Arvi FF: Standing in the Dark||Chapter 3 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG Sheena

What an amazing update. Wish you were one of the writer in PR. The update on post marriage is simply awesome. I loved the whole paragraph on Wuthering Heights.

Other than those a few other paragraphs that touched me most are as follows:

- betrayal by his best friend and the love of his life. A game played by them which he had been a mere puppet. How true is this sentence. There is no better word to describe the current AK.
- just another lie like the thousand of promises made to him by her.
- paralysed by the truth of marriage deal or mortgage deal?
- was it the same girl who once had proclaimed that nothing matter more to her than being with him. This is the exact question I keep asking myself till to date. One of the loophole that have been left unattended to by the CV
- best part of all is shouldn't you be calling me jeejaji. This is exactly what AK should ask Ms PD in PR and also what he told Ovi that he had NEVER loved her and only treated her as a friend.

Wow talking about divorce and that too the very next day of their marriage.

Best of all is when he said he will bring back the old Purvi. This is exactly what we are yearning for in PR.

Sorry for such a long post but was a good flashback almost coming to 2 months since 5 sept in PR. Please update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
Sheena 🤗

Wonderful OS dear, I'm repeating myself from the AT, but you've captured the anguish of not only ArVi but also ArVians with this story. My favourite bits are below (quotes from your OS are in red) -

During the whole marriage his gaze had never shifted once from his angel who had put up a brave face and had witnessed the whole wedding. Each moment he had hoped for her to stop the wedding but that moment had never arrived.

I loved this - I think all of us wanted Purvi to stop somewhere in between, Arjun was almost daring her with those looks...
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"You shouldn't interfere in our private matters Ms. Purvi Deshmukh." His cold stare had frightened her...He had been ruthless and cruel to her in the past but never indifferent..."Arjun"she had managed to mutter." Shouldn't you call me jeejaji!" he had asked looking straight into her eyes. The tears that she had tried to control so hard had finally brimmed over. He knew that the words uttered by him had hurt her but he knew that this hurt was needed.

Ooh the cool disdain, love it. How much AK would hurt to say this to Purvi but he'll say it nonetheless, just to drive his point home

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"Love! Do you even know the meaning of it!" he had said, hatred emanating from each of his words.
"I have loved you since I knew what the word means! And you ask me if I know what love is!"
"Ohh...So your definition of love is ruining the happiness of the person you claim to love."

I would love for Arjun to give Ovi a piece of his mind - wish for such a scene in PR even now
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"No! You are not! If you were my best friend you would have respected my feelings...you wouldn't have played with them. You would have been happy in my happiness. Best friends don't do what you have done Ovi. Best friends don't make a deal out of each other. And as far as this marriage is concerned, it's going to last only till I get done with the divorce procedures!"

Thank god he's thinking about the legal separation already. Even if the judge asks them to stay together for 6 months or something, I hope they live separately.
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If you had ever loved me..." "Don't even dare to complete that Purvi," he had shouted, stopping her midway, "you have already done what you wanted to and now it's my turn!"

Payback time, beware Purvi!
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She had not just hurt him but had also ended up destroying her own happiness and that was what pained him most.

Reminds of AK's vote appeal at ZRA, Jitna pyaar ye Arjun Kirloskar apni Purvi se kerta hai, utna shayad khud se bhi nahin kerta

Please continue this as and when you get a chance (hopefully soon)

Two thumbs up!!


Edited by peachesnplums - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
sheena ...wow girl that was an awsm OS...do continue dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Omg loved it!!! Love how you show Arjun's feelings, that he can forgive her for what he did to her but not for what she did to herself!
Loved it because what you said was the exact truth one day Purvi is going to realize what she did was wrong and how she wanted to make everyone else happy so she forgot about her own happiness!
Do continue dear if you plan to!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
Loved this so much... great job! You portrayed Arjun so well... the writers for PR should take note of somethings from you 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I loved your OS!!!! It had amazing emotion to it and I loved how the whole thing was told in Arjun's POV. It was amazing from beginning to end. I hope I get to read more from you!!!! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG sheena u r a very talented writer... ur OS was freaking awesome... u portrayed the emotions and feelings of arjun so well... i want this arjun in the show also... great work... superlike from my side... and the lines in the beginning were superb..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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you are a really gud writer sheena ...loved your OS a lot...just like the prev ones...plz do continue 😊it was really a very nice update👏😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Angelfreak_96

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Really nice and beautiful loved it a lot...

The only girl for whom my heart has ever beaten is Purvi.

Loved this line a lot...I'm really speechless..words could never define how well u wrote this OS...All I say is hats of to you Sheena...👏
Thanks for PM...😃..and do PM me for ur future updates...

Thank you so much Neha...🤗🤗
That is one of my favorite lines as well...How I wish for Arjun to say this to Ovi...!!! I wrote it as an OS so I have no clue regarding how I am going to update this!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: WanderingBeauty

Thank you so much Neha...🤗🤗
That is one of myfavoritelines as well...How I wish for Arjun to say this to Ovi...!!! I wrote it as an OS so I have no clueregardinghow I am going to update this!!!

Why???What does OS mean??Sorry,I'm not familiar with all the terms..Plz plz plzz do update..

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