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Posted: 13 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: shootingstar27

Khuda se Arzoo Tumhari



Jabse Hui hai seher yeh meri

Tabse hai dekha khwab tumhara

Jabse Maine yeh hosh sambhala

Tabse har lafz par hai naam tumhara

Dhekhi nahin hai jannat maine

Par khoob suna hai kisi shayar se

Ki chhavi ho tum uss pari ki jise

Basa liya hai maine dil mein

Arziyaan likhi hai panno par maine

Aur dil mein bhi laakh dua ki

Sajda kiya hai har par khuda ka

Ki dikhaye nazaare tum mein mujhe, shama seher ke.

Tum hi ho aarzoo ruh ki meri,

Tum hi ho ibadat honthon ki

Jisse gaate nahin thakte honth yeh mere

Aur Jo sargam ban gayi hai, meri saanson ki...

Daulat nahin hathon mein mere

Aur shauhrat ka hai taqaaza

Magar ban sakta hoon main woh Sahara

Jo rahega humesha banke tohfa tumhara...

Kehte hain fakir aur sant

Aur logon ne bhi yahin kaha hai

Ki dil hi main samaya hai woh khuda

Jisse dhoondhte har par hum duniya mein...

Toh phir fariyaad karta hoon us bande se

Jo saath saaya banke chalta hai

Ki dikha de mujhe woh aaina

Jo mila de mujhe...Tum mein base...mere khuda se.

Supriya ,this is really beautiful ..
I loved it ..It is perfect ..It does not need any correction at all...
The Urdu is very good ..I am sure you can do very beautiful Urdu poetry as you are well aware of the words
Just this part I feel needs a very little correction ...

Ki dil hi main samaya hai woh khuda

Jisse dhoondhte har par hum duniya mein...

The word ' par ' in blue should be ' pal ' meaning moment ...
Other than that it is just perfect ..
well done sweet heart ..
It's really staright from the heart effort ...👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92

Hello...

Its been awhile since I posted here 😳 Hope everyone is doing great 😃My jaan, Supriya have written two beautiful poems yet again. Do let my jaan know if you love it 😛


Sacred Love


Pic Credit: IF

In the secret musings of day and night,

In the calming mist of the moonlight,

In the rainbow colours that are so bright;

I look for your beatific face in every sight.

I am there in your musings and every thought,

I'm there in the calm of the moonlight you sought,

I am there in the colours that shine so bright;

I am there my other, in your every sight.

I look for you wherever I go,

I look for you every place I know,

I try to find you when we are apart;

Where should I find you, where should I start?

I walk with you love, at every step,

I am with you wherever you are,

I am there in your very soul and heart;

So never think that we are apart.


I roam, I seek, and I see you everywhere,

I pray for you, for love to share,

You are every unspoken word of mine;

You are the flame within me, in the manner of a lamp within a shrine.

Your love is true so everywhere you see, I have to be,

I ask for you as you for me,

Your words are such that they speak to me;

The flame of your love burns within me, and like so it has and will always be.

God made us to be the twin of souls,

He made us the two halves of one whole,

So I am you and you are me;

This world is the mirror and we're the reflection of the other, whom we'll always see.

Now I know that when god calls us to where we belong,

We'll be together, never to part,

With joy that day, our lips chanting a song;

We'll be one whole, it won't be an end...but a start.


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2iUZRSeqzz8




Edited by shootingstar27 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
Thanks Omana dear posting it and Supriya dear wonderful wonderful poem...simply brilliant..Reading once is never enough..Keep writing more dear 👍🏼 perfect tribute to Sushita
Edited by Jaishankar - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94

Beauty in divine form


Your face is as bright as the moon lit sky,

Your eyes shine so like the stars up high,

Your incense is fragrant as a thousand roses;

Your existence is a blessing for poetry and prose's.

Like love can't be shown as hard as one may try,

So my words are merely reflections, my feelings may never be truly expressed,

Like so, my love your beauty leaves me short of words and makes me sigh;

There may never be a creation as you; to see you thus I am blessed.

For you are yourself, like no one else,

For your form is unparalleled,

You my love are just thyself;

You will dwell in me forever, even when my heart is quelled.


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Posted: 13 years ago
#95

thanx fr posting omana di..miss u🤗 🤗

supu di🤗🤗...u r brilliant


Your love is true so
everywhere you see, I have to
be,
I ask for you as you for me,
Your words are such that they
speak to me;
The flame of your love burns
within me, and like so it has
and will always be.
God made us to be the twin of
souls,
He made us the two halves of
one whole,
So I am you and you are me;
This world is the mirror and
we're the reflection of the
other, whom we'll always see.
Now I know that when god
calls us to where we belong,
We'll be together, never to
part,
With joy that day, our lips
chanting a song;
We'll be one whole, it won't
be an end...but a start.


I love dis...😍

Love d 2nd one too..so romantic😍😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96
Supriya di u rock omana di glad to see u here
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
Hawww Supriya that was fantastic. Loved and loved it... Keep writing more. It was a treat to read them..
Thank you Omana for posting..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: Devishri


thanx fr posting omana di..miss u🤗 🤗

supu di🤗🤗...u r brilliant


Your love is true so
everywhere you see, I have to
be,
I ask for you as you for me,
Your words are such that they
speak to me;
The flame of your love burns
within me, and like so it has
and will always be.
God made us to be the twin of
souls,
He made us the two halves of
one whole,
So I am you and you are me;
This world is the mirror and
we're the reflection of the
other, whom we'll always see.
Now I know that when god
calls us to where we belong,
We'll be together, never to
part,
With joy that day, our lips
chanting a song;
We'll be one whole, it won't
be an end...but a start.


I love dis...😍

Love d 2nd one too..so romantic😍😍

Omana says thank you my baby😛
your Supu di says thank you as well...for the ones you quoted are her favorite parts too🤗🤗
I love to write for Sushita.i wrote this keeping in mind that Sushant is filming and is away from Ankita and them missng each other alot...so Sushant is looking for her and seeing her everywhere and Ankita consoles him by saying that she is wherever he sees...tu the Tum Ho song is for that...😃
Ankita really is tha beautiful...as i say alot...Beauty in divine formDay Dreaming
Thank you baby...i am truly thankful for your kind words😊love you😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: dhoomdhadaka

Supriya di u rock omana di glad to see u here

Thank you Anshi🤗🤗🤗and Omana misses you all too😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: AshuNaik

Hawww Supriya that was fantastic. Loved and loved it... Keep writing more. It was a treat to read them..
Thank you Omana for posting..

Awww...thank you Ashu🤗🤗i will try to write more...for your sake😛
Edited by charmedforlife - 13 years ago

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