ArVi FF: Meant to be together - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Umm.. I went thru all d Parts today itself n I must say m in love wid dis ff as I cud really connect to it well n also its all real !
I loved hw u strtd wid.. Arjun's pov abt purvi... Haye ! It itself showed hwmuch n hw deeply he loves purvi.. His determination to gv purvi her part of happiness bk.. His care fr hr,his fears regardin her.. All wer brilliantly shown !

I lovd d bond Arjun-Teju shares.. Both knows each othr inside out n thts d beauty of Friendship.. U nees nt express evrythn.. D othr one wud herslf/hs self understn it..

I ws initially confused regardin purvi's feelings fr Arjun As she ws onir's wife buh her reactions towards Arjun wer tln a diff story ! She's always at peace whn she's wid him ! Jus a mention of Arjun's name.. U wud c hr smiling whole heartidly !

Purvi askn Arjun abt hs purity ws a cute one.. Hr face literally fell whn Arjun exclaimed tht its vry normal thr n it brightend d vry moment ehm he cleared dat he ws jus pullin hr leg ! Hw sweet is dis...

I evn lovd teju's connection wid purvi.. She admitted dat she neva tried understndn purvi's flns towards Arjun.. Evn teju hd neva seen purvi's dat genuine smile whn she use to b wid Onir..

Alas purvi's heart accepted somewea tht it loves Arjun buh thn y did she marry Onir???
Wht actly hpnd??? Wht made Arjun leave hs doll???

Those heart vs Mind toks wer freakin Adorable :) n plz continue givin d pov's coz its strengthenin d base of d story n m lovin readin Dem !

Huma.. Say a big tnx 😃 To ur frn tht she thot of sharin it wid us n also tnx 😃 To u tht ur postin it here :)
She's really an amazin writer n does masters in displayin emotions.. :)Evn her poetry.. Is flawless !


"If I had a wish to make then would have asked for her happiness, if I had an ocean full of love then it would have been just for her, If dreams were to come true then would have just dreamt of her smile, If my Life was a gift then would have gave it to Onir just for her" M literally dead aftr readin it.. Dis is a master one !


Wud love to read more of hr..
Do pm me whn u update nxt !
Buddy req sent :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
this was simply amazing part👏 👏

chaata(slap) girl🤣 it reminded me of asha's slaps...😃

awww purvi thought that arjun was about to kiss her😳...purvi loves arjun yayyy😛

ahhh waiting for their flashback scenes and their office scenes...

great part👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Loved your part Huma...Thanks for updating...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
it was awesome. Loved Arjun & Purvi here. Also loved Teju's feelings towards Purvi. I think Teju will be a lot of help in uniting ArVi.😊 Please update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Superb😛

It's good to know that things were getting back to normal. Wow time really flies as its been a month since Onir's death. Looks like Arjun has still not muster his courage to be his normal self to Purvi . It's funny how his conscious chided that as though after some days he will tell her the truth 'darpok Kirloskar '... A lot if people hate it as that is reality and they're running away from it. Thank god he's going to be in India.

Arjun's expression in front of his dad is very well portrayed. Good for Purvi to work so that she can overcome the current situation.

Purvi' POV

She's rest assured that her Arjun will be there to make things easy for her. Truth is slowing resurfacing when she realized that the real her is hidden underneath the dress she wore. So when Purvi heard Arjun's name, it brought her a smile.😛

Tej's POV

Tej thank god for sending Arjun into Purvi's life once again. Here she was trying to figure out was it because he was her friend or was there something more to the bright smile by Purvi. Ok at least she understood that she failed to notice her sister's feelings although she knew about Arjun's.😊

Purvi's POV (2nd time)

Wow dying to talk to Arjun. That's a good sign.😉 I like the way she said to herself she wants to create her own identity. So she ordered Arjun to meet her at Juhu beach. I'm so happy😃.

