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Posted: 15 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: skeptical

Oh Piya...........

My Candyfloss girl

My little bright pearl

My head's in a swirl

Well......dream on girl..... 😆

Write a book?

Who'll take a look?

At what I write

But .... let's dream on, rite? 😉

Skep dear..... I'm quite sure if & wen u do write a book, it will be a bestseller 👍🏼 n who knows u might win the Booker one day.....

o.k. ............o.k..............the Booker is a long shot but u'll def. give the M & B writers a run fr their money...... waise bhi socho toh bada aur behtar socho.... why think of urself less than any Salman Rushdie or Jhumpa Lahiri ...... n mind u I'm not pulling yr leg 😊

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Devashree

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Posted: 15 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: skeptical

Awwwww dream on Dee

I have lots to tell

About Arman's private hell

For the members are swell

Who for long will dwell

Under the spell

Till Ayis will yell

Oh Hell's bells

Nothing will be well

Yet this story will sell

Sigh .................

If you keep on writing like this, I will daydream more skepi 😆 What will happen to my work 😲😆

OMG 😲...what a lovely poem. 👏⭐️ I wll surely dwell under your writing's spell sweetheart 😳
Haeiy....why are these Aayees dushman of this loveishtory

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selmak

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Posted: 15 years ago

#33

Amazing, superb, Fantastic. You have an excellent command at writing. It's better than watching the show. I read all your six writings. Particular, the first one and this one brought tears in my eyes. Please keep writing. Thanks.