Tumbleweeds ...24th Update.. Pg 45 - Page 12

Originally posted by: OnePiece

hi Skep(can i call u dat?), hi 1P (can I call you that? 😉)

i've been reading ur story from quite some time but this is the first time im commenting... I am glad you've commented. It took 9 episodes to draw you out? Never mind.... I am happy

i really dont have words Skep..u r just truly AMAZING👏👏👏..... Thank you for yr appreciation

The last part where u extraordinarily explained the struggle of a human mind fighting between life and death it is said that this journey towards the next life (if there be one) is one of the most mysterious one since one half of the mind wants to stay back and the other wants to go ahead. I had wanted to write a little more on it ....... but the story is essentially a romance, so I left it as simple as possible.

and today the way u connected the leads in dreams is simply WOW.... hahahahaha .......two leads? Hey you are assuming that .... no names are mentioned, remember? But yes you are right.........

Are u a writer or u just do it as some hobby? if its just ur interest then i advice u to consider it seriously and do something so that it reaches much wider audience...u deserve more than this applause Skep..u r gifted i say😃... Its just a hobby..............though poetry is my first love. You will get glimpses of it ahead............ no I haven't published anything and don't think I will either. 😳 Sigh......

⭐️⭐️⭐️....from my side...waiting for the next part...

Originally posted by: carpe-diem

Skeptical excellent imagery 👏

Originally posted by: nikitagmc

Oh skeppy, what to say... this was genius... you are an artist- you really are!!!

You need to get this story published. Come on... go for it!!!

Skep simply amazing i just love ur writing n i just can't find words to praise how much i love ur writings!!!

waiting for ur next update n ofcourse for ur poetry😉

Hope u publish ur writings or poetry!!

Originally posted by: nishr

Skep simply amazing i just love ur writing n i just can't find words to praise how much i love ur writings!!!

waiting for ur next update n ofcourse for ur poetry😉

Hope u publish ur writings or poetry!!

Skeptical, i think the way you have written the passage it doesn't really required the pics, they were a nice addition of course. but your diction did the trick for me. thank you so much for taking the time to write and write often,👍🏼

Dear Skeptical,

Originally posted by: carpe-diem

Skeptical, i think the way you have written the passage it doesn't really required the pics, they were a nice addition of course. but your diction did the trick for me. thank you so much for taking the time to write and write often,👍🏼

Yea i agree. I like to the point stuff too. concise, but sometimes to get true emotions imagery is necessary, and one needs to be detailed.

Originally posted by: Tulsey

Dear Skeptical,

I just finished reading page 6, wow! what a novel writer you are....with all proper english and punctuation.... you've just started reading the story? well it's a start anyway. Hope I can keep up yr interest.

U can send your scripts to Ekta and your story will really rock....I mean ROCK. I think EK and I are poles apart and I don't think she and I will see eye to eye at all. She has a bird brain and she'd throw my story into the dustbin. She butchers every story!!!!!

I am now going to the next page.....Thanks