Of course it will be peaceful and surreal as she's meeting her soul partner😳. Hmmm, Purvi being melodramatic!!!! So when she heard his voice she was sarcastic as being tired of his hide and seek. So much rights she has on him.

Arjun's POV

Finally his mind won over his heart! I liked the way he was admiring her from a distance before calling out her name and getting a rude shock.

Yes, the khadoos AK is back when he told her that she's working under him and will not tolerate her stupid behaviour which only earned him a slap from Purvi😆

So another slap when he called her a chaata😆. It's really funny when Purvi doubt about Arjun's virginity and that too he only realised when he saw her blush🤣 Oh Arjun how dumb can you be...😉

I loved it 'I am you, you are me'. Oh Purvi felt hurt but control herself when Arjun told her that all those were normal in London. Here it actually shows how much she loves him but is not aware of it. So he ran away from her again but for how long?😲

Purvi' POV (3rd time)

Purvi unable to decipher why was she hurt by his mischievous act and what made her think Arjun was going to kiss her! So her heart revealed the truth that she loves Arjun😳

The answer to your poem is that it's definitely love for her but he's feeling guilty as to how he's going to reveal it to her as he doesn't want her to think he's taking advantage of the situation. He always felt it was a one sided love and doesn't know about Purvi's feelings for him. Soon, both going to realize they actually love each other.

The heart versus mind talks are good as that is actually what we always experience . Thanks in advance for the FB scenes.

Onir's death doesn't seem to have much effect on Purvi as she's more concern about Arjun.

Please update soon as its very interesting.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I know I had posted my views once but after reading it again...I couldn't help it. 😳 It was so awesome. Arjun is still scared of his dad. Awww...that is so cute. So Purvi is slowly recovering, that is good news. The way their emotions-Arjun, Purvi & Teju's were portrayed...it was just superb.👏 Loved it. Please Please Please update soon. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello i am back with my next part and hope you enjoy it as it is my favorite part, and my personal favorite till now. I have included small small flashbacks which hopefully you will like😳. do like and comment.

PART 5

Purvi's POV

It was a bright morning today, the sun was at its full glory and the sky was crystal clear; depicting my life right now. I opened the curtains to let the rays of sun enter my dull and dark room me and let the warm air immerse me. I Purvi Dutt was joining the office and it is my first day today I proudly claimed to the walls and all the other abstract things in my room I know you have officially lost it but can you please keep it a secret and not let the world know about your mental imbalance I ignored what my heart was saying as I was in no mood to fight with my inner self. After that day once again my best friend had gone to play his ignore-ignore game, and I was going to meet him at the office which made my heart skip a bit. It made my go into a state of confusion as to why my best friend was so icy with me, or why was he behaving as if he is hiding something from me ohh yeah it's you who need to hide your emotions and not let him know that you love him, I am out of this choice of yours because it is very stupid when is my heart going to agree to any of decision and why does it always have to go astray from the main topics. But as always my heart was correct, I hid my feelings 3 years ago and even now I am doing the same stupidity but then I think of Arjun I mean why would he leave me if ever loved me? I always believed that he loved me, and that's the reason why I had waited for him before going with the marriage. I entered the shower and let the hot water take away all my confusion and pains as I entered my flashback world.

Flashback:

It was Purvi's 17th birthday; the whole house was decorated grandly, from flowers to eating arrangement each and everything was specially ordered as per Purvi's liking. Since morning Purvi did not come down and nor did she meet anyone which was making Archana and Manav and everyone worried; the guest had already started to arrive and all of Purvi's friends were asking for the birthday girl. Teju decided to plead Purvi and maybe scold her for her inacceptable behaviour.

"Purvi what is wrong with you, it's your birthday everything is as per your wish and you are not even coming out of your room", Tej knocked on the door but was awarded with no response.

"You better come out now Purvi else I will tell dad to stop your pocket money"

"I don't want to celebrate the stupid birthday, Arjun forgot my b'day and he did not wish I am not coming down" Purvi screamed from her bedroom loud enough for all the guests to hear and pass each other a shocked glance.

