MiNeil SS "My Child Bride" last part pg 70 updt 20/02/2021 - Page 11

Originally posted by: Sushdvj

Aam chor mini😆

Or idher bhi neil ko

akadu akadu bola😆

Aur ashok positive

waah fursat nikaal li padhne ki😆

Originally posted by: Sushdvj

Sharmili preet 🤣Ye show me bhi tha🤣

Jangli billi aur akadu sadu MiNeil 😆

sharmili preet...remember that preet engagement wala track..how she used to blush on mention of her fiance🤣

Originally posted by: Sushdvj

Budhiya🤣

Aur itna positive ashok 😆

Mini too neil

Tum pass aaye

Current chalu karaye 😆

Ab to mera dil dhak dhak karta h

Tumhare pass aane se darta h😆

tumhari shayri chalu😆 lage raho😆

Originally posted by: Sushdvj

Shadi ho gai🥳

Naeembe la gyaan😆

Mini to yaha bahut jyada nousikhiya h😆

Neil pe pura bharosa h 😆

neil hai na sikhane ke liye...expert bana dega☺️🤣

Part 5

Shakuntala Devi welcomed Mini and Neil in the house after the marriage. As per the rituals Mini had to kick pot full of rice and then stepped with her right leg first. As Shakuntala was conservative and superstitious, she didn’t come forward to do aarti of newly wed as she was widow. She sent one of her relative for the ritual. She herself was watching it from far standing near her room.

“Mini, now you have to kick this pot and enter in the home. ”One aunty said to Mini. Mini was already nervous. Till the pheras her family members were also there who kept guiding her but here she was on her own. Naeembi’s words now ringing in her ears, “Sasural jakar hamari naak mat katana.” “Waha jo bhi kaha jaye chuchap kar dena bina sawaal kiye.” “Faltu ki behas mat karna kisi se.” Though she was rebellious and didn’t believe in all this shit but she was new in this house full of strangers. She didn’t know whom to trust and whom not. So she couldn’t come in her usual fighter mode and show everyone their places. For today at least she had to do whatever they were saying. So she decided that she will not use her brain and do whatever they will ask. That’s why when that aunty asked her to kick the pot Mini didn’t bother to clear her doubt. She came in her action mode. She stepped back few steps back and came running to kick the rice pot with all her might. The pot flew in the air and directly landed on Shakuntala’s head.

“Hayee re mar gayi! Isne toh aate hi mujhe maarne ki koshish shuru kar di. Mere to naseeb fut gaye.” Shakuntala cried as she put her hand on her head where the pot hit her. Neil gasped and ran to be by his maa’s side, “Maa, are you alright?” while the other people just started laughuing uncontrollably. “Arre ladki ye kya kar diya?” that aunty asked Mini. “You only said to kick the pot.” Mini shrugged not getting what wrong she did and why everyone was laughing at her. “You have to kick it slowly just to spread the rice on the floor but you kicked it like football.” Aunty explained. “Toh aapko ye pehle batana chahiye tha na.” Mini replied back. The aunty was appalled by her audacity to answer back to elders instead of accepting her mistake.

Neil rubbed her maa’s forehead and once he was assured that the injury was very minor he got up and came back. There he saw everyone was charging at his wife for making such mistake. He rushed to her rescue. “Enough chachi ji! She might be nervous…ho gayi ek chhoti si galti bas ab yahi khatam kijiye baat badhane ki jarurat nahi hai.” Neil explained to calm down the aunties. “Did you see that Shaku? Neil took Mini’s side and ignored your injury. Ye to sirf shuruaat hai…dekhna dheere dheere tumhara beta iske isharo par nachega.” Saroj poisoned Shakuntala’s ears.

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Mini somehow completed the other rituals. By the time she was done she was hell tired. She was taken to Neil’s room which was decorated for their wedding night but Mini didn’t even wait to appreciate the decorations, all she could see was a very nice comfortable bed and she threw herself on it instantly falling asleep.

