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skeptical

@skeptical

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Posted: 15 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: unknown18

hmmmmmmmmmmmm 😉

hmmmmmmmmmm? ..... ?????? 😲

Okay lets see how mushy and syrupy I can make this story. A Mills & Boon type romance for all you beautiful dreamers .......... 😆

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unknown18

@unknown18

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#22

😍

i will read the 1st part in a bit!

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grofers

@sensodyne

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#23

I just loved introduction of Archu!!

I like this Archu whose is sweet,confident just can't wait to see how this girl falls for handsome ortho😆

I'm sure u will do complete justice to we crazy dreamers 😆

Hope u update next part soon..:)

Thanks Piya for making Skeptical to write FF for us😃

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448368

Suspended

Posted: 15 years ago

#24

This Archana is so refreshing, real from the one I know. Love yr narrative style skepi it's lucid nd vivid like a motion picture. Looking forward to the next part ....know it's gonna be horrifying yet cant wait for Manav's arrival ....m I being too restless 😆.

skeppi u know m not gonna be here for sum tym so plzzz dnt update in my absence just kiddin 😆 just send me the links o.k. 😊
thnx for the FF nd gud nyt 🤗

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Nikita Lakhe

@nikitagmc

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#25

Loved the first part... Archana is so lively and youthful...!!!

The accident will break her. Poor dear!!!

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GHT_ArMan

@GHT_ArMan

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#26

luved d introductn part n simply can't wait 4 d next part:)

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bhavini thanki

@bhavni88

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#27

thanks, wonderful intro..

pls also send me the links..

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Shelina

@ShelDev

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#28

Hey there

Just came across your FF & must say it's got me hooked...
Loved the concept & yout writing style

can you pls add me to your PM list when you update?

Pls continue soon

Thanks

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commentator

@commentator

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Posted: 15 years ago

#29

@ Skeptical:

Promising intro!

I notice you've winched everybody up several notches in class terms. Interesting. Manav is fairly irresistible even as a mechanic; as a surgeon, mmm...........😊

If you're actually taking M & Bs as your model, Betty Neels used to to focus on doctors, if I remember right. Though of course she specialized in a particular combo: Dutch doctors and English nurses.

Looking forward to the next episode.