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Posted: 5 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: Srilata.Mineil
So guys here is the next part...

Part 7

Mini and Neil enters the haveli.... Seeing them coming arya jumps on Neil and hug him....

A. Kya tum dono ne itni der kardi...
N. Sorry choti madam....
A. It's ok...meri gift....
M. Yeh le... Tera no natak Ho gaya hai... Jab bhi Delhi jao madam ko gift chahiye....
A. Jealous haa... Neil mere liye hi gift laata hai isiloye....
M. Chup oye... Go now open Karo gift ko...
A. Mein na montu ko dikhake aati hoon...

Once arya left Minni and Neil noticed that dadu beeji has returned from the village...

M. Dadu beeji aap log kab aaye...
B. Hum aaj subah hi aaye... Tu kaisi hai...
M. Mein thik hion beeji...aap log kaise ho... Pind me sab thik hai na...
B. Haa...

All this while. Neil was silent and dad was just glaring at him... Neil can understand that he has lots of questions...

D. Minni.. Yeh sab kya hai... Mujhe pata laga tum log Delhi kyun Gaye the...
M. Dadu... Its important for Neil...
D. Aur tu.... Tujhe anadaaza hai ki is sabka Teri aur arya ki life pe kya asar hoga...
M. Kaisa asar... Haa humari life me badlav aayenge but we both are ready for it dadu...
D. Kuch bhi mat bol Minni... Abhi teri umar hi Kya hai... Yeh ladka...
M. Dadu bas... Aur nahi.... Not a word against him...

Minni held Neil.hand entwining her fingers with his ...

M. We are with Neil... And we trust Neil.... He needs us now and we will be with him. Now and always....
D. Dekha ladke.. Aaj Teri wajah se meri poti mujhse zubaan lada rahi hai...
B. Bas kijiye Khurana sahab... Neil ko bolne ka bahana chahiye aapko bas...agar Minni ko uspe Barosa hai to mujhe bhi hai... Wo dekh legi...
D. Karo jo karna hai... Ek baat sun lo Neil... Agar tumne meri potiyo ko hurt kiya to mein kya kar sakta hun tumhe pata hai...

Neil was about to say but dadu went away... Beeji also followed him but she just nodded to Neil saying its OK... He will understand... Neil knows that dad is just being protective about Minni and arya....

N. I told you right it's not gonna be easy... See...
M. Come on Neil oberoi... I know its not gonna be easy... But I told u right it will be fine...
N. Bit Minni I want to talk to arya...
M. What... Kya baat karni hai...
N. Look mein nahi chahta ki arya ko kahi aur se pata chale... I want to tell her everything... I know use Kuch samajh nahi ayega but... I will have that kind I haven't hide anything from her...
M. Thik hai Baba... Bata dena... In fact I will also come...
N. OK then chalo...
M. Kaha... Wo montu ke ghar Gayi hai.. Aane ke baad bateyenge...
N. Hmm.. OK...

After sometime

Neil is in the balcony thinking about the things happened in court and also about his past... What was that weak moment when he thought of marrying isha... Then he thinks Ki why dint he meet Minni first than isha... Why she have to come to his life first.... His thoughts were broken by a voice and that was Minni...

M. Coffee...
N. Yeah... Thanks...
M. Phir kya sochne lage Ho yaar..
N. Kuch nahi...
M. Tell. Me Neil... What's bothering u...
N. I was just thinking ki... Why did I meet isha.. Agar mein isha se nahi milta to yeh sab nahi hota....
M. May be thats what's was supposed to happen..
N. Matlab...
M. See meeting isha was what was supposed to. Happen... Just like babes aur papa ji ki shaadi hona... Kuch cheezien in life humari bas mean nahi hoti... The just take us through a roller coaster ride and then land is somewhere where we can have peace.... May be that's life....
N. I wish I would have met you before isha...

There was a awkwardness now after Neil wish....

M. Ahh... May be bcoz I was not in need of chef that time... As I had my babes u know...
N. Ya ya... U just need chef Neil oberoi right....
M. Of course....

Saying that Neil. Went leaned on the wall and was watching the city to go into darkness but not totally as everyone have their own way of lighting their life.... He was enjoying the scenic patiala... Just then he observed that a pair of hands were snaked on to his chest from back.... He just sa back and saw that Minni hugged him from back... Holding him tightly.... He kept his hands on her hands and smiled....

N. Kya hua... Ab tumhe bhi lagta hai kya that we would have met before....
M. No...
N. Then...
M. I wish I can hold u like this whole life....
N. Then hold me... Kisne Mana kiya hai...

Minni was silent she dint say anything.... She was just smiling... The were standing like that for long time and then Neil spoke up...

N. Kya hua.. Chup kyun Ho....
M. Kitna bolte Ho Neil...

Minni backed off and with that Neill turned towards her...

N. Mein... Agar tum aise chup rahogi to poochunga na...
M. Kyun chup rehne se kya tax Lagta hai... I was just enjoying our silence....
N. Oh... If u wanna enjoy the silence... Aur bhi bohut tareeke hai... Do u wanna know....
M. Shut up Neil oberoi... Zyada udo mat...
N. Tum ho na pakadne ke liye... Phir kaise udunga...

He said in sexy tone which made Minni blush....

N. Oh my god Minni madam u blush....
M. Aisa kuch nahi hai ha...
N. No u do...

Minni started beating him now to stop teasing her.... The were just running around the terece....soon the were tired and Neil sat on the con the floor resting his back to wall and pulled Minni and Minni fell on his lap.... Now Neil was hugging her...

M. Neil... Koi dekh lega...
N. Acha jab tumne hug kiya tha tab.... I don't care..... Please let me steal this moments of us....

Minni couldn't say anything after that... The were just sitting like this and were enjoying their time...

That's it guys.... Hope u all like it... I was so excited for this kind I just wrote it today itself....

Precap... Mineil speaks to arya...

Beautifully written... Can expect some portion from this in show.

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Posted: 5 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: Vishal_m.neil
Beautifully written... Can expect some portion from this in show.

Thanks. Dear.... 🤗

Hope so... Fingers crossed

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@Srilata.Mineil

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Posted: 5 years ago

#93

Here we go mineilians with the next update...

Part 8

Both of them were sitting in the same position since long... Just enjoying the moment the had.... Neil entwined his one hand to her and was caressing her shoulder her hair with the other hand... Sometimes he hugged her tightly like even air also couldn't pass between them... Sometimes he caressed her toe rings.... Minni had lots of questions in her mind... She was thinking how to start the conversation...

N. Bolo...

M. Kya...

N. I know tumhe kuch bolna hai...

M. Ah.. Woh... I...i was scared Neil...

N. Why... Where... And when....

M. The other day.. When isha came to haveli...

N. Kyun... Tumhe kya laga that I will give her one more chance...

M. Nahi.. Wo haa... I mean....

N. I know what u mean... But Minni that is sorted right... Then why are thinking all that....

M. Mein wo nahi soch rahi hoon exactly but what I was thinking ki... Ki... Kya mein is baar umeed laga sakti hoon kya....

N. Laga kar dekho... Disappointed nahi hogi is baar...

M. But..

N. Minni.. Mein jaanta hun umeed toot ti hai to bohut hurt hota hai... But umeed na Ho to there is no life... Yeh umeed hi to thi jisne time Australia wapis Jane se rok diya.... That u and arya may connect with each other and will be there for each other.... Bolo...

M. Haa... Anjane me hi Maine arya se umeed lagayi thi... And disappointed to nahi hui hoon at least an tak to nshi...

N. There u go... Jaise arya se umeed lagayi thi waise hi mujhse bhi laga lo... I won't disappoint u...

M. Oh hello... I.. I don't mean it with u OK....

N. Oh really....

Neil started nuzzling her neck teasing her...

M. Neil... No..

N. Why... Tumhe kya laga only u can tease me....

M. Neil... Please....

She always took his name but now it was very different or can say it was arousing him more to continue his work... He nuzzled more... Her smell made him more crazy.... He kissed Her earlobe.. Making Minni leave a small moan... He was liking his effect on her... He was kissing her neck...

M. Neil kya kar rahe Ho...

N. Wahi jo us din aadhe mein hi reh gaya tha...

The whole time his hands were caressing her back... Her shoulders.. Her hair...her waist... Which made Minni to melt down more in his arms and giving herself more into his custody....neil bit her neck and ears making her moan more... With her small moans he went more deep giving her love bites on her neck and shoulder..... She dint retort back now... Neil understood that she gave him the permission which he was waiting for.... Slowly he moved to her face... He kissed Her forehead... Her eyes... And pecked her lips then slowly he started kissing her lips.... Both of them were savouring each others taste... He nibbled her one lip to enter and take the passion to another level.... They kissed passionately.... Both of them had their hands moving all over each other body.... Minni clutched his head and was pulling him more in.... Soon the were out of breath and departed their lips to get some oxygen.... As they joined their foreheads and we're just smiling in what happened...

M. Ab chale...

N. Kaha...

M. Sone...

N. Really...

M. Don't get such ideas Neil oberoi... Go to ur room and sleep....

N. Kya yaar poore mood ka faluda bana deti Ho....

M. Whatever... Go now...

N. Jaane ke liye tumhe meri godi se uthna hoga na madam....

M. Oh yeah...

N. OK then...

M. Yeah good night...

N. Yeah... Kaha ki good night...

M. Go Neil oberoi... Kal tumhe arya baat karni hai na...

N. Oh yeah I know... Good night... Ah... Wiase if I get something with good night to aur maza aata...

M. Shut up and go now...

Soon both of them went to their rooms to get some sleep which was not possible bcoz of their first kiss... Somehow they slept...next morning Minni got up with blush thinking about their last night moment.... She was still surprised that she have shared such a moment with a man... After taking shower she went to the mirror and got the shock of her life... She saw those love bites on her neck and shoulder... The marks on her shoulder can be covered but what about the marks on the neck...

M. What the hell...

Neil was preparing Breakfast in the kitchen heard Minni voice and came running to her....

N. What happened.... Chilla kyun rahi Ho....

M. You are asking me.... That meon chilla kyun rahi hoon... Do u even realize what have u done....

All this while Neil was just in other land seeing Minni in a bathrobe.... Her wet hair and the droplets of water falling on her face which made her look more sexy.... Her revealed legs... As the bathrobe was a bit above her knees... Was again driving him crazy.... He came out of his dreamland when Minni again screamed out his name....

M. Neil oberoi...

N. Ah.. Yeah...

That's it guys.... Hope u all like it....

Precap mineil speaking to arya...