Due to her stubbornness, the party was cancelled and all the guests were asked to have the dinner before they leave.

"Teddy Arjun I am very angry with your stupid friend, he did not wish me and look its 11:50 pm now. I will not talk to him for the rest of my life" Purvi cried silently as she hugged the teddy and cuddled up into a ball. After few minutes there was a knock at the window which scared Purvi and she started to scream but before she could do so, a pair of hand closed her mouth and cornered her to a wall.

"shhh it's me Arjun" he said as Purvi opened her big dove shaped eyes to look at her best friend who was looking like a thief right now.

"Get out of my room; I am not talking to you" Purvi said as she pretended to wipe her dried up tears. Arjun held her hand before she could move away from him and bought her closer to him.

"Only 2 minutes left do you want me to wish you or no?" Arjun asked her in a barely audible voice.

"Nobody has wished me yet and who cares for me right?"

"Happy Birthday Doll. You look really beautiful in this pyjama and pigtail of yours, made it especially for your birthday" Arjun said which earned him the famous Purvi slap.

Purvi who was now very happy and in a mood to celebrate her already over birthday hugged Arjun and fabricated as if she was crying.

"I did not celebrate the day and nobody gave my any present" she said in a baby tone and looked up at Arjun waiting for his present.

"I don't have any present for you" he said which actually made tears roll down from her eyes. Arjun lightly placed a kissed on her cheeks and made her close her eyes. It was the first time that Arjun had kissed her and though he was hesitant he went ahead with it.

"Purvi, open your eyes slowly" he said.

The amazement on her face was clearly visible and the twinkle in her eyes lit the whole room up. It was not a costly dress or jewellery but it was a small plate that had gajar halva placed like a cake with candles on it, a box filled with puri saag, malai kofta, paratha and a bottle full of aam ras.

"Since morning I was in kitchen trying to cook your favourite dish, hope you like it" Arjun said sheepishly as he placed the food on the table.

"Arjun it's the best gift I ever had" Purvi planted a kiss on his cheek and hugged him tightly.

I came out of the bathroom and stood in front of the mirror trying to drown myself in the world of flashback, but I heard aai calling me and so I got ready and immediately rushed downstairs.

"Eat your breakfast; Arjun must be here any time soon. I told him to be with you for few days" aai said, and in my heart I started to jump as now I can be with Arjun.

I was eating my toast when heard a car horn and knowing its Arjun I gobbled the toast down my throat and ran out.

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Arjun's POV

Early in the morning Archana aunty had called to tell me to take care of Purvi and make her feel comfortable at the office as well as take her to office with me for a couple of weeks. Now that was too much to ask, here I am trying not to get intimate with my dead friend's wife and on other hand my whole family is pushing me more towards her even your heart is doing bhangra agree yes I know you are doing bhangra, but I am the mind and I think practically not emotionally like youwhich decision of your is correct huh, if you had listened to me then by now little brains would have been born, I mean junior Arjun and purvi. Ok stop that's it for today, I told my mind and heart to be quite while I drove to Purvi's place. After few minutes I saw her running towards me like little kid, her mouth full of food, her purse in one hand and other hand trying to hold the dupatta. Messy. Yes that's my Purvi, never on time and always in rush and yeah not to forget always in a chaotic look.

"I know I look really untidy, but I was late so I had to run and you know how stupidly I run when my hands are full" she pouted like a small child and made her way towards the car seat.

"Purvi you better be on time from tomorrow I am your boss not your driver" I told her strictly but as she always said I am a bad actor.

I turned the radio on and a beautiful song started to play which made us nostalgic.