Neil wanted to go to his room as soon as possible but his friends caught him then bored him for 2 hours with their unwanted advices on married life. Finally when he managed to get away from them he rushed to his room. He was excited, ever since Mini had said yes for the marriage he was dreaming about this night when he will get her all for himself and he will make love to her to his heart’s content. He took a deep breath to calm his racing heart, “Control Neil…she is yours she will not go anywhere now…don’t scare her away…be gentle with her.” He resolved and opened the door of the room. Mini was sleeping on her stomach, sprawled diagonally on bed. Neil saw her and all his excitement evaporated seeing his sleeping bride. He sighed, “Poor girl…the functions must have took a toll on her…she must be tired.” He thought and made her sleep properly. He noticed she didn’t even cared to remove her jwellery. “She must be feeling uncomfortable by it.” He thought and removed all her jwellery and kept it on the bedside table. He even opened the numerous pins on her saree so that it wont injure her and also the hairpins so that she could feel comfortable. He caressed her hair for sometime as he watched her sleeping form lovingly. He then kissed her on forehead, “Goodnight Minnu” he whispered and slept by her side.

Next day when Mini woke up it was already 9 am in the morning. She sat up straight on bed and looked around all shocked as she couldn’t recognize the surrounding for few seconds. Just then Neil came out of the washroom and Mini saw him finally remembering how she ended up here. “Good morning sleeping beauty. Hope you slept well after giving me sleepless night.” Neil said as he came to sit on bed. “What do you mean?” she asked innocently. “You really don’t know what I mean….” Neil said as he leaned towards her while Mini backed away from him. They were disturbed by a persistent knock on their door. Neil was irritated at by the disturbance but went to open the door.

“Hey bhagwan! Ye abhi tak ready nahi hui? Sooraj sar par aa gaya….aaj tum dono ke liye khaas pooja rakhwai thi. Panditji bas aate hi honge aur ye maharani abhi tak aaram farma rahi hai.” Shakuntala taunted as she saw Mini was still on bed while her son was all ready for the day. “Its ok maa. She must be feeling tired. Give her some time.” Neil defended her. “Don’t argue with me in this matter….shubh muhurat chala jayega der hui toh…tum toh chalo kam se kam…bahut kaam hai.” Shakuntala chided Neil. “Aur tum…jaldi taiyar hokar neeche aao. Aur haan achhi si saree aur matching jwellery pehen kar aana. Ab tum Oberoi khandan ki bahu ho, hamare rutbe ke hisaab se pehnna odhna seekho.” Shakuntala instructed as she glared at Mini.

Once Mini was alone inside the room she threw the pillow away in frustration. “Acchi si saree pehen kar aana…budhiya kahi ki…maine bola tha mujhe Oberoi khandan ki bahu banao?” Mini mocked her. But having no other option she went to get ready.

“Its been more than an hour. Where is this girl? Panditji has also come.” Shakuntala wondered when Mini didn’t show up for pooja. “Relax maa, I will go and get her.” Neil said and went to his room. He knocked the door calling for Mini a few time but when he didn’t get any reply he pushed it open only to find Mini sitting on bed and sobbing. She was wearing blouse and underskirt and holding saree in her hands. “Minnu….what happened? Why you are crying and why you are not ready yet?” Neil asked in concern. “I…tried but…but…I couldn’t drape this saree. Naeem bi had taught me but…I forgot….now your maa will scold me.” Mini sobbed. Neil just smiled at her silly problem. “There are house maids here. You could have called them for help.” Neil advised. “No, if your maa came to know she will taunt me.” Mini rejected the idea.

“Hmm….then…lets try and do it together. I will try to help you.” Neil suggested. “How do you know to drape saree?” Mini wiped her tears and looked at him suspiciously. “I don’t know…I said I will try to help.” Neil clarified. “But how?” Mini asked. Neil took out his phone and searched videos for saree drapping….tada…technology.” Neil laughed. They watched some videos and after getting a little idea both of them tried to do it. Mini held the phone and started instructing Neil while he started drapping it on her waist. Neil was enjoying their proximity while Mini was getting all nervous specially whenever his fingers brushed on her waist….accidently or knowingly…she couldn’t tell. Neil made the pleats and came very close to her to tuck them in. Along with some parts of pleats his fingers went inside her underskirt touching her lower belly and Mini almost squeaked in shock while Neil gave a naughty grin as his hand stayed for few extra seconds there. Mini couldn’t take it anymore and asked him to step away.

“Why? We still have to set your pallu.” Neil asked sadly. “The difficult part is done. Rest I can manage. Now you go out of this room and tell that budhiy….” Mini bit her tongue in embarrassment. “…I mean tell your maa I am coming.” She corrected herself. Neil just pouted and left like a grumpy child who was denied his favorite candy. Mini came after wearing jewellery and sat quietly for pooja.

