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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: toothbrush13
WOW!

That was just... just...

WOW!

You are amazing. 👏 I loved every word of it.

TTB,

Thank you..........another die-hard fan !!!!

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skeptical

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Tanyaz
Oh , so romantic ...the last part , oh how I wish....😍 You have done it again baby ....
I am going to read it again and again till anything substantially romantic happens between manav and Archanha, will make do with this .

Oh my beautiful dreamer ............................ this one was for you. ❤️

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skeptical

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: akashraj

Amazing dude............

U brought the best out of Archana and Manav which creative people haven't done on the show........

The final part was just mind blowing dude.........👏👍🏼

Thank you dude................ 😉

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skeptical

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: guptill
Fabulous work, so real.... Thanks for such nice story...

You are welcome Ali. I am glad it wasn't a waste of time reading it. I know that since the serial is off on the weekend, these small things keep you dreamers going............😉 😆

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skeptical

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

oh my god!!!! that was sooo beautiful... I wish it never ended.. I wish i were still reading.... I could easily picturize whole sequence in my head... Sook beautiful.... Its always gr8 to read ur work.. A small err that it ws Ajit who frmaed Manav not Satish.... Plz do keep writing..Its always gr8 to read ur work...[/QUOTE]

mitts

@ purple

I thought it was a bit unbearably long and would kinda put you off. I am happy it wasn't so. 😊

@ pink

You know you guys are so caught up with this jodi, you'll be able to and are ready to read a romance on them. 😉 Thanks. ❤️

@ green

Ooooops Sorry. ☺️ That's what happens when you don't watch a serial regularly. 😳

@ brown

Yes I will keep on writing ....................

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skeptical

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Posted: 15 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: *Resham*
Skep...again a wonderful write up..I so hope tht the story unfolds exactly this way only...

Resh ................... you incorrigible romantic ....is that why you've told Lav and me not to miss this serial the coming week? 😆 😆 😆

But I already know that creatives never give the viewer a good time. The sadists just want heartbreak for the jodi and for the poor loyal viewers. 😡 😡

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*Resham*

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Posted: 15 years ago

#17

arey fr the time being..one can b happy..or supposed to b happy..😆

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Posted: 15 years ago

#18

U hve done it again ...Skep dear....eyes r moist...... fingers shaky...dunno wat to type......U know wat? I dnt care nymore how the show unfolds, I hve got my share of ArMan heaven...so pure almost etheral...damn sure none of the CVs can cme up wid such beautiful stuff....Thnx dear (dnt like giving advice but do consider a career in writing) n a big 🤗to u.

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Nikita Lakhe

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Posted: 15 years ago

#19

Oh dear, this one blew me away!! The way you have described both Manav and Archana's pain and their longing for each other is beautiful!!

I hope we get a few sweet scenes the coming week n I hope Manav won't be harsh on Archana..*fingers crossed*

Was wondering about Perspectives, didn't know you had this treat in store for us..!!

Keep these stories coming!!

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-ALI-

@-ALI-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#20

"I do love you Manav," she thought silently, "and I will abide by any decision that you make. I am not going to judge you for what you do, but respect you for what you want to do. I truly believe our marriage was made in heaven by Bappa, so our will remain unsullied forever. You will be the only one for me."

Fabulously Done.... I loved these lines the most....

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