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MagicalPari

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Hey Soumya, Thanks for PM. My exams r there till 17 Nov. so I will comment later. Pls PM me so it will be easy for me to find updates. Thank U.

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NadaCinta

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Sorry for the delay on my feedback. Such a sweet post. I loved the whole scenario. Thinking of past memories between Manav and Archana which is being missed.

Please update soon.😊

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Soumya

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Posted: 13 years ago

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GUYS I maynt able 2 updt my all post 4 a long while aftr dis week. So m trying 2 updt it at hurried manner. Plz 4gv me 4 dis.
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Chapter-5
PART-1
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Archana: i am getting late. Varsha z is waiting for her at de movies, while looking 4 a auto in the rain wid an umbrella whn a car stops infront of her nd Archana gets really scared.
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Manav who is wid his sister nd Varsha r waiting 4 Archana. Archana who z scared as she doesn't knw who it might be, the person rolls down his window nd archana is relieved 2 see her boss Ajit.
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Archana: Sir, Aap
Ajit: Hah, Mein. actually i just cm back 4m a meet nd was just heading home and he saw her walking.
Archana: actually Sir, i was looking for a cab, as she has to go smwhr becoze her sister z waiting for her.
Ajit: den i'll drop u and i'll nt tk no 4 an answer as he'll nt allow her 2 be out in de dark alone.
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Archana knew dat she'll feel safe with her boss nd agrees, while driving Ajit z just staring at Archana but whn Archana looks at him, Ajit looks away.
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Ajit: where were u heading Archana
Archana: sir, i was heading to the movies as I had promised my sister Varsha dat I would watch a movie wid her.
Ajit: I see, dat's nyc. next time if u need a ride home den please do let me knw as he doesn't want her to be going out dis late at nyt alone.
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Dey reach 2 de movies nd Archana thanks him nd she leaves. while Archana z walking Ajit is looking at her while smiling at the same time.
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Manav is standing wid his sister nd Varsha who is thnkng in his head why Archana hasn't shown up yet.
Manav: why hasn't Archana shown up yet, i hope she z cmng becoze if she zn't den wht z de point of him here.
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Archana walks in nd Manav z happy to see her. Archana see's Manav nd gets really shy. Jyoti nd Varsha cn see de way both look at each other nd think dat smthng is up nd dey all get in.
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While watching de movie, Manav ends up sitting by Archana. seeing smthng scary on screen Archana holds onto Manav's hand, Manav looks at her but den Archana takes her hand off aftr realizing what she z doing.
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On de other hand 6 rows dwn Raj, Prem, Sanjana & Naina heer and r sitting watching de movie. Raj keeps on trying 2 mk moves on Naina. Naina gets mad nd pinches Raj on his arm nd Raj says ouch, nd so does manav.
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Manav thinks Archana must of gotten mad nd decided nt to bug her anymore. Aftr de movies ended all strated 2 walk out. Manav nd Raj end up bumping into each other bt don't see each other as bfr Manav could turn around to see him Jyoti took him along.
Both Raj nd Manav could feel a connection.
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Later dat night
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Both Manav nd Archana were thnkng abt each other. Jyoti and Rani go into there Dada's room to see him glazing into the sky, nd Varsha & Vaishalli go into Archana's room to see her singing and hugging her teady bear which she has kept with her for 21 years.
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Meher went to the mall wid a couple of friends she tries on a nyc lengha whch she likes as Karva Chaut z coming up smthng she has nvr seen in her life but was told by her sister that it'll be a big celebration tom and as she doesn't have any Indian clothes she went to do sm shopping, as she saw a really nyc lengha.
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Archana who has cm wid 2 of her friends r also looking at lengha's. Archana didn't want to cm as it z a big mall 4 rich high people bt was forced by her friends.
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Both Naina nd Archana endup wearing the sm lengha which dey both lyk. Naina decides 2 buy it bt Arcahna seeing de price decides 2 put it back. Naina see's it and feels bad so she decides to buy it nd tells de lady to lower de price nd tells her its nt for 600 but 250 in which Archana gets happy nd buys it.
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While walking Archana hears 2 of de casher talking abt Naina gvng money to her nd Arcahna goes to ask her who it was. Den Arcahna follows Naina.
Naina who is having problems carrying her bag ends up dropping de bags nd Arcahna helps her, Naina see's her.
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Naina: 10q s Archana: No I should be de 1 to be saying thanks Naina z looking all puzzled Archana: de lengha nd paying for it. Naina: oh yeah its noting
Archana: it's noting u paid 4 my lengha that's a lot for people lyk us. I need to pay u back.
Naina: no its okay, I don't want any money bt how about we become friends nd whn evr I need favor I'll ask for it.
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Archana: sounds gd, Hi m Archana Karanjkar
Naina: Hi I am Naina Bharaduaj nd I just came 4m London nd m living with my sister in her in laws house, hw abt I drop you home nd bfr dat hw about we get sm coffee.
Archana: sure why nt dat would be nyc.
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4 a while both Archana nd Naina started to see each other nd got to know each other much better. 1 day Archana came over 2 de Mallhotra's house.
Raj who was comng down de stairs was abt see Archana bt Naina tk Archana wid her.
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Precap: Both Naina nd Archana cm out 4m deir houses in sm lehenga looking inhitialy beautiful.

