Arvi FF: The Three Mistakes: Completed

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-LiveLaughLove-

@-LiveLaughLove-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#271

Wow I read both Chapter 21 and 22A just now! Nice job! Slowly ArVi's feelings for each other are changing...
Who is this Ranvir...? Why is he hiding info about Purvi..
Loved Arjun and Purvi's interaction at themarket and at the Restaurant on whether or not he was drunk.
Riya is getting suspicious about Arjun's behavior now!
Can't wait for 22B!

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eshaa_avrc

@eshaa_avrc

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Posted: 12 years ago

#272

Originally posted by: Pancham101
Awesome.

Cutesy khadoos boss, with a sense of humor( shades of RD?)
Sassy subordinate

Love their interactions the Ms. Purvi's , the snide remarks, the underlying unmistable link!

And the best part, can absolutely picture the scenes very very clearly.

Will be at work in two pieces?🤣

Thank you so much!

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eshaa_avrc

@eshaa_avrc

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Posted: 12 years ago

#273

Originally posted by: xoxoarvi
Wow I read both Chapter 21 and 22A just now! Nice job! Slowly ArVi's feelings for each other are changing...
Who is this Ranvir...? Why is he hiding info about Purvi..
Loved Arjun and Purvi's interaction at themarket and at the Restaurant on whether or not he was drunk.
Riya is getting suspicious about Arjun's behavior now!
Can't wait for 22B!

Thank you!
The precise identity of Ranvir will be revealed soon enough, and you'll see just how big of a part he plays in everyone's lives. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I know I enjoyed writing this chapter! :)

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Latika Gurung

@-Latty-

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#274

esha it was simply awesome ...👏

omg both arjun and purvi were funny...😊

did u get back home in one piece
i m not drunk.
just checking

if i die too
still u have to her...!!
that was damn hilarious🤣

thanx for the pm...!!!
great part...👍🏼

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J12L85

@J12L85

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Posted: 12 years ago

#275

Hi, just as u enjoyed writing I enjoyed reading this, it was so so cute n funny:) Hmmm so both of them were abandoned... lol wonder if its a coincidence or faith. Can't wait for next update, great job!

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AshaNegiFan

@AshaNegiFan

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#276

Interesting..😉Awesoem update...👏

Arvi...😳

Update soon...😊

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shreya2094

@shreya2094

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#277

awesome update👏

absolutely loved it...waiting fr 22b😛

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jkhusi

@jkhusi

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#278

Love it plz update the next part very soon

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hangok

@hangok

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#279

owww they are so cute,
i really would loke to know where soham & kanjal were😃
by the way they spoke about love, so i think there will be something begin,
im waiting for it