~Tanha Safar~ ArMan SS: PART ONE Pg.4 (01/02)

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Shreyasee

@kshre25

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#11

That was very cool, I'm always skeptical of stories that are very different from the real story but you've got me very intrigued. I look forward to the next update!

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@LotusPetals

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+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Aww Palchin ! that was too good nd beautifully written ! very touching too .. plz update soon !

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Aarti

@aftvjunkie

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#13

👏

OMG ...that was an amazing prologue ... it will definatley set the tone for the rest of the story ... i like how you have played with the characters ... i cant wait to find out the rest of the cast i.e aai (if she has one) ...but i hope archu gets someone who can support her ... maybe a vahini (but not manju!!!) ...

...i am just waiting to read the long updates ...

... great job, keep it up ... and once you have finished with this FF, i hope you make more and i hope this FF will get more people writing FF's ... 👍🏼

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Alisha

@Alisha_01

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

Wow Palchin Awesome update 👏

Thnx 4 writing the ff 😉

Awww it is soooooo good it just kept me going n now i just wanna read more n more!!!

You just explained everything so well n Archana n her lil sister's part is so cute, how Archana cares for her 👍🏼

Everything felt so real like it is being captured, u r a star!!!!

It was So emotional, and romantic.

Oh no! Manav died😭 poor Archana ... Now I want to know wats gonna happen next, u just clued me into it n im very desprate 2 know more about them.

So Update soon! plzzzzz😃

Love Alisha

N i have read 2-3 of ur OS of Prem/Heer n dey surely rock

as this one rockz!!!

keep it up!!!

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grofers

@sensodyne

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#15

Brilliant update 👏 👏
It's perfect and I'm eagerly waiting for part 1.

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Devashree

@devashree_h

Channel Moderator

+ 12

Posted: 15 years ago

#16

OMG..who is dead?😭 Please Palchinn update it fast so we can know.
You have written beautifully.You explained Archana's pain in great details.If this is the prologue, I cannot wait for the rest of it.

I liked how you used the concept of Black and White in the first part.Archana's struggle will be against her own blood.And her quest to save her sister from a fate similar to hers.Very intriguing.

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Dr.Smart

@Dr.Smart

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#17

Hey Guys! I updated the characters!

Palchin

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GHT_ArMan

@GHT_ArMan

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#18

yep just saw it.. i must say u had choosen a vry gud starcast👏..umm i suppose rucha is Archu's younger sis...Reena(woh rehene wali mehelo ki fame)is Archu's wohini..n akash is her 1 of cruel brother...ohhooo can't wait 4 d frst part really..👍🏼