Edited by Soumya02 - 13 years ago

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Neha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

REALLY NICE...and its really sad to know that u can't be updating ur stories...Hope to get ur update soon n pls pm me if u update the next one..will wait for it...😊

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Soumya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

There z a big dhamaka cming up in my next updt whch will mk ew speechless!! So don't miss any1.

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Neha

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Soumya02
There z a big dhamaka cming up in my next updt whch will mk ew speechless!! So don't miss any1.

can't wait for it..Please if possible update soon...Please...

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Soumya

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Chapter-5
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NEXT DAY
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Naina at de chawl waiting 4 Archana, as c got out of the car, pple around de chawl r shocked 2 see her as c z wearing short western clothes. Naina is walking nd all de guys of de chawl r just staring at her nd sm are even getting beaten by there wives 4 staring at her!!
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Naina gets into the house nd drags Archana out of de house as she z walking out. Archana's Aai cms and tell both 2 tk there Aarti nd both do nd leave. Half way driving Archana tells Naina 2 stop by her office as she has some important files 2 pick up nd Naina agrees.
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While waiting Naina gets thirsty nd decides to get sm water. C realizes c doesn't hv a bottle wid her so c goes 2 de small little store right beside de office to get bottle of water. While getting sm water, 2 guys come nd start to harass her.
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Naina tells dem to back off bt dey don't listen. Until Archana cms nd tells dem get lost bfr c calls de cops, nd both of de goons leave.
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Naina: 10x
Arcahan: no problems, bt it wasn't dere fault.
Naina: what do u mean
Archana: I mean if u wear clothes lyk these den guys here'll harass you. Dis isn't London bt India
Naina: but I have nvr in my life weared Indian clothes I mean I hv always weared western clothes.
Archana: but I hv Indian clothes, lets do a mk over
Naina: Huh
Archana: cm wid me
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She takes Naina's hand nd dey both go back 2 Archana's house and mks Naina sit. while Arcahna, Varsha nd Vaishali gve her a mk over. All look at her bt she isn't shown yet. Aai see's her nd says Kisike Nazar na lage.
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Naina looks at herself nd thinks if it is really her nd Archana tells her it is her nd Naina leaves 4m there.
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Back at home
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Every1 is waiting for her, Raj z talking on the phone, Sanjana z giving tea 2 every1 nd prem z drinking tea.
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As Naina who is walking in, her hair down straightened as payals on her leg, wearing a nice fitted pink suit wid a very deep back and is tied wid a ribbon.
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Naina who is trying to handle her is walking in nd Sanjana ends up dropping all of the tea, prem drops his cup, every1 is just shocked as what dey are seeing nd Raj who z talking on the phone nd just has a wide mouth open. All of the servants stop what dey are doing nd Naina who z handling her hair is shown as she is walking in nd everyone is just looking at her. Raj is juts mesmerized seeing her nd can imagine dem married funny little scene.
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Sanjana: is that really you.
Naina: com'on Di of course it is me, how do I look.
Gayatri: lyk a pari
Naina: 10qs
Naina goes to Prem who is telling her she is looking nyc. Raj is just following her when Sanjana pulls his ears telling him to cm wid her.
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Next morning
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Naina calls Archana up, thankng her for her new look nd Archana tells her it is okay as she did it for her. Archana realizes she is late 4 work nd tells Naina dat she'll talk 2 her later on.
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Archana is leaving de house whn a big silver car cms in front of de basti. Archana goes nd is puzzled as she doesn't knw who might be in de car nd what it is doing here. A guy in a white suit, who looks lyk a driver cms out nd tells Archana dat dis car z 4m de company as 4m now on every employee'll be getting picked up 4m there house to work. Archana smiles nd thinks abt Ajit nd hw wonderful he is!! nd she leaves.
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She gets 2 work and starts 2 work, while working on sm papers. Ajit is looking at her 4m his cabin.
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He thinks 2 himself she is de 1 nd also dat it has been 2 years nd still he hasn't been able to tell her hw he feels.
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Archana is invited 4 lunch by Ajit. Dey both go 2 a restaurant. Ajit orders Aloo Chaat wid Puri's which is Arcahana's favourite.
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Archana: sir you lyk Aloo Chaat too, dis is my favourite.
Ajit: I know dat is why I ordered it.
Archana: bt hw did you know that??
Ajit: I heard you telling it to Roshni last time
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Both smile at each other and start to eat.
Manav who is dropping a customers car dat way see's dem both nd gets really mad nd kind of jelous.
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Tym get passed nd both grls devloping feelings 2wards deir soulmets. Naina nw always get looked in Indian dress up. Finaly Karwa Chaut cms.
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Morning
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Prem z sleeping nd starts 2 hear bajhan, which annoys him nd thinks its Sanjana again, until he finds Sanjana sleeping next 2 him nd den both realize who z singing. Along wid de other, Raj also wakes up thnkng who z singing so early in de morning.
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All get out of there rooms nd start to walk towards de puja room. Dey all see Sanjana getting out of de room nd think who might be singing.
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When the girl turns around nd all see it is Naina, Raj smiles, nd Gayatri z shock nd thinks abt how much Naina has changed 4m de day she cm to now.
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Naina goes to Raj for to tk his arti. Sanjana see's dem both nd thinks in her head dat dey r just made 4 each other.
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Part 2 z in below...

