Conspiracy theory- Manav's tools rebel!!!

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One by one all the workers left the garage. Manav was least interested in going home. Why wudn't he… again all that tension, sadness, disputes, nagging, and no one who wud be waiting for him lovingly. Still he looked at the clock, and after working some more decided to call it a day. Thoughtfully he wiped his hands on the rag. Thoughtfully he cleaned his face. Thoughtfully he cleared the place. Thoughtfully he looked at Bappa's idol in the corner. Thoughtfully he closed the lockers and his office. Thoughtfully he switched off the lights. Thoughtfully he brought down the shutters of the garage. Finally he went home.

As soon as he left, all the vehicles and tools started talking.

Mercedez: I hate this slow poke… he does each job so slowly and mindlessly as if he has all the time in the world… no value for others sleep at all… disturbing me with all the noise and light.. Whacko!!

Pliers: You are frustrated cos of the lights and sounds… think about me… he works 20 out of 24 hours everyday and makes me work too.. at the end of the day, I'm tired as hell. No other mechanic here works so hard.

Wrench: Its just like earlier… when he used to keep working hard till late at night to support his family.. no rest for us at all…

Screw driver: How desperately we used to pray..'Bappa, either make him rich or get him married. In either case he will go home early and we will all have some peace.'

Sander: And finally Bappa heard us.. I liked that girl Archu..

Plier: Kya din they yaar.. he used to go home early so that he could take his lovely wife out for movies or pav-bhaji. He finished his work sooner so he could be with her.

Sander: He used to humm happily at work.. such entertainment for us.. He was always smiling and joking with Chhotu.

Wrench: I remember once when his wife came here… she touched me with her soft hands… it was so sweet to feel something nice for a change after the roughness we are subjected to everyday.

Plier: I liked it when I came to know she respected the labour he put in to get the money… indirectly she gave us respect for the work we help him do everyday.

Sander: God, they used to be so lovey-dovey, I used to close my eyes blushing, expecting some close moments any minute.

Plier: Manav used to stop working and keep staring at her when she used to come.. we used to get breaks. I was so excited when I came to know he wud be going for his honeymoon… I was planning for some rest.

Sander: Arey I was hoping for a kid to come into the picture.. then Manav wud have started taking holidays on Sundays too… it wud have been so nice to see a kid in the garage.

Together: But all our dreams were destroyed.

Plier: And today, even though he is married and richer than before… we are subjected to incessant slogging by him cos His Highness doesn't want to go home.

Wrench: His family doesn't help.. they just want him to earn more.. Sachin's America dreams, Vandu's marriage…

Tool box: What irritates me is that he is always lost… does each job so slowly, I feel like pouring cold water on his head..

Sander: I guess he misses his wife… he is lost in her thoughts all the time, all that sadness, grief, future insecurity.

Rest of them: Then why torture us.. go to your wife!!!

Wrench: At least his behavior right now is better than in those days when the police complaint was made… he was angry and hurt, he banged us about as if he had a right to break us cos his heart is broken.

Sander: And in this process he hurt himself too… I have blood on my hands cos of him… still get nightmares…boohoo!! And every other day, there was some or other emotional drama in the garage which reminded me of sappy TV serials.

Claw Hammer: After Sachin's death, he didn't even eat properly, kept on drowning himself in work, I also had to work on empty stomach.

Toolbox: He frustrates me to no end… he keeps thinking all day.. always lost… what does he think??

Screwdriver: He cannot think… his mind is too muddled… he just tries to think… sometimes when he uses me, I feel like saying 'Dude, you need to tighten the screw of your brain first.'

Claw hammer: Awww… have a heart… poor guy is probably in depression, he has gone through a lot. He's trying to handle it all as best as he can. Anything more and he'll end up having a nervous breakdown as well.

(Everyone felt guilty)

Bike: We sympathize, but why shud we all suffer cos of him?

Wrench: We love him too… we have known him for so many years now. He's sweet, he respects his job and does not damage the tools. He knows that we are the source of his bread and butter. We do so much for him… we never minded when he worked overtime to get something special for his wife… at that time we supported him.

Maruti Suzuki: We used our contacts with other vehicles to get every vehicle damaged near his garage only.. Ashwin, that rascal pimp, Satish, everyone's cars always ended up coming up to his garage. Warna Mumbai mein kya ek hi garage hai? Because of us, Manav became a hero.

Bike: The entire vehicle community bore his insult silently… he never accepted any vehicle and gave his love and attention to it…. Sachin travelled on bikes, Manav always travelled in local trains only.

