The Chronicles Of Saint Bhavna : Part 4 , Pg 26

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suan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: Swati_

Hi Lunzi 🤗

Long time yaar 😊

I am not OK

I have hurt my hand,leg and knees and many places

Swati,

So sorry to hear of your accident.😭

Hope the injuries heal very soon.

At least you're okay enough to be with us on the forum.

Take it easy so you get better soon.🤗

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suan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

Awww Kools,

What a delight it was to read your thread.😊

Made my day. When I saw that part 2 was posted, I couldn't get to it fast enough! I hope it doesn't stop at part 5! We need it to continue way past that! At least we'd have something worthy to disuss!

I love your take on all that happened on PR. Manohar and Mohan hogging on fries and ketchup. 🤣

Bhavna thinking Mohan wanted to do "that", as Usha would say.🤣

Bhavna eavesdropping on her son and DIL, in order to know what's happening.🤣. I can picture her chubby self trying to find somewhere large enough to hide.😆

Kools, you've described Varsha in such detail that I can clearly picture what she looks like and what she sounds like. Great job!!

Poor Satish...no consumation for some time, no regular "that", and forbidden to even look at baby pictures at home.😲 Poor fellow.😭

Kools, am eagerly awaiting part 3! Don't keep us waiting too long!!!

P.S. I loved how you described Bhavna's purple lingerie in her underwear drawer! Too good!!!

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shootingstar27

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

🤣🤣🤣

Brilliant job di 👍🏼 I'm sure if Bhavna's POV was shown,it will be exactly like this.The poor lady

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Lumos

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

Once again commendable writing Kool. I was cracking up non-stop..generally the humour in minute things goes unobserved, but in your expert hands it becomes an epic! Keep it up and keep spraying the laughing gas..its very much needed!

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Gauri22

@Gauri22

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Posted: 13 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: koolsadhu1000

Well I hope ur not disappointed .It seems such fun now , reflecting on ALL the nnsense that happened . From a third persons POV

Not an ounce of disappointment! You are too good..and Bhavna feeling that Mohan might be taking pills for..ahem..ahem...was hilarious!!! Thanks again..for making my day!

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koolsadhu1000

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Posted: 13 years ago

#86

Thank u Sharon , Omana and herefornothing ! OMg I still laugh whn I imagine the Bhavna Mohan scene .If only they had shown it !

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bhallarox

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Posted: 13 years ago

#87

Hi Kool Di😊

Thanks so much for that awesome story👍🏼 You are a great writer, such great talent you have😛 Also, thanks so much for making me laugh today, this has put a smile on my face probaby for the rest of the day😛

I feel very bad for Bhavna, thanks for including in Mohan Rao, he and Bhavna make a good couple, much better than Sulo Mano, Savita, Damo, Bhavna Mphan Rao are the best couple in PR.

I laughed relly hard at the part where Sulo was eating French Fries with ketchup, it's much funner reading your story than the silly show!

BTW, is this written like in Bhavna's POV like when you write I, or I thought this, is Bhavna telling the story?😊

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Thanee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#88

Kooldi wow...👏...to be continued dear.part 3 now..Please..

I'll be patient..promise...😆 I like it ..laugh..its a fresh air..thanks..

Kooldi when Manmohan came in France to eat French fries..with Ketchup to Mcdonald's???..He made a short day here I think with all bla bla bla in his house he want to take a breathe...🤣I miss him.😆 In which Macdo Ajit saw him...??😆 Ajit follow him..😡..I would ask Mohan not to go with those crazy people.call familly K..Familly D and avoid his Bahu cause she is a psycho dangerous one..😆 but unfortunately I miss him...and Manmohan thought that in France nobody know him and he took this opportunity to eat all oily food...and that why he been ill after...poor man..

Very good..Dear..😊

Edited by Thanee - 13 years ago

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koolsadhu1000

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Posted: 13 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: Thanee
Kooldi wow...👏...to be continued dear.part 3 now..Please..

I'll be patient..promise...😆 I like it ..laugh..its a fresh air..thanks..

Kooldi when Manmohan came in France to eat French fries..with Ketchup to Mcdonald's???..🤣I miss him.😆 In which Macdo Ajit saw him...??😆..I would ask him not to go with those crazy people.call familly K..Familly D and avoid his Bahu cause she is a psycho dangerous one..😆 but unfortunately I miss him...and Manmohan thought that in France nobody know him and he took this opportunity to eat all oily food...and that why he been ill after...poor man..

Very good..Dear..😊

Thanee Manohar was in the Dombivli McDonald😆 I am gonna use him in my Chronicles now, He is my favorite character