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Posted: 15 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: lotus1963

brilliant skep dearest but well mills and boons not entirely my cup of tea though I must say that yours is far far far far superior.

anyway the truth is it is always great to read you. That is a constant and will not change.
And my my tu parles donc francais skep and that too so so well and commentator too.
Wow. Super, excellent, je suis trop contente.

Hahaha Paddy........... that's some compliment coming from a French professeur....... mais madame, j'ai oublie much of the francais que j'ai etudie en ecole......... tch tch tch.
But so nice to see u here cherie................. 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52

zindagi hamesha ek lamhe mein hi badal jaati hai......

a blink of a eye.....and a momment lost forever......damages that take years to fix......as they say lamhon ne khata ki ....sadiyon ne saza payi...
very interesting skepy,basically u took name of this soap's actors and created this romantic story awsome dear.......very moving and gripping..looking forward to some intense drama in future episodes..keep me posted with ur updates......
few lines for archna from a meena kumari song...
sheesha e dil itna na uchalo ..
yeh kahin toot jayega ..yeh kahin phoot jayega...
sheesha e dil.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: skeptical

He got up and went to put his dinner in the microwave. He had a special session this afternoon with Dr Fennerton and he wasn't going to miss it for the world.
The phone rang again. Was it Ayi calling back.
"Hello?"
"Hi Manav ...... this is Dana. Could we meet laterthis evening for a drink?"
"Yeah sure why not?"
He has his meeting with Dr Fennerton in the afternoon and then he meets Dana for a drink in the evening....... (there is a time gap betw India and the US.) It's night here while its midday there. I think that should explain it?

Silly me i forget that our Doc is yet return India,Thanks for clarification Skeptical😊

waiting for next part

Edited by nishr - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
hey well done skep!👍🏼
superb story....just loved it!
waiting for the next part......😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55
Very well written Skep - am totally hooked already!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
woooooooow great story...... [=D>] [=D>] [=D>] i'm waiting eagerly for the next part......
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
Part 5

At the hospital

A posse of cops was lined up along the long corridor. It was the Casualty Ward of a government hospital. There were people rushing here and there anxiously gathering information of their injured folk. Vinod and Manohar quickly climbed the short flight of steps and entered the corridor. Manohar's heart was heavy with anxiety and he could barely think straight. Somehow Vinod had managed to make Sulochana to stay at home. It had been very difficult to convince her, but she had relented in the end ….. after Vinod promised to keep her updated on every little thing.

A line of cops obstructed the way into the rooms where the doctors on duty were.

"Who are you and why are here?" asked one policeman.

"My sister, Archana Karanjkar has met with an accident and we were informed by the hospital authorities. We want to se her."

"Do you have any identity proof?"

"What?"

"Do you have any photo identity to show you are her next of kith and kin?"

"What a stupid ……" Vinod started angrily.

An Inspector came forward with his hat under his arm.

"Sorry, these are formalities which have been made to protect the patient who may not be in a position to take decisions. Even your driving licence will do."

Vinod took it out of his wallet and showed it to him. The man returned it to him.

"Follow me."

Manohar thought the corridors were never ending, he was so nervous. His beautiful daughter…… he prayed she was safe.

The Inspector informed them as they walked, "three cars were involved in the collision. The driver of the car that hit the road divider died leaving behind a mess. He was alone and a little inebriated. The other two cars were unfortunately involved. This is a witness account. Your sister was in one of the other two cars. Her fellow traveller has a few minor injuries.

"What about Archu?"

"I think the doctors will explain to you better than I. She has been seriously injured."

Tears flooded Manohar's eyes on hearing this. Three white coated men who were obviously doctors were conferring among themselves at the end. They stopped and turned.

"Doctors, these are relatives of the lady in the ICU."

Manohar almost moaned aloud.

"Oh you have managed to get in touch……" said one doctor.

"Tell me how my daughter is? May I see her?"

"Your daughter is comatose ……….."

Manohar was full of pain. Why Archana? Why his beautiful girl? Vinod gasped with shock.

"Comatose?"

"We are afraid so."

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VishwaasRao drove at breakneck speed to reach the hospital. What a terrible thing to have happened. Damodar and Savita were with him. Both were silent which showed how worried they were about Sachin. They reached the hospital and went to the information desk to ask for news about him. Savita had her heart in her mouth. She prayed her son was alright. Damodar asked the receptionist about the recent accident. People were helpful instantly giving information. They recognised the actor and were curious. They were directed to the fifth floor. Sachin had been shifted to another room and was no longer in the casualty ward.

Room no: 504…….. Savita opened the door but no one was there. An orderly on the floor informed them that the patient had been taken for some extra scans and X-rays. The lift doors opened and a stretcher rolled out. The ward boys brought the patient towards the Deshmukh family. It was Sachin. Savita sucked in her breath. Dear God! What had happened to her boy? He was taken in the room and the door closed shut. After several minutes, a nurse emerged.

"Are you family?"

"Yes," said Damodar. "That's my son."

"Well, he's lucky. There seem to be no outward injuries but the doctors have run tests to ensure he is alright."

Savita needed to sit …… she was so relieved.

A doctor came along.

"This is a police case and you will have to speak to them first before we can speak to you."

"Okay," said Vishwaasrao. "I shall go down and finish the formalities. You stay here."

Downstairs he got the whole story of what had happened.

Vishwasrao shook hands with the Inspector on duty and took his leave.

"Er …. Excuse me, who is Shravani?"

"She was with my nephew."

"Okay…. She's probably the only one who has got just a few scratches."

"Where is she?"

"She was discharged and her father took her home."

Vishwasrao clenched his teeth. Didn't Girish have the decency to at least wait for them to arrive instead of leaving Sachin alone?

"And the driver of the third car?"

"He's dead. While he is the cause of all this tragedy, he is blissfully at peace in the mortuary while that young girl is fighting for her life." He shook his head and clicked his tongue. Someone called him and he walked away.

Vishwaasrao turned to go up once more when his eyes fell upon the two men desperately talking to a few doctors. He wondered who they were. He went to Room no: 504.

Sachin was awake but in tremendous shock. His face was pale and his eyes were lustreless.

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Manav woke up after a short nap. It was 5 p.m. He knew it was nearing dawn in Mumbai. He'd wait for three more hours and then speak to his dad.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#58
ohhh vry saddy saddy part😭 bt a brilliant 1👏waiting 4 d next part:)
👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59
YES waiting for the next part skeppie dearie. and THANKS
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60
fab update skep....waiting fr the next as always

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