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Posted: 15 years ago
#31

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@ Skeptical:

Promising intro!
I notice you've winched everybody up several notches in class terms. Interesting. Manav is fairly irresistible even as a mechanic; as a surgeon, mmm...........😊 hmmmmmm......since we are in Dreamer's mode, why dream about bread when we can dream about gateaux au chocolat?
If you're actually taking M & Bs as your model, Betty Neels used to to focus on doctors, if I remember right. Though of course she specialized in a particular combo: Dutch doctors and English nurses. Uh..huh, I am not using M&B as a model, that has been demanded by Candyfloss girl (Piya)
Yes I know abt Doc-Nurse romances and I personally find them 🤢 (dunno why) So Arch is not a nurse..... no way
Looking forward to the next episode. Tonight.........
C

C
In my story, Arch will have more spunk and will not take anything lying down. Why have a milk and water romance? 😉
Let's see how it goes.................
Skep
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Posted: 15 years ago
#32
Piya, ShelDev ......
I shall be updating in this thread itself....... The first page will tell you the page no:. You can get there that way.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#33
thank God Archana is not a nurse (oops !! I shld thank u ) doc-nurse romance is so unexciting 🥱
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34
"Gateaux au chocolat" ~ Indeed. 😊
J'attends ce plaisir delicieux impatiemment!
C
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: commentator

"Gateaux au chocolat" ~ Indeed. 😊
J'attends ce plaisir delicieux impatiemment!
C

Ahhhhhhhhh ... ma petite, je vous verrai donc ce soir .......
Uh huh let's get back to Anglais for the rest. Shall see you this evening with the update.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
wowwww! nice introduction.....👏
this Archu is very much confident and real.....i just like this archu much more than PR Archu......
waiting for the next part.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#37

The Deshmukh Household

Vishwaasrao Deshmukh took his place at the head of the table. He had just finished his cup of tea. Sitting alone and at peace, he was reading the newspapers. His younger brother Damodar was a stage actor and had carved a name for himself in his field. A much sought after actor, this man was still very down-to-earth …… approachable and affable. Fame had blessed him and so had money subsequently. As a family they lacked nothing.

In his younger days for Vishwaasrao, things were different. He hadn't been so well off then. Having lost his young wife in childbirth, he had vowed never to be short of funds. He had gone off to Africa to do some trade and had never looked back. He went on to learn about the different trends of cashew farming. He returned ten years later with enough money to buy estates for cashew crop. And then he had expanded into fruit farming. Whilst in East Africa, he sent money home. His brother was finding his feet in his profession and had little time for his family. All the while, Savita, his brother's wife had taken care of everything. She was the pillar in the house and she ran it with precision. She saved money, looked after all the finances and took care of her three beautiful children.

Manav was the oldest and the most endearing. He was particularly fond of him. A tall handsome lanky young man, he was the apple of his eye. Helpful and loving to the core, it never took him long to make a place for himself in anyone's heart. He was a bright student, and Vishwaas rao himself had encouraged Manav to chose a career of his liking and pursue it. So Manav had chosen medicine and then orthopaedics as his specialisation. He had left for foreign shores six years ago and was learning whatever he could there. He loved his family dearly.

Sachin was the second son. He was a roguish fellow who loved people and who loved life. Naughty as a young boy, he had hardly changed. He was still wonderfully cute in a boyish kind of a way. Whenever Vishwaas rao tried to lecture him on taking life seriously, he'd shrug it off with a joke. Always in need of money, he used devious means of getting it from his parents and his uncle. They saw through his outrageous fibs but indulged him anyway. He had found himself a girl called Shravani. The elders tried to talk him out of the relationship, because they had seen that this girl was quite lustreless.

Vandita was the youngest.

(to be contd)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38

So Dr. Manav is finally here... Dr. nikita was waiting eagerly.

Great update!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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The Deshmukh Household ..... 2
"Oh hi Kaka...." A young man walked to the table.
Vishwaasrao put down his newspaper to look at his nephew. "So Sachin what are you doing tonight?"
"Going to a party of course."
"What party?"
"A friend of mine has bought a new car, so we are celebrating......."
"That's reason for celebration?"
"Of course........ life is celebration!"
"Sometimes I am surprised at how philosophical you get..."
"Dada, this boy just wants to enjoy. Does he have a care in the world? No, he has far more important things to do."
"Oh c'mon Ai, stop being a damp squib."
"Okay..... go for your party."
"Eh.... I need some......"
"Money?" Savita guessed right. "When will you understand the value of money?"
The phone rang.
Savita smiled and looked at the clock. She was sure it was Manav. Sachin beat her to the phone. She glared at him.
"Hello Dada............... I am having a tough time with my financers. Oh they are so miserly and keep a paisa to paisa account. I think you should start sending me some money. Your brother is in dire straits and has to literally beg for crumbs."
"You are so shameless ...... give me the phone.......Hello Manav, how are you, son?"
Damodar entered the room wearing a suit. He was short and stocky with a mop of salt and pepper hair and a beard that always needed a trim. But he said that was a part of his persona and never listened to his wife about a shave or a good haircut. He was quite different from Savita who was neat and prim. He smiled inwardly. No couple could be as different in personality or taste. But they had a good marriage between them. He knew he wouldn't be able to manage without her. Yet they had their differences too. Manav was a perfect blend of the two. He had his father's jolly nature but he had a streak of seriousness too. That was evident from his profession. He couldn't believe his son could have such active grey cells.
Damodar Deshmukh had just returned from signing a new show and was feeling generous. He handed Sachin a wad of notes, put his finger on his lips and winked. In many ways he knew his son took after him. Damodar was a loving father and loved his children immensely. Sachin of course had a special place in his heart.
"I'll call you back Manav.......I can see your father has given some moneyto Sachin .... as usual." She hung up.
"Why do you do this and encourage him?" Savita asked her husband crossly.
Damodar spun on his feet and bowed to her.
"Lord Byron's words.........
O talk not me of a name great in story
The days of our youth are the days of our glory
And the myrtle ........"
"That's enough of drama...........this is not a stage."
"Bye Ai, Baba..........man you are the best."
"Take care Sachin.........."
"Baba may I borrow your car? Please please?"
"Not the new one, take the old one"
"Baba I can't take Shravani out in that jalopy...."
"Really?" inserted his mother, "then take her in an auto. You are so cool Sachin, why don't you start a trend?"
Sachin had heard enough and was on his way.
"What does he see in that girl? She's just a rich businessman's spoilt daughter." Vishwaasrao said.
"Yes like Sachin is just a rich actor's unemployed son." Savita couldn't resist that remark.
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Manav put down the receiver of the phone. He gave a short laugh. Sachin would never change. How he loved his younger brother and how he missed him! He longed to meet all of them and be with them. But he had two years more here before he would return home for good.
He got up and went to put his dinner in the microwave. He had a special session this afternoon with Dr Fennerton and he wasn't going to miss it for the world.
The phone rang again. Was it Ayi calling back.
"Hello?"
"Hi Manav ...... this is Dana. Could we meet later this evening for a drink?"
"Yeah sure why not?"
Dana wanted to pair up with Manav. She wasn't obvious but he had read the signs alright. She was a nice girl who worked in the Path Lab. He was comfortable in her company but didn't find her irresistable. He was not going to encourage her and was hoping she would get the hint and let go.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40
Oh Skep that was a beautiful story as always.

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