A story ....... Caught in a turbulence - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Amazing Skeptical!!!
missed ur writing very much...
thanks for writing 😃...hope u write more often 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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fantastic Skeptical!!!!!
keep writing... i wanna read more stories like this!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: muneera19

fantastic Skeptical!!!!!
keep writing... i wanna read more stories like this!

Your VMs are very good too...........................
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow skep!! I am speechless, as usual, if only I had words to describe how I feel every time I read anything written by you...the forum would be full of pages & pages of expressions!! You write with your heart & soul, not with your hand & a pen...& it shows...keep writing, I can never get enough!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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It was superb hope they made it in real.i have no words to describe how fantastic it was.it gave me the strength to watch the current track hoping that i may see it in future
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Posted: 15 years ago
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that's how I am .. wordless .. I just love your writing style and I'm falling in love more and more with ArMan thanks to your shots only .. To tell the truth, your shots give me a new perspective of the story, a new point of view, we can see the true love and that's how I fall in love even more with ArMan .. because you write the shots without changing the characters and concepts, you take a scene from the show and you try to show us how the characters feel, their inner feelings .. here we can see the true love between ArMan, especially Manav's love, unlike the show .. but when I read it, I was like maybe that's what the creatives wanted to show us, nd then once again falling in love with the characters, and story too .. I didn't really like this storyline before, but now after reading your take, I am like actually this story is also a love story, God is testing their love .. separation is also a form of love .. this reminds me of Hum hain iss pal yahaan ..

Kabhi kabhi hum ek doosre ko khokar bhi toh pyar ko ooncha darja dete hain. Judaa rehkar pyar ki oonchaaiyon ko praapt karte hain. Har pyar milan to nahin. Judaai bhi toh ek pyar hai.
[ Sometimes even by losing each other we elevate the status of love. In separation we reach new heights of love. Every love doesn't end in being united. Separation is also a form of love .... ]


really hats off to you Skep !!..

ps : thanks for reading my comment if you did .. I don't even know if wht I write makes sense as I just wrote whatever cm n2 my mind loll

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Posted: 15 years ago
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What you have written makes complete sense. And I read every comment that is made in connection with what I write................ Its interesting to know whether ppl have yet another POV.
The story by itself is most unrealistic and quite laughable in PR.
1. Would a girl have the guts to thrust herself into a household when there is no relation left with the members?
2. Would any man offer marriage to a pregnant woman while he is married ..... and in love with his wife?
3. Which wife would allow this ?
These are pitfalls which have ruined the story. (My POV). What I would like to believe is that Manav still loves Arch very much and is now regretting his hasty decision. And this makes Manav's character a little credible.
Rather than comment on the stupid story the writer is putting forth, I give it a few of my own facets, polish it up a bit and with a few brushstrokes, change the texture of the theme. Manav becomes more likeable and Arch with her unquestioning love rises up to meet all challenges to protect her husband....... no protect her love.
And although judaii is certainly one facet of love, I don't want a permanent separation. I am an escapist in the end and I think you are too.😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG
such a beautiful piece of writing
for those who is not a fan ofARMAN will simply fall in love by reading
This makes us realise that just one decision can make or destroy ones life........
Manav would be singing this song in his mind
"mere haath mein tera haath ho, saari jannatien mere saath go,
tu jo paas ho, phir kya ye jahaan,
tere pyar mein ho jaaun fanaaa....."

for sometime I was in tears,I wanted to read this piece very calmly, so late appreciation, but I couldnt resist.👏👏👏👏👏

keep writing.........

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Posted: 15 years ago
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skep u r back nd wow!!! 👏 u r such a soulful writer....just love the way u interpret ArMan .....u bring out their inner thoughts so well....this is wat binds me to this pair.....now nd forever....ArMan Rocks nd so do u 👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: piya007

skep u r back nd wow!!! 👏 u r such a soulful writer....just love the way u interpret ArMan .....u bring out their inner thoughts so well....this is wat binds me to this pair.....now nd forever....ArMan Rocks nd so do u 👍🏼

My Candyfloss girl...............
Here is yr theme and here is yr story. You had wanted it for Holi, but I was tardy....... nothing new about that. Anyway better late than never ....... 😉

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