After that Shakuntala asked her to make lunch as a part of ritual. Mini remembered the different maps she made in the name of chapatis when Naeem bi was teaching her. “Mar gaye….aaj toh ye budhiya bahut baatein sunane wali hai.” Mini thought as she went in the kitchen nervously. She desperately looked here and there for some help but Shakuntala ordered servants not to help Mini. She looked at Neil remembering how he helped her in the morning. Neil understood her problem. He tried to convince Shakuntala, “Maa, lets leave this ghar ka khaana today. Lets order from outside.” “Its not about ghar ka or bahar ka khaana. Its about parampara and riti riwaaz. Today bahu will make lunch for us.” Shakuntala explained. Neil gave helpless look to Mini and she went in the kitchen not knowing how will she get out of this situation.

Shakuntala and Neil were waiting on dinning table along with few relatives who had come for the wedding and hadnt left yet. Mini came out holding a tray after some 10 minutes. “Itni jaldi tumne khana bana liya?” Shakuntala asked in surprise. “What have you made? I am very hungry.” Saroj, Shakuntala’s friend whom she has also invited, asked excitedly. Mini put the tray down. She lifted the cover from serving dish. “MAGGI!” What! you have made maggi for your first rasoi after marriage?” Shakuntala was appalled and so were the other people. But Neil couldn’t stop his laughter. “Stop laughing like an idiot.” Shakuntala admonished him but he didn’t stop. “Come on maa, you only said its not about type of food or from where it came…its about riti riwaaz. She did what she knows best…and aap logo ka pata nahi but I will definitely eat this.” Neil replied as he took a serving for himself.

“Ae ladki…tere papa ne toh kaha tha ki teri Naeem bi tujhe sab sikha dengi….ye sikhaya unhone?” Shakuntala taunted. “Don’t say anything about my papa and Naeem bi tried to teach me but…mujhe nahi seekhna tha ye sab…kyus eekhun main? Aap kya ghar ka kaam karwane ke liye mujhe yaha lekar aayi hain?”Mini finally replied losing her cool. She was tired from the morning taking tantrums of this budhiya and the relatives. Shakuntala gasped as she didn’t expect this reply, “Zuban hai ya chaku ki dhaar. Chhote bade ki koi tameez nahi. Zara bhi nahi sudhri ye ladki…waisi ki waisi hai….badtameez aur jungli.” Shakuntala commented. Mini scrunched her nose and narrowed her eyes in anger. She couldn’t take this insult. She had to give befitting reply to this budhiya. She was about to open her mouth when Neil saw situation going out of control and intervened. “Maa, Mini is new to this house and she is quite young. Give her sometime. She will learn everything slowly. Kya aapko sab kuch starting se aata tha…nahi na…aapne bhi toh dheere dheere hi toh seekha hoga sab?”

“No, I will not learn anything. Not atleast to please your mother. There are lots of servants in this house then why I have to learn all these things?” Mini protested. And instead of getting sort out the situation went out of control when Shakuntala again taunted her for being uncouth. Mini went from there stomping her feet in anger and Neil followed her to make her understand. “Dekha Shaku, is ladki ne tumhari itni beizatti kar di aur usko rokne ke jagah tumhara beta kaise uske peechhe peechhe chala gaya....aage pata nahi kya kya hoga?” Saroj provoked Shakuntala and smirked. Shakuntala looked where Neil went and now she was also feeling that Neil is changing. Soon this chorni will snatch away her only son.

Neil followed Mini into their room but before he could stop her she shut the door on his face. Mini started crying remembering the turn her life has taken. From being free bird she was bound in this golden cage where she cant do anything she likes. And on top of that ….that budhiya and her son leaves no chance to trouble her. Budhiya keeps scolding her and Neil….Mini stopped her train of thoughts when she couldn’t find what exactly Neil do which she can term as ‘bad behaviour’….nothing….he does nothing…but I don’t like him….he makes me nervous when he tries to come close…I didn’t want to get married to him…why he fell in love with me…because of him my life turned upside down. Mini wiped her tears. She saw the clock. It was the time she used to play with her friends…her friends….she hadnt seen them since so long…she started missing everyone. “To hell with everyone here. I am going.” She resolved and decided to sneak out to play with her friends. She changed her saree and wore her normal clothes…ie. Normal to her…her usual jeans and collar t shirt. She knew no one would allow her to go so she decided to to jump from the window. She saw it was not very high. She made a rope from bedsheet and jumped out with its help.