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Woh Pehli Baar Jab Ham Mile Hathon Mein Haath Jab Ham Chale
Hogaya Yeh Dil Deewana, Hota Hai Pyar Kya Kisne Jaana
Teri Aankhon Mein Jannat Basa Ke Chala, Teri Zulfo Ki Chauv Mein Chalta Chala
Tere Naino Mein Chain, Tere Lab Pe Khushi Tujhko Hee Main Mohobbat Bana Ke Chala

"Arjun, meet my sister Purvi", a 5 year old teju said. Arjun held Purvi's tiny hand and Purvi smiled brightly.

"Tej your sister is like a doll can I call her doll" Arjun asked innocently and teju agreed.

Khilti Kaliyon Mein Dhundhu Bas Tere Disha
Main Na Jaanu Hai Aakhir Yeh Kya Karva

"Arjun can I play with your toy gun" purvi asked.

"Yes Purvi you can, by the way I have a gift for you. Close your eyes and come with me" Arjun held Purvi's hand tightly and took her outside in the garden and unfolded the cloth that covered her eyes.

"Wow Arjun roses, it's so lovely" Purvi smiled and Arjun lovingly looked at her.

Tujhe Dekhu To Aaye Lab Pe Khushi
Khuda Na Kare Ho Kabhi Duriya
Woh Pehli Baar Jab Ham Mile Hathon Mein Haath Jab Ham Chale
Hogaya Yeh Dil Deewana, Hota Hai Pyar Kya meine Jaana

"Teju di why is Arjun not here as yet. He should be here by now, I have

not even seen him in school" Purvi asked worriedly, when suddenly

someone screamed in her ears from behind.

"Purvi, you are scared, I was doing my homework so came late" Purvi

turned her face around and faked anger.

"Please Purvi don't be upset with me" Arjun said and started doing sit-

ups which made Purvi smile.

Hogaya Hun Mai Pagal Ab Tere Liye
Tere Bin Dil Bechara Yeh Kaise Jeeye

"Hello Purvi, you reached home safely" Arjun asked sheepishly

"Arjun you dropped me right and I am home safely".

"Ok then bye" Arjun said but on the hand Purvi wanted to talk to him and so before he could hang up she said "You were looking awesome in the prom tonight"

"Thank you even you were looking beautiful in the black sari and it suits you" both kept on chatting the whole night until it was time to get ready for college.

Maine Khoke Hai Chain Payee Tujhme Khushi
Tu Banni Jaane Jaana Meri Zindagi.
Woh Pehli Baar Jab Ham Mile Hathon Mein Haath Jab Ham Chale
Hogaya Yeh Dil Deewana, Hota Hai Pyar Kya Kisne Jaana

"Purvi here is your gift for excelling in dramatics" Arjun gave her a small box wrapped in silk cloth. Purvi opened the wrapper and was amazed by what she saw. It was small gold idol of lord Ganesh which Purvi had asked for few months ago.

"Arjun it is beautiful but it is must be of at least 2000 rupees how you managed the money. I am sure uncle did not give you the money" Purvi asked worriedly.

"Nothing Purvi I always save half of my pocket money and so got this gift" Arjun said. Purvi looked around the room and knew how Arjun got the gift for her.

"You sold your guitar didn't you?" Arjun looked here and there to avoid Purvi and nodded ain yes.

"If you can sell your favourite Laughing Buddha idol to buy me the latest goggles can I not do the same for your smile" Arjun asked her. Purvi was shocked that Arjun knew about it and both burst out laughing and fell flat on the bed.

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The song ended and I returned to the real world and looked at Purvi who i think was thinking about the same thing. She looked at me with the hope that maybe we can once again be the same Arjun and Purvi.

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End of the part. Do criticize and comment and like. The song woh pehli baar is my favorite and so thought of using it for arjun-purvi😳.


Love, XXX

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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
woow..another awesome update..
the flashbacks were too good...
the guitar part was so cute...😳
loved it to the core..
pls update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Superb update Partner..😛
The flash-back were super-cute..
Baby ARJUN n PURVI..Awww..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
u wrote an ff humi 😲
aww baby arjun nd baby purvi
amazing update
continue soon

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