Edited by Soumya02 - 13 years ago

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Soumya

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Part-2
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While walking Rahul see's Naina in a totaly different avtar nd gets mesmerized. Naina gives him parsad.
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All the ladies r talking abt wht dey'll be wearing tom 4 Karwa Chaut. Naina tells dem abt de realy nyc lengha she bought 4 tom nd also dat Archana bought de sm Lengha.
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Sanjana: who nd Archana hv de same things i common.
Naina: dats why she is my best friend.
Sanjana: just hope dat evrythng u guys'll lyk'll nt be same den there'll be problems nd both laugh.
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Manav who is driving fast nd is thnkng abt Archana wid Ajit, gets really mad nd starts 2 drivemuch faster. In anger he stops de car.
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Meher comes down after getting ready nd is abt 2 leave 4 college whn she realizes the car's tires r punctures. Meanwhile Rahul cms telling Naina he'll drop her nd Naina agrees bt den stops Rahul telling him dat dey were evr formally introduces so how abt nw dey get formally introduced. Rahul agrees.
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Naina: Hi i am Naina Bharaduaj nd Jaswant Bharaduaj's youngest daughter.
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Rahul: Hi i am Rahul Sharma, Sharma Empires owner nd also de only son.
Naina gets impressed by dat nd dey both sake hands.
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Raj who is talking on de phone see's it 4m far back nd puts de phone down. Naina leaves wid Rahul.
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Raj is talking abt how he cannot lose Naina. On de other hand Manav gets out of his car nd starts 2 talk abt nt losing hope as he'll nt lose Archana at any cost.
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Screen splits, both at the sm tym saying dat there love'll win.
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Later Raj decides 2 join Mallhotra industries nd get success as Rahul whch cn get him close 2 Naina nd it mks all happy wid Naina 2.
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Karwa Chauth Evening
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Naina who is getting ready for de Karwa Chaut function z having problems tying the lace de back of her lengha. C called out 4 Sanjana bt c z busy at kitchen nd cn't hear her voice.
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Raj passes by her room nd see's Naina struggling wid her lace in de back. Naina thinks Sanjana has cm nd asks her 2 help her nd Raj z nt saying anything decides 2 help her. Raj z hesitating 2 touch her bt he does so.
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Naina hears Sanjana's voice 4m de other side. C starts to think dat if Sanju di z there den who z behind her. C turns around see Raj behind her!!
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Raj doesn't say anything turns her around nd helps her tie her lace. Naina nd Raj hv a real passionate moment.
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Naina closes her eyes while Raj z walking away. Naina turns around nd ends up tripping over 1 of toys nd Raj ends up catching her. Dey hv a eye lock moment.
Khudaya khair z playing in background.
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Sanjana comes to see Raj putting Naina's dupatta around her waist nd leaves 4m there, while Naina smiles at back.
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Back at the chawl
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Archana cms out wearing her lengha, everyone starts to praise her alot nd Manav who invited by Archana 4 function, mesmorized at her look.
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Later Archana went market 2 fetch sm swts bt harssed by sm guys, who beatean up black nd blue by Manav. Both Archana Manav retrn wid swts.
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Next Day
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Archana rtrned 4m office, bt see de bus has already left. C got scared nd call Naina who assures her dat c'll pick him up nd leave. Bt c doesn't knw de way 2 Kausali whn Raj offers her a rid 2 nd c agrees.
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While driving Naina feels asleep nd Raj busy 2 starring at her. Suddnly Naina feels a huge bump nd saw dat Raj made an accident by which de car broken.
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She became mad at Raj, who frusted wid her anger nd abt 2 told dat he z starring at her dats why dis all hppnd bt stops whch mk Naina more mad.
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On other hand Manav saw Archana waiting alone nd tks her along wid him. On dey way deir car get pumpchered nd it cn't be ok till morng informed by de mechanic boy.
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Manav assures Archana nd tks her 2 nearby Dhaba whr sm villagers r dancing nd Raj Naina also deir. Bt both de pairs cn't see each other. Dey shares sm romantic mmnt till morng.
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At morning ArMan returned 2 chawl whr Archana's family z worried 4 her, sees her cming out of de car wid Manav. While basti ppl starts raising fingures at her.
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Karanjkars tried 2 stop dem bt in vain nd den Manav shouts at dem nd mks dem feel ashemed at deir doing whch mk Archana amuzed. Den he left by telling Archana 2 tkcr nd Varsha starts 2 gv hints 2 Aai of ArMan.
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Back 2 Mallhotra house
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Raj nd Naina rtrnd home 2gether whch mk all relived whr at back sm ladies r talking bad abt Naina whch nt gone unnoticed by Amitav nd he decides 2 talk Rahul abt marriage.
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Archana z at home in Manav's thought. Varsha nd Vaishalli cm nd start 2 tease her. Naina z in her room nd realizes c forgot 2 pick Archana up. C starts 2 panick when Archana calls her nd tells her dat while waiting 4 her Manav was also there so c came back wid him nd Naina starts 2 mk fun of Archana nd Manav nd Archana tells Naina 2 stop nd tells her dat c'll meet her tom.
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Part 3 z in below...