After sometime one servant came to Mini’s room only to find its empty and one end of bedsheet tied on window door. She came running back to Shakuntala, “Badi maalkin ji, chhoti malkin ghar se bhaag gayi.” She shouted. Everyone else gasped listening to her words. Shakuntala felt embarrassed in front of everyone as all the relatives already started gossiping. “Hey bhagwan! Kaunse janam ka badla le rahe ho jo is chorni ko mere palle bandh diya…pata nahi aur kitni beizatti karwayegi?” Shakuntala said and asked everyone to search for her. Neil had went to meet some of his friends. Shakuntala thought not to tell him anything and first look out for Mini herself.

Shakuntala along with some other relatives went to search Mini and after searching for one hour they found her playing gully cricket with her friends. Shakuntala went towards her marching in anger. She pulled Mini’s ear and drag her to the side. “Shadi ko ek din bhi nahi hua aur tune apni uchal kood shuru bhi kar di…ye kya kapde pehen rakhe hain….aur is tarah chhote bachho ke sath cricket khel rahi ho…aur kitna tamasha banogi hamara?”

“Will you just stop it budhiya? You are now irritating the hell out of me.” Mini warned. All the people laughed at Shakuntala. “How dare you? You called me budhiya? Chhote bade ka fark hi nahi hai.” Shakuntala asked as she pulled Mini’s ear once more. “Umr dekh kar hi toh bol rahi hoon…is umr mein aapko budhiya nahi toh kya babes bolu?” Mini asked angrily and everyone laughed even more. Mini saw Shakuntala’s expressions. She looked as if someone dropped icy cold water on her head. Her eyes were almost coming out their sockets in shock. Mini couldn’t stop her laughter. She really liked the idea. It riled up Shakuntala so much. “Ok….aaj se pakka….ab se aapko Babes bulaungi….hey babes…hii babes…whats up babes?” Mini said and laughed like a maniac. Shakuntala just dragged her from there having nothing left to say while Mini kept fighting with her.

Neil came back at night and Shakuntala told him everything. She hoped Neil would scold Mini and ask Mini to apologise for insulting her in front of everyone. But Neil just laughed on the new name ‘Babes’ given to her by his beloved wife and brushed off the topic saying she must be feeling bored that’s why she must have went out. If he can go to meet his friends next day of his marriage then why Mini cant go? Shakuntala was shocked on his behaviour. He was behaving like some lovesick puppy, finding no fault in that chorni’s attitude and like Saroj said soon he will start disobeying her for that chorni.

Neil went in his room after dinner. He was hoping Mini hadnt slept and he thanked his stars when he found her sitting near the window all lost in thoughts. He went near her and hugged her from behind. Mini gasped and stood up in shock with his sudden closeness. She tried to move away but he didn’t let her. “Minnu, I know its dificult to adjust so soon here but please don’t trouble maa much. She is tough from outside but I know once she gets to know you she will melt down like an ice cream.” Neil try to make her understand.

Mini was not listening anything. Her mind was fully concentrated on his hands holding her from waist and the ticklish feeling they were giving. She wanted to be away from him but like he was not feeling her discomfort and was lost in his ‘lecture’. “Why do you talk so much? Stop talking now.” Mini said in frustration as she hoped he will step back once his ‘gyan’ was over. But that proved to be a bad move as he smirked at her. “Ok….I should really stop talking and get into action….is that what you want Minnu?” Neil asked as he turned her around.

Mini was now pressed up against his chest, facing him….this position was even worse. Now his face was just inches away from hers. The butterflies started world war 3 in Mini’s stomach as he pulled her more into him. “Mini….my name is Mini…stop…calling me Minnu.” She stammered somehow and focused on everything else except his hand which were now moving on her back from her waist to shoulders. “Yes, Mini for everyone else…but for me…my Minnu….cute, sweet and adorable name….just like you.” Neil replied and he now cupped her face while Mini started breathing heavily. “Oh, I cant tell you Minnu…how much I love you. I want you so bad…” Neil whispered and started placing soft kisses on her face, chin, cheeks. “Neil….I…don’t…stop…it…..” Mini stammered again as now she started struggling to get free from his hold. Neil thought she was just being shy so he didn’t let her go and proceeded to taste her lips.

He had barely put his lips on hers when she pushed him away with all her might. He staggered backwards and was shocked at her behavior. He looked up at her not understanding what went wrong when he saw her tears. “What happen Minnu?” he asked coming close but she put her hand in between to stop him. “Don’t come near me. And I am not your Minnu. I am just Mini….whom you married forcefully.” Mini accused him.

Neil was shocked at her statement. “What are you saying Minnu? Forcefully? Didn’t you agree to our marriage?” “NO….I wasn’t ready for it. Nobody asked me. Your maa send your proposal and my papa agreed to it. No one bothered to know what I wanted.” Mini started crying loudly now. “You didn’t want to get married to me? You….you like someone else?” Neil asked but his heart was breaking even at the thought. “NO, I don’t like anyone. I didn’t want to get married to anyone…never ever. I just wanted to live my life like a free bird and you have chained me.” Mini answered angrily. Neil got momentary relief knowing there is no one else in Mini’s life. “Ok I get it but…you could have said it to me before.” Neil complained. “Nobody let me out of the house once everything was fixed. Papa called Naeem bi and she made my life hell. Mini aisa karo…Mini waisa karo…Mini ye kapde pehno…Mini aise khana banao….Mini dosto ke sath mat khelo….why…why all rules for me?” Mini asked.

“I can understand your point of view…but now that we are already married you can at least give it a chance….I love you so much Minnu….I…”Neil pleaded but Mini didn’t let him complete. “Its your problem….you love me…you decided to get married and my life changed completely because of it…why…why I have to pay the price of your feelings?” Mini asked irritated from the situation. “You don’t even like me?” Neil asked as his heart shattered into pieces facing the rejection from his one true love and also getting accused for spoiling her life when all he did was just loving her. “NO….I don’t like you….not even a little bit…got it Mr. Neil Oberoi?” Mini replied rudely and walked out of the house to get some fresh air while Neil kept standing there trying to understand how his dream turned into nightmare…how his love was not requited….how he will make his Minnu understand that he cant live without her…how this marriage is gonna work?

to be continued....

Mrinmoyee aka mini aka Minnu ki entry hogayi

Mujhe jab b woh Minnu Minnu bolta tha bada hi accha lagta tha

Jaise koi pyaar se apne sab se anmol cheez ko bolta ho

Aur yahan b same feel de raha hai

Saree scene ☺️

Anjali ..tume pata hai MiNeil and MiNeilans ka taste 🤣

Banda chance kabhi nahi chhod tha 🤣

Lekin billi strict 🤣 no entry zones 🤣

Koi nahi Neil babu license milega jaldi🤣

Unka confrontation.

Dono apne apne jagah sahi hai

Mini ka breakdown ..bechari .

usse pehle se hi shaadi se related beliefs, rituals , domestic life shayad ho sakta hai ye soch hi usse pasand nahi 🤣 freedom chahiye usse.

Aur yahan ye babes ka itne saare rules , rituals ek dum se aur Neil ka close aana 🤣

Mini ka character jo hai yahan suit kar tha hai abhi b innocent child hai

Acche se likha MiNeil ka part

Journey abh start hoga

Aur Neil bhi usse force nahi karega

Neil ko bhi real love ka matlab abh pata chalega.

Woh realisation MiNeil ka bahut hi sundar hoga future mein

Originally posted by: anjali0111

bolna ni nahi padega iske liye toh...done hai ye...tharki minds think alike🤣

🤣🤣 we all can sense each other now 🤣 MiNeil have given us this blessings🤣

Originally posted by: anjali0111

tine lambe update mein tumne sirf "Mine" pakda🤣 tharki mineilians...tharki minds🤣

both billis will have tough time here🤣

MINE was the highlight🤣 catchy in all ways 🤣 we love tough times of billis 🤣 sadist we 🤣

Poor Mini . We can feel her state.💔 It's like she is caged and Neil heart broken but sure he will always be with her but Neil 🤣he never leaves any chance when it comes to Mini🤣but Mini is Mini 🤣this jungli billi is tough one not easy 😉🤣 and babes 🤣i loved how mini irritates and gave back to babes 🤣she has now called her babes unknowingly to irritate her but she means mom in future 😉 and saroj 😡