Tumbleweeds ...24th Update.. Pg 45 - Page 25

Aaaw there...Shrav here too!😡...amidst the unfolding dreams, flower shower and saxophone- an uninvited importunate spoiler?!... Skep, you too!?....in league with PR writers? 😭…how mean!😆

Well scripted and entertaining episode…though rendering a vague feeling of some hurry in writing… the supporting casts, in their collective anxieties, were aligned a tiny bit too tightly to the built up for that very important 'first sighting'…not that I am complaining😳…as the two linked dreams have come alive in a beautiful script and in an effortless merger👏👏…waiting eagerly for the ensuing bolts and attending sparks.😊

Originally posted by: smrth

Aaaw there...Shrav here too!😡...amidst the unfolding dreams, flower shower and saxophone- an uninvited importunate spoiler?!... Skep, you too!?....in league with PR writers? 😭?how mean!😆 Hahahaha she's there alright, but my Arch is a woman of substance........ she will give back twice as what she gets ....... she's no darpok and certainly not listless like the one on screen ...... 🤢

Well scripted and entertaining episode?though rendering a vague feeling of some hurry in writing? the supporting casts, in their collective anxieties, were aligned a tiny bit too tightly to the built up for that very important 'first sighting'?not that I am complaining😳?as the two linked dreams have come alive in a beautiful script and in an effortless merger👏👏?waiting eagerly for the ensuing bolts and attending sparks.😊 You are right, I did breeze through and joined two episodes into one. Some readers were getting a bit restless. It was indeed 14 chapters and the protagonists still hadn't met. So I raced a bit.

No, no skeptical please indulge and overlook my too fast reflection (an old malady)…on the reread, I found all those supporting casts on valid ground…please don't slow down at all, you are already rarer and don't deprive us on such an interesting mode…The faulty reflection had a feeble excuse…your writing excites heightened expectation …and an old habit of immature comments😕 …I apologize.

Originally posted by: smrth

No, no skeptical please indulge and overlook my too fast reflection (an old malady)?on the reread, I found all those supporting casts on valid ground?please don't slow down at all, you are already rarer and don't deprive us on such an interesting mode?The faulty reflection had a feeble excuse?your writing excites heightened expectation ?and an old habit of immature comments😕 ?I apologize.

Originally posted by: nikitagmc

Oh Yay! Finally skepi is back with a bang!!!

Wow, Manav is a musician as well... me wants a guy like him- doctor, musician, nice human being, nice family man... such guys are difficult to find except in story books........ 😉

The best thing I liked in this update was Manav's reason why he did not get a wheel chair for Archu. Very apt! Yeah he hates the idea.......... now we have to see the struggle that he will go through in order to get her out of that blessed chair ....... especially when she refuses to cooperate 😆

Great meeting of the leads skepi. Hopefully Archu will loosen to Manav soon... Manav toh is gonna fall for her anyway. Hahahahaha

Shravani... grr...... hahahahahaha ....... * laughing even louder*

Originally posted by: ..Sonii..

I loved the encounter skeptical.....😃

Manav.....😍