Screwdriver: Well, he is getting married again and will be richer after marriage too… maybe he won't stay up for long here then.

Wrench: Oh come on! You know him well… you expect him to go home early to share the same bedroom that he shared with Archu with that Shravani.. sheer torture! For all I know.. he might start sleeping in the garage itself… what if he snores.. more torture for us..!

Jack: Days will be more dreary, nights will be long and lonely… no happiness for Manav and all of us. He doesn't love that girl… nor does that girl love him. Better not expect any sweet moments in the garage at all.

Claw hammer: He'll be owner of 2 garages.. he'll probably make the others work harder too saying 'Zimmedariyan badh gayi hai meri… ameer baap ki bigadi beti ko khush rakhna padega na..!'

Wrench: Oh no! Bappa help!! Manav should not get richer or married to Shravani.

Screwdriver: We have to do something now… paani sir se upar chadh gaya hai.

Bike: I suggest… go on a strike… if that Manav guys business shuts shop and he becomes poor Girishji wont send his daughter to him.

Mercedez: I'll use my contacts and get Girishji's car to stop with a damage outside the garage.. Girishji should come and see how lost Manav is and how mechanical his life is without the love of his life.

Maruti Suzuki: Hey! I'm going home tomorrow morning… shud I bump that shravani girl???

Everyone: Yes… she looks dead anyway, and she has become brain dead long back.

Wrench: Don't kill the child, if the child lives but shravani dies Manav will have to take greater care of it and give it extra love and attention so he'll go home earlier.. his mood will change and he'll not be so lost and thoughtful. Good for all of us!!

Jack : All that is ok, but how to get Archu back in his life... right now he needs her more than anything else... she is his medicine.

Screwdriver: Shud I tighten his loose screws??

Battery: The next time he touches me, I'll give him a shock that will jolt him up!

Claw hammer: No I'll tell you what… I'll wait for my chance and hammer him down the head one day.. he'll lose his memory, he'll forget all his reasons to be angry with Archu… Archu will come running to hospital, he will see her, he will fall in love with her again!!!

Everyone: Perfect, Shravani get ready to die… Manav get ready to lose your memory… Archu… welcome back!!

So everyone, don't be surprised if Shravni has an accident tomorrow or Manav loses his memory, cos a rebellion has started in Mr. Manav Deshmukh's garage.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow nikita.. Awesome post.... Kya creativity hai?? Goh, if only i would have been half as creative as you!!! Awesome... Using tools was just great idea.. WHAT AN IDEA !!!
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Nick you shud join the script writing team . Ur profession is all wrong u shud be a writer .

superb .

I miss them going for a movie , pav bhaji , an after dinner walk , having the morning tea before all woke up , they never went even to their honeymoon . The first pregnncy moments r destroyed as Manav is will be all burned out experiencing Shravanis pregnancy . They just destroyed the serial in some ways.
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very good Nickita . So entertaining and so creative ......
Loved reading it .you , skep , so many others are budding writers for sure .
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow! Great job Nikita! It was very nice to read, I truly enjoyed it!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanx... I'm glad you liked it...!

