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-ALI-

@-ALI-

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Posted: 15 years ago

"Kyun, Aisa kyun hota hai ki jo hum chahte hain woh hamein nahin milta.....

Saari zindagi maine kuch nahin manga bas sirf ek cheez ki Guzaarish ki din raat, shaam subah aur woh bhi mujhe naa mil saka... Kyun?!!

Usne mujhe gale laga kar kaha tha ki hamare rishte ko kisi ki nazar naa lage.... Aur ohir agle din hi wo mujhse juda ho gayi.. Kyun?!!

Maine aisa kaun saa gunaah kar diya tha jiski mujhe aisi sazaa mili?!!

Usne mujhe galat samjha aur phir maine usko galat samjha... Jo aankhein ek dusre ko dekhne keliye tarasti thi wohi aankhein naa chahte hue bhi ek dusre se bachne lagi.. Kyun?!!!

Naa to wo galat thi, naa main... Naa toh usne mere alawa kisi ko chaha ayr naa maine... Phir Kyun?!!!

Aakhir humne aisa kya galat kar diya tha... Haan shayad hamari achhai hamare raaste mein aa gayi.. Shayad itna achha hona iss samaj mein paap hai aur shayad humse yehi paap hua!!

Magar Phir bhi hum ne ek dusre ko itna chaha, ek dusre ki khushiyaan maangi.. Phir Kyun?!!!

Aaj mere paas meri Patni hai magar maine haath tak nahin lagaya, jise maine kabhi uss nazar se dekha tak nahin.... Kyun?!!!! Kyunki main usse aajtak bhula nahin paaya....

Aaj mere paas apna bachha hai magar main uska baap nahin hun.... Kyun?!!!

Aaj mujhe ye bhi pata nahin ki wo kahan hai magar meri aankhein aaj bhi usko talaash rahi hain, Kyun?!!!

Aakhir meri galti kya thi jo main har pal mar raha hun?!!!! MAin apni maut bhi nahin maang sakta kyunki mera bachaa meri zimmedaari hai arna wo bhi maang leta!!!

Haan, zimmedaari..... Wohi zimmedaari jiske liye maine sab kuch kho diya.... Yhan tak ki khud ko bhi..... Phir Bhi meri antaratma mujhe kosti hai, Kyun?!!!

Meri aapse yehi guzaarish rehti thi ki main aur woh Ek ho jaayein magar aapne aisa kyun kiya, kyun?!!!!

Aaj bhi aap meri guzaarish nahin maante jab bhi main ye mangta hun ki main Usko apne dilo dimaag se nikal dun, kyun?!!!!!

Kyun bappa, aisa kyun?!!!!

Archana kahan hai bappa, kaisi hai, kya humne alag hokar galti kii?!! Aaj bhi 15 saalo baad ye sawaal mera peecha nahin choor rahe, kyun?!!!!! Aisa Kyun?!!!"

Main Sunny ko ek baap ka pyaar de raha hun, shravani ko ek izzat ki zindagi de raha hun aur shayad Apne chote bhai Sachin ki galti ki zimmedar le raha hun magar in sab mein main aur archana kahan hain bappa, kahan hain?!!

Aaj bhi main apni zindagi ki pehli guzaarish ko poora hona ka intezaar kar raha hun?!!! Kyun?!!!

Manav: Sunny Beta, kya kar raheho??

Sunny: Main........ Main.....

Sunny Didnt say anything.

Manav saw His personnel diary which Sunny read.... Beore he could say anything , Sunny ran out....

Manav: Meri Aakhri Guzaarish Bhipoori naa ho saki..... Maine SunnyKi Khushiyaan mangi thi... Ab wo bhi Aapne Usse cheen li, Kyun?!!!! Kyun Bappa?!!!!!

And he sat on floor Reading his own diary and Tears Rolled down his cheeks and that Shining Face of Archana revolved Around his mind.....

Edited by -ALI- - 15 years ago

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Jyothi

@sizezeroaddict

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

WaaaoW! It's naaice and Touching😃

Keep it up yaar!👏😳

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Sonii

@..Sonii..

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

👏👏👏

Ali tussi kamaal kidda

Wonderfully written, Apt for Manav

Do keep writing...........

Kaash Manav kii Guzarish poori ho.......

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akash

@Spartacus

Stunner

Posted: 15 years ago

Wow Ali what happened to you???🤗

Awesome yaar!!!!!!!!!!

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acre

@acre

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

kaabile-e-tariff likhi tum ne yeh guzaarish,👏
khuda se bas itni dua hai ki
kash manav ki yeh guzaarish archana kabul kar le,
to unki mohabbat ko sahi manzil mil jayegi😊

Edited by acrewood - 15 years ago

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SONU

@BhatSonu

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

oye hoye kah baat hai ,great piece of writing yaar,tum to woh nikle, chupa rustum

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coolpratz

@coolpratz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

wow, !! that was really very gud n vry touching... 😭
great job.... looks like manav's soul entered within u...😊
such a crying heart!!kyun?
son's name sunny, kyun?...😆😆😆
just added some more kyun...😆
.... really great writing....
👏 👏 👍🏼

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monica

@-monica-

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

wooooooooow! awesome one.⭐️⭐️👏⭐️⭐️
tussi great ho Ali bhaaiya.......😃
keep it up!👍🏼

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-SD-

@-SD-

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

Ali after going through the guzarish it seems like manav has written this So it is proved that it's manav who has created the fake id of ali and been particiapting in discussions. so I request all girls to reconsider the universal brotherhood they have assigned to ali.

Anyways only a Man who has suffered like Manav can write this. Great.

Edited by -SD- - 15 years ago

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kmh2rockzz

@kmh2rockzz

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#10

hey nyc ali
wah wah bine bheje ke bhi kya khoob likha😆😆😆😆
well done improvement ho raha hai😆😆😆😆😆😆
but doc ke pass jaroor jana🤣🤣🤣🤣

keeping doing it👏👏👏
awesme 1 just do write more lyk this

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