An Ache in my heart .......a story - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
#21
Awwwwwwwwwww...i was in tears again in d last part😭..it was lyk am watching them lyk dat😍..hope u were PR's CV...😉..u made it so clr..dat Archu-Manav r just only 4 each othr..their hearts linked together👏luved it......it was simply mindblowing😍..i wanted more😳luking 4ward to some more beautiful parts on ArMan 4m u🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
#22
Oh My God skep!! This was so fabulous. I so hope something like this happens in the actual show.This was so beautifull. I loved the part where she doesnt looks back and just feels Manav's presence. Awww 😍
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Posted: 15 years ago
#23
Awesome yes,
ARMAN are made for each other.
Hope we see the same in show.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: piya007

U hve done it again ...Skep dear....eyes r moist...... fingers shaky...dunno wat to type......U know wat? I dnt care nymore how the show unfolds, I hve got my share of ArMan heaven...so pure almost etheral...damn sure none of the CVs can cme up wid such beautiful stuff....Thnx dear (dnt like giving advice but do consider a career in writing) n a big 🤗to u.

Oh Piya...........
My Candyfloss girl
My little bright pearl
My head's in a swirl
Well......dream on girl..... 😆
Write a book?
Who'll take a look?
At what I write
But .... let's dream on, rite? 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: nikitagmc

Oh dear, this one blew me away!! The way you have described both Manav and Archana's pain and their longing for each other is beautiful!!

I hope we get a few sweet scenes the coming week n I hope Manav won't be harsh on Archana..*fingers crossed*
Was wondering about Perspectives, didn't know you had this treat in store for us..!!
Keep these stories coming!!

Since the forum was buzzing with speculation ......... I thought I'd feed you all some mush.
Watch out for candyfloss series...........Arman + lotsa mush 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: guptill

"I do love you Manav," she thought silently, "and I will abide by any decision that you make. I am not going to judge you for what you do, but respect you for what you want to do. I truly believe our marriage was made in heaven by Bappa, so our will remain unsullied forever. You will be the only one for me."


Fabulously Done.... I loved these lines the most....

Ali, Thank you for telling me what was enjoyed most by you. It does help, y'know .......⭐️
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: GHT_ArMan

Awwwwwwwwwww...i was in tears again in d last part😭..it was lyk am watching them lyk dat😍..hope u were PR's CV...😉..u made it so clr..dat Archu-Manav r just only 4 each othr..their hearts linked together👏luved it......it was simply mindblowing😍..i wanted more😳luking 4ward to some more beautiful parts on ArMan 4m u🤗

Y'know I'm fast running out of tissues.
Main kya karu aur
Aapka dil maange more
Arman try to reach
Aur Shravani ayee beech
Members kare screech
That's the end of my speech.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: devashree_h

Oh My God skep!! This was so fabulous. I so hope something like this happens in the actual show.This was so beautifull. I loved the part where she doesnt looks back and just feels Manav's presence. Awww 😍

Awwwww dream on Dee
I have lots to tell
About Arman's private hell
For the members are swell
Who for long will dwell
Under the spell
Till Ayis will yell
Oh Hell's bells
Nothing will be well
Yet this story will sell
Sigh .................
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: skeptical

Since the forum was buzzing with speculation ......... I thought I'd feed you all some mush.
Watch out for candyfloss series...........Arman + lotsa mush 😉

Candyfloss.. the name itself is impressive... waiting eagerly for it..!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
Awesome Skep - as always!!

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