for updating..😊
do update soon..!!
huma di muahzz again for postingπŸ€—
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: latika_AshVik

why there is onir...πŸ˜”

anyways the ff is amazing

and first part was really interesting...!

great start by ur friendπŸ‘πŸΌ

thanx huma for sharing this with us...😊 and say thanx to ur friend for writing this ff on my behalf...😊

m eagerly waiting for the next part..!πŸ˜‰



LOL latika y there is onir exactly dat was my first reaction πŸ˜† but then i read her Title *Meant To be together*πŸ˜›

& i totally agree widh u awl she's Amazing writer esply her Beautiful poem touched my heart❀️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Beautiful poem in the end!

So our ArVi are sad in the beginning - hope it means better times ahead

Was Purvi in love with Onir too, I'd love to see her point of view soon. Her tears, Arjun can never see Purvi cry. He will always the nice guy, heart goes out to him in the FF too. These lines just give a glimpse of how much he loves Purvi --

If I had a wish to make then would have asked for her happiness, if I had an ocean full of love then it would have been just for her, If dreams were to come true then would have just dreamt of her smile, If my Life was a gift then would have gave it to Onir just for her

I wonder if there is an Ovi in this story...liked Teju's portrayal.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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woow such a nice update...
Dr onir is dead... dont understand to be happy or sad.. πŸ˜†πŸ˜• anyways im happy...
now arjun's love is onesided...😭 eagerly waiting for the next part...
thanks Huma di for posting on her behalf...

loved the poem a lot...
the last line was outstanding...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i really liked this story...its vry different...cudnt imagine arvi story in this manner...its really vry interesting...awesome writingπŸ‘i specially loved the poems😊
thanks a lot fr posting it here on ur frnds behalf humaπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18

hello friends here is the next part of my FF, i hope you like it. From now onward Purvi's POV will also be shared. On a side not its been a week since Onir died and because Purvi was not coming out of the shock Arjun was called back to India.

Part 3

Arjun's POV

I could not stay there anymore, it was suffocating me, my eyelids were becoming heavy due to stoping the tears that were fighting their way to come out of my eyes, my heart was thumping so fast and loudly that I feared everyone might heart it. I can't control anymore, I need to pour out my feelings, scream on the top of my lungs, vent out my frustration. I rushed out and drove my car to the place which was my favourite place, the place which was unknown to everyone except for Purvi; it was a beautiful lake surrounded by nature; the chirping of the birds, the rays of sun kissing the surface of water, the winds playing with the leaves and making them sway. I kneeled down and let a roar escape my mouth, tears rolled down my eyes and met with the surface of wet soil as it immersed with them living no sign that I had shed them. I sat there for don't know how many ours, the chirping of the bird could not be heard, rays of sun was replaced by moon light and the wind could not be felt only cold atmosphere; silence took over the place and I let the silence consume me for some times silence is what makes a person strong.

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Purvi's POV

He left me once again and I knew where he went. Uncle, aunty, aai, baba all were consoling me and asking me to face the reality. I had faced the reality but it's really difficult to live with that reality; I needed him by my side to comfort me and care for me like he used to. What had changed in our relationship that he was so distant, so cold. I cannot bear his silence for it was killing me, why did he push me away from the hug? I needed some answers and only Arjun could give me those answers.

"Aai I want to be alone for some time, can I please go somewhere, where it's just me and silence" I asked and was awarded by a positive response.

I drove to the place which was his favourite and only I knew about it. We shared everything with each other, Arjun, Onir and Teju di were best of friends and we grew up together since our parents were business partners cum friends. Ashna aunty and Aai were childhood friends, just like me and Arjun; being the youngest one I was pampered a lot by them but Arjun never pampered me it was me who would pamper him since DK uncle was very strict with him poor ArjunπŸ˜†, he would call me a tomboy and i would always fight with him but still we were the besties. Along the path of time our friendship was lost, he left me, he left his doll how could he? To find my answers I reached that place and saw him sitting on the edges of steps, he loved silence for it made him strong he believed; while I hated silence for it made me weak.

"Arjun" I whispered and placed my hand on his shoulder.

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Arjun's POV

I could feel her presence around me, there was a sudden satisfaction in the place; I was not wrong as I heard her say my name and place her hand on my shoulder. I turned around to look at her and could only find questions in her eyes. Questions whose answer I could never give.

We sat there by each other's side after 3 years. It had been ages since we sat like that, with each other letting our heartbeat to feel the emotions and letting our eyes to communicate. The quietness had to be broken before my eyes spoke the real truth.

"How come you are here" I asked breaking the peace between us.

"Why did you leave me?" she asked with utter sincerity, hurt and truthfulness. She missed me but if only I could tell her the truth.

"Your husband became a doctor, so the company had to be handled by me and so I left" i said as a matter of fact oopps lie.

"You suck at lying. I will wait for you to tell me the truth. Anyways remember how I found out about this hidden place of yours" she caught my lie and so easily hid her hurt by diverting the topic.

But the topic made me nostalgic, how can I not forget that day when she came to know or one can say she forced me to show my secret place. I looked at her and saw a devilish grin on her face which was so Purvi like; she had entered the flashback mode and was remembering that day.

"I was 11 then and can't believe that I was actually scared of you" memories I tell you, they are like relief from the boring busy life.

"You were never scared of me, in fact you never knew how to hide things from me" she said so normally that it made me wonder did she never notice my feelings for her or she purposely ignored them.

"There was no need for me to hide things from you, you knew me so well but that day I saw the bratty Purvi" I said teasingly and both of us burst into fits of giggles as we traveled back in time to cherish those moments.

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Flashback.

"Arjun where did you go after bunking school" little Purvi asked him like a strict little dadi ma. One hand on her waist and other hand holding a phone, which she held to scare Arjun.

"Purvi doll, I went to meet my friend he was in hospital", Arjun said faking an act which was really bad.

"Arjun never become an actor in life, I am calling DK uncle and telling him that you bunked the school" Purvi started pressing some numbers when Arjun held her hand and pleaded not to tell his dad.

"You are a gundi (don), I will tell you the truth but you won't tell dad about the bunking. I went to my secret place because I forgot to do my homework. Can I now go mere papa ki chamchi "

"you have to show me that place else DK uncle will remove all you secret" Purvi winked at Arjun who just smiled at her like a jerk and agreed to show her the place.

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"And then you showed me this place and I fell in love with it" Purvi said

"Yes and then you always accompanied me like glue. You were so chipku" I said and that earned me a slap once again so like Purvi.

It felt great to see her laughing like before, I became more firm on my decision to not let destiny change my Purvi; this was just the beginning because now her life will be full of happiness. I will fulfil all her dreams, as a true friend and help her come out of this phase. My Purvi, my doll will live her life like before.

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Purvi's POV.

I was smiling or one can say laughing, I have never laughed so much in these 3 years. My smile was like a gift from Arjun because only he can bring my smile back. I was not sure if this is right or not, but then nothing could be more right than this. Arjun was back and if I had lost a friend then I gained a lost friend once again. Life never stops then why we should, time moves on and if we don't move then we will be left only with remorse. And as Arjun always said "Better live then regret".

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Life is knowledge only if you can understand it

Life is simple if you smile at it.

So understand your life and smile at it

Living will be so much easier then.

(the poem n quotes r from my personal collection and not stolen😳)

And as the SRK says " jeelo muskaro kyuki kya pata Kal ho na ho"

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Okay end of my part, i tried to ignore the sad bit here because the first 2 parts were very sentimental. I hope you guys don't have any problem with my way of writing. I write it from ArVi's POV to make the situation look more real but if you want me to write it as a normal story without any POV then please do tell me.

P.S- One more question do you want me to write ArVi's flashback and their childhood memories or just one flashback of how Arjun left? Do you want me to show their childhood days and their bond like the flashbacks i showed in this part or no?

Thank you for reading

With Love XXXπŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey loved the update XXX..πŸ˜‰
Great one.. So purvi was always comfortable with arjun..
i want to see the whole arvi memories and their bond along with the reason why arjun left and how purvi married onir so pls update it full..
thanks for such a lovely post.. pls update soo...
thanks huma di for sharing such a beautiful ff...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
LOVED THIS CHAPTER..
heyy plz we also want their flashbacks..cute little ArVi..
this part was very good..!!!
thanks for updating dear..!!
looking forward to your next update..
and u are a great writer..πŸ‘πŸ‘
your poems and quotes are superb..u r a terrific writer..dats all i can say..!!
Huma di *muahzz* for posting..πŸ˜›πŸ€—
Edited by ashvikluverrr - 12 years ago

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