Edited by Soumya02 - 13 years ago

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Soumya

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Part - 3
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Next day Amitav brings Rahul along nd telling evry1 abt Naina getting married 2 Rahul. All r happy except Sanjana coz c knws dat Raj lyks Naina.
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Archana cm out 4m house 2 meet Naina at cafe nd looking 4 a cab ends up 2 go wid Manav. Whr Raj voulntees Naina 2 cm along nd c agrees. Archana nd Naina meets at cafe nd teases each other abt Manav nd Raj.
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While other hand at outside Manav nd Raj waiting 4 Archana nd Naina. Raj z busy wid his phone nd Manav reading news paper, so close to each other bt cant see each other. A wind blows on dem both nd dey both can feel something.
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Both Archana nd Naina promises 2 share deir feelings wid each other nd leaves. Naina z dropped at collage by Raj nd he cms home whr he found abt Naina - Rahul's marriage.
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Later at nyt Naina went 2 Sanjana nd ask her abt Raj's whr abts nd whts gong on in home. Sanjana trying 2 speak up Naina bt c leavs by left her sad. Den c found Raj nd try 2 talk him bt he walk away leave her confused.
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Archana z at home, whn c receives sm roses nd c reads de card. It tells her 2 cm 2 Ocean Club at 7 tom.
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Ur's truly, ur special person who had fallen in love wid u 4m de very 1st moment!!
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Archana thinks it was Manav who sent it nd goes 2 her room very happily. Den call Naina up.
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Naina on the other hand z in her room confused as c doesn't knw whts gong on wid Raj, receives a call 4m Archana who tells her abt Manav nd Naina congrats Archana nd tells her c talk 2 her later on. Archana thinks dat there z smthng wrong wid Naina.
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Naina recives a boquet, nd she reads de card telling her evry moment dat he has spent wid her meant de world 2 him nd now he'll lyk 2 tell her abt his feelings.
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Naina z thnkng who it might be. When c goes 2 Ramu Kaka who tells her, Raj had given him de flowers. Naina thnks Raj lyks her nd goes into her room hugging her teddy bear.
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Next day in de evenng both Naina nd Archana r gettng ready pehla nasha z playing nd both think abt Manav nd Raj nd starts to sing.
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Later dat nyt Raj see's Naina leaving de house happily nd thinks abt whr c z gong nd follows her.
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Archana see's a car infront of her house nd thinks hw Manav could afford smthng lyk dis but leaves anyways. Manav who was comng to Archana's house see's Archana leaving nd follows her.
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Naina happily goes to the guy who z showing her back nd c goes to him nd hugs him nd tells him c loves him too. Bt its turn out 2 Rahul!!. Raj sees dis nd leaves depressed.
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Archana cms into de restaurant, see no 1 around bt a guy in de dark. While walking in flowers re thrown on her. Archana z abt 2 say I LOVE YOU bt realizes it is Prashant!! Manav 4m far see's nd leaves 4m there mad.
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Rahul tells Naina dat he loves her a lot nd hugs her. Bt Naina spared herself 4m Rahul tells him 2 let her go nd c doesn't love him, c loves Raj!!
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Rahul shocked. He tells Naina abt there marriage bt Naina tells him dat c cannot marry him as c loves Raj nd no1 asked me if i wanted to marry him.
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C tells Rahul sry bt c cannot marry him nd leaves 4m dere leaving Rahul depressed.
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Ajit tries 2 hold Archana's hand bt Archana lets go telling Ajit dat he z wrong. C doesn't thinks abt him in any such way. Ajit is devastated.
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Archana tells him c always thought of him as a frnd nd her boss bt noting else. Dat c cannot love him as c loves sm1 else. C nvr thought of him in any other way dan a frnd.
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C tells Ajit sry nd leaves 4m dere leaving Ajit in tears.
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Archana went 2 Manav's gareage 2 confess her love nd 2 Naina went Raj's room.
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At garage Archana found Manav yelling at workers. He saw Archana who z waiving at him bt avoids her. C went 2 him nd asked whts wrong??
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Bt Manav rudly told her 2 mind her own buisness nd get lost whch mks Archana cry. C asked him de reason of his rude behaviour??
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Manav ansrs Archana why does c care so much nd tells her 2 go back 2 her rich boyfriend Ajit!!
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Archana try 2 mk undrstand him. Bt Manav gets mad nd tells her dat he znt wrong, bt he was wrong abt her thnkng c would lyk him bt instead c goes 4 rich guys.
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He ends up grabbing her really tightly nd corners her bt realizes what he z doing and lets her go, which hurts Archana alot.
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Archana leaves but ends up hitting her self and cuts her hand, which Manav sees and goes to her, Archana tells him to let her go.
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While other hand Naina tries 2 talk 2 Raj in boxing room. Bt he z nt paying attention at her. Den he told Naina whts it nd Naina get shy nd gong 2 told bt Raj stops her nd told her dat he knws wht c want 2 tell her.
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It z c, nd Rahul getting up married!! Whch shocks Naina. C tries 2 mk him undrstnd bt in vain. C gets mad nd yells at Raj...

Edited by Soumya02 - 13 years ago

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Soumya

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Sry guys, i knw i hv 2 do a big dhamaka 2day bt it'll head sm more tym. Bt i'll lyk 2 gv a promo abt it...
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Promo: Marriage hppns of both Manav - Archana nd Raj - Naina.
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De 2 respective families goes 2 Kullu whr both Manav nd Raj trapped in a strom nd get unconsioused in a sm place, r tkn back each others family. Aftr gain sense dey cn't remind anythng abt deir past lyf. (sm suspense remains unfold in nxt updts)