@koolsadhu: you are just too generous with compliments. About my profession.. well what can I say... ... my heart is in medicine but writing is my passion... I am in the Magazine Committee of my college so I guess that somewhere I balance it up. Maybe one day I'll write a book named 'Thankgod you are not in MBBS' 😆
I don't agree with you on the first pregnancy issue... Manav and Shravani don't have any type of emotional bond AT ALL. Manav only takes care that Shravani is well provided for and comfortable, and some minimalistic dos and dont's, something that any normal person will do, even Damodar and the rest of the family do it. He is not even so enthusiastic about the baby, its 'Sachin's mistake' (he keeps repeating it all the time) a responsibility and nothing else as of now. He's accepting it cos no one else will, that's it. It has the Deshmukh's blood.
I believe a baby symbolizes the love btw you and your partner. And that's why its so special. Also cause the whole pregnancy period is the time when parents dream about their babies... like women knitting socks for their yet to be born and Dads wanting to experience each moment of the pregnancy with the moms. In the 9 months, that baby becomes their life. In Shravani and Manav's case all of this is absent. (Although if Manav had been in love with Shravani then I guess things would have been different regarding his involvement with the baby even if it wasn't his own)
Archu literally took care of Punni all the time ever since she was born, gave her so much of love, to the extent that Vinod frankly said that she was her mother more than Manjusha. However tomorrow Manav's child will be very very special to her. (It doesn't however mean she loves Punni any less)
If this shravani track wasn't there and Vandu had been shown pregnant (after marriage) before Archu Manav would have taken care of her the same way (in fact even pampered her and been excited). Yet his feeling at having his own baby with Archu would have been absolutely different. He would be counting days when the baby would come. He would be involved in each ritual of Archana's. He would listen to the baby's voices. He would love it that Archu looked round and chubby. He would love and pamper her a lot. In short he would be the most loving adoring husband ever and his wife and the baby would mean the world for him. He would simply be super-excited.
As for Shravani, she is getting a quarter of the attention (and no love) that Vandu would have been getting. As I see it, Manav is right now just a responsible 'nurse'. And I think that even though a nurse takes very good care of patients, his/her own children mean a different thing altogether.
Although I dont deny that later when the baby is born or in the late stages of pregnancy Manav will develop true feelings of affection and love for the baby (cos children are SHO SHWEET, you can't help loving them). But still it will be unparalleled to his reaction, emotions, frame of mind, emotional attachment and overall every thing when he has his child with Archu. (Its not a case of differentiation, I'm sure he will love both babies equally, I don't know what to call it but its that way)
If Shravani gets up from bed during pregnancy Manav will say, "Why did you get up, you should have called someone, go and rest."
If she gets morning sickness, he will call savita or go to doctor.
If Vandu gets up during pregnancy, Manav will mock scold her. When she has morning sickness, he will be concerned, laugh and tease, take her to doctor.
If Archu gets up during pregnancy, Manav will say, "How dare you get up my darling wife, I and the whole house are there for you and my little child snuggling inside you, are we not?" And then take her hand and lead her to the bed. (or something like that)
When Archu has morning sickness he will take it up on himself to give personalized attention, what to do when she gets morning sickness, how can she avoid it, how to support her in this period, cheer her up etc.
So basically I feel that even though Manav would love both the babies but the feeling of first pregnancy would come only with Archu cos he would be living it with her. This feeling wudn't have come up even with Vandu even though she is so much more closer to him than shravani. Where shravani is concerned he is not living the pregnancy with her. He is just a spectator and a caretaker as of now. For him right now its 'Sachin ka baccha' and not 'mera baccha'.
I know that the original post was on a different issue altogether... but still I wanted to write all this cos I felt maybe we won't get back to it in the future.
Edited by nikitagmc - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Great Nikita,fantastic post.keep it up👏
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terrific work Nikita. 3 cheers.
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Great job Nikita 👏 👏
U can definitely be a brilliant writer other than a being good doctor.
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nikita

Perhaps what you say is true .

But Vandu and Punni are relatives . Shravani isnt and that is the essential diffrence . Not just that she will be marrying him .
I look at it as a young man confronted with the first contact with a pregnant woman in his life .......a woman who will now become his life partner , who he is supposed to look after . He hasnt experienced it before , the troubles , the visits to doctors , the first kick .......a man , who himself can never be pregnant experiences all this with a sense of mystified novelty . He doesn't know the first thing about a pregnant woman .......she is a walking talking mystery to him . And enjoying the man's mystification is the woman's prerogative ..........it is one of the pleasures of being a woman .

I do not see him treating Shravani as a male nurse , it is much more .......she is his bro's amanat . All that care he is showing to her shud rightfully be Archana's . I bet if Archana had been pregnant this dumbo [ pardon me dear I know u like him ] wud have hesitated to show half the care he is showing today for fear of hurting his mom . He would NOT have state so vociferously to the world that Archana is my PRiority . What an irony isnt it ? Even the small buttas or mithai that he wud bring for her wud be snatched by his mother and Manav wud be silent .

Archu was cheated of a lot of things .........her first moments , her suhaag raat , her first pregnancy and his interaction . All were taken away by this . Inspite of the divorce Manav had not yelled at her even once till the episode of the station . The novelty has gone and it is viewer's loss . The PR team is excellent , but it did two mistakes..........by killing Sachin they destroyed the humor in the serial and by this storyline the first moments of Manav Archu . If ARMAN bring up Sachins child their own child is automatically deprioritised .

Yesterday they showed Savita getting greedy with Shravnis necklace but it wasnt funny anymore inspite of that tuntuntun comic music .......it was pathetic that she was even lusting after gold so soon after her son's death . PR team has damaged the beauty of he serial ........it will still be a hit and so it wont matter to them as they calculate TRPS and rake in the moolah . But we who watched it from day one know what we r talking about........the quality changed .

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