My pulavs On Miniel - Write ups Pt 34 (28.07.20) on Pg 78 - Page 11

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: N_sharmaa

MiNeil and balcony are always 🔥🔥 It was hot ☺️

waiting for MiNeYa conversation


Thanks sharma.... 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Srilata.Mineil

Here we go mineilians with the next update...


Part 8



Both of them were sitting in the same position since long... Just enjoying the moment the had.... Neil entwined his one hand to her and was caressing her shoulder her hair with the other hand... Sometimes he hugged her tightly like even air also couldn't pass between them... Sometimes he caressed her toe rings.... Minni had lots of questions in her mind... She was thinking how to start the conversation...


N. Bolo...

M. Kya...

N. I know tumhe kuch bolna hai...

M. Ah.. Woh... I...i was scared Neil...

N. Why... Where... And when....

M. The other day.. When isha came to haveli...

N. Kyun... Tumhe kya laga that I will give her one more chance...

M. Nahi.. Wo haa... I mean....

N. I know what u mean... But Minni that is sorted right... Then why are thinking all that....

M. Mein wo nahi soch rahi hoon exactly but what I was thinking ki... Ki... Kya mein is baar umeed laga sakti hoon kya....

N. Laga kar dekho... Disappointed nahi hogi is baar...

M. But..

N. Minni.. Mein jaanta hun umeed toot ti hai to bohut hurt hota hai... But umeed na Ho to there is no life... Yeh umeed hi to thi jisne time Australia wapis Jane se rok diya.... That u and arya may connect with each other and will be there for each other.... Bolo...

M. Haa... Anjane me hi Maine arya se umeed lagayi thi... And disappointed to nahi hui hoon at least an tak to nshi...

N. There u go... Jaise arya se umeed lagayi thi waise hi mujhse bhi laga lo... I won't disappoint u...

M. Oh hello... I.. I don't mean it with u OK....

N. Oh really....


Neil started nuzzling her neck teasing her...


M. Neil... No..

N. Why... Tumhe kya laga only u can tease me....

M. Neil... Please....


She always took his name but now it was very different or can say it was arousing him more to continue his work... He nuzzled more... Her smell made him more crazy.... He kissed Her earlobe.. Making Minni leave a small moan... He was liking his effect on her... He was kissing her neck...


M. Neil kya kar rahe Ho...

N. Wahi jo us din aadhe mein hi reh gaya tha...


The whole time his hands were caressing her back... Her shoulders.. Her hair...her waist... Which made Minni to melt down more in his arms and giving herself more into his custody....neil bit her neck and ears making her moan more... With her small moans he went more deep giving her love bites on her neck and shoulder..... She dint retort back now... Neil understood that she gave him the permission which he was waiting for.... Slowly he moved to her face... He kissed Her forehead... Her eyes... And pecked her lips then slowly he started kissing her lips.... Both of them were savouring each others taste... He nibbled her one lip to enter and take the passion to another level.... They kissed passionately.... Both of them had their hands moving all over each other body.... Minni clutched his head and was pulling him more in.... Soon the were out of breath and departed their lips to get some oxygen.... As they joined their foreheads and we're just smiling in what happened...


M. Ab chale...

N. Kaha...

M. Sone...

N. Really...

M. Don't get such ideas Neil oberoi... Go to ur room and sleep....

N. Kya yaar poore mood ka faluda bana deti Ho....

M. Whatever... Go now...

N. Jaane ke liye tumhe meri godi se uthna hoga na madam....

M. Oh yeah...

N. OK then...

M. Yeah good night...

N. Yeah... Kaha ki good night...

M. Go Neil oberoi... Kal tumhe arya baat karni hai na...

N. Oh yeah I know... Good night... Ah... Wiase if I get something with good night to aur maza aata...

M. Shut up and go now...


Soon both of them went to their rooms to get some sleep which was not possible bcoz of their first kiss... Somehow they slept...next morning Minni got up with blush thinking about their last night moment.... She was still surprised that she have shared such a moment with a man... After taking shower she went to the mirror and got the shock of her life... She saw those love bites on her neck and shoulder... The marks on her shoulder can be covered but what about the marks on the neck...


M. What the hell...


Neil was preparing Breakfast in the kitchen heard Minni voice and came running to her....


N. What happened.... Chilla kyun rahi Ho....

M. You are asking me.... That meon chilla kyun rahi hoon... Do u even realize what have u done....


All this while Neil was just in other land seeing Minni in a bathrobe.... Her wet hair and the droplets of water falling on her face which made her look more sexy.... Her revealed legs... As the bathrobe was a bit above her knees... Was again driving him crazy.... He came out of his dreamland when Minni again screamed out his name....


M. Neil oberoi...

N. Ah.. Yeah...


That's it guys.... Hope u all like it....


Precap mineil speaking to arya...




Hot MiNeil ☺️ but nice 😉

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: sub_94


Hot MiNeil ☺️ but nice 😉


Thanks dear... 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago

It was hot and cute like Mineil

Edited by Krithzz - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Krithzz

It was hot and cute like Mineil

Thanks yaar... 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago

Bas aise hi zinda hu main.. warna abtak mar jati ..ye khatam kyun hua ye chalte rehna chahiye hayee MiNeil ☺️☺️

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Rishrabh

Bas aise hi zinda hu main.. warna abtak mar jati ..ye khatam kyun hua ye chalte rehna chahiye hayee MiNeil ☺️☺️


Sabka yahi haal hai... Bas yehi sabke karan zinda hai.... 🤗🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago

So many OS ,FF .. Shall read it soon

Edited by Nayaab_Cheez - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Nayaab_Cheez

So many OS ,FF .. Shall read it soon


👍🏼

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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 9


M. Neil oberoi...

N. Ah...yeah....

M. Ghurna band karo aur batao mean in marks ko kaise chupaoon..


Neil couldn't stop himself smiling that too the proud smile seeing those marks....


M. Stop that wicked smile Neil oberoi...

N. What me wicked... Come on mini... Drama queen tum ban rahi Ho... Don't u know how to hide those marks...

M. How would I know Neil....

N. Yaar tumna ae vei smart bolti Ho khud ko... But Ho ek sum budhu...

M. Listen...


Neil took some foundation and started applying online those marks....


N. Go on... I am. Listening...

M. Kya kar rahe Ho....

N. Marks ko chupane ki koshish... See it worked...


Minni saw the mirror and was surprised that the marks are not visible Now...


N. But be careful ki yeh bheege na...

M. Yeh..sure.. Not bad Neil oberoi... Tumhe yeh sab kaise pata...

N. I am a play boy u know....

M. What....

N. Come on Minni this is just a common sense....

M. Oh... Yeah... Waise baat ki kya arya se...

N. No... I was waiting for u... Shall we go now...

M. Haa let me change and come...

N. Do u need any help.... 😉

M. Shut up Neil oberoi... And get out of my room....

N. Hitler....

M. Looser....


Later Minni and Neil went to area with the breakfast... The thought that the all will have the breakfast in arya room...


A. Neil... Breakfast in my room... Wow....

N. Yes choti madam... Humne socha kyun na aaj Choti madam ke kamre breakfast kare... Kyun Minni...

M. Haa chutanki... See we got ur favorite breakfast...

A. Tumne bhi banaya...

M. No I mean... Neil got ur favorite breakfast...


Arya and Neil laughed at Minni....


M. OK enough haa... Tum dono ko bad mere cooking ko chidhane ka bahana chahiye....


Neil served the breakfast for all. Of them...arya was enjoying the breakfast... Neil thought of starting the conversation....


N. Choti Madam... Aapse kuch baat karni thi...

A. Bolo Neil...

N. I have a story to tell. U...

A. Wow story... Batao na..

N. OK... But please listen to it carefully...

A. OK...

N. Ek jungle tha.. Usme na ek hiran tha... Who was very sad..

A. Why..

N. Bcoz uske parents use chodke chale Gaye the...

A. Jaise Mamma papa chale gaye...

N(caressing her cheeks). Haa... Aur phir use ek hirni se love hua and he married her... But after sometime the hiran got to know that usne jiss se shaadi ki hai wo hirni nahi but a jackal hai jