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Alicia

@alicia.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#411

Nice update .. Thanks for taking time out of your busy schedule 😊 Really appreciate it .. Hope these realize how much in love❤️ they are with each other soon 😊

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Hemi

@darsh2010

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#412

WOW Keshu, its so amazing... Loved the beach segment and loved hw both were lookin into eachothers eyes n also the cute dance...thanks fr giving us some cute ARVI moments i skipped the other parts as im crazy only fr my arvi...superbly written...👏

Wish soon they shud realise their love n what the suprise they r gonna face. hope it shud gud one

ARVI r the cuttest, adorable, awesome couple I have ever seen...😃

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Jagruti

@AnAvidReader

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#413

wow...part 15 ws mindblowing..read it twice or thrice...luvd their sweet hug,and dance at da beach..nw eagerly waiting to kno abt arjun's past...

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Neha

@howler

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#414

luved it...😃 pls PM me the next update...

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logambika

@.logs

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#415

nice update... loved the part...👏

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archverma10

@archverma10

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#416

Nice update Keshu!!! I just lived the beach scene...please give us some more like that in the upcoming updates 😊

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Rachel

@Rach.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#417

Keshuuu ! 🤗

I know I'm really late but I'm sure you wouldnt mind that as long as I'm commenting. 🤣

Okay on a serious note, loved the length this time. Although I have to admit that I finished it in a jiffy. I actually read the parts in blue (The non Arvi ones ) in the end and quickly glanced through what was related to Arvi. 😆

Their first day after being married was so cute.I dont expect even an ounce of this from the creatives so I'm realllyyy glad that you managed to paint such a pretty picture with their dance, innocent yet so intense ! 😍

I know its Ramadan and you'll be really busy but like I said, just spend 10 minutes on this everyday and by the end of the week, it'll grow up to be quite long. 🤣

Kya Kare ! Yeh Dil Maange More 😳

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Rachel 😛

Edited by Rach. - 13 years ago

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indira

@saijahnavi

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#418

hey it's really superb and sorry for late update👏👏👏👏👏

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umm...

@umm...

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#419

woww...amazing!!
thanks for the update!!
Ramadhan kareem to you!!

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Latika Gurung

@-Latty-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#420

OMG...what a update...its amazing...and ARVI moments were awesome...u give a such a beautiful and lovely update...and ya sorry for late comment actually i read it today ...and thank u very much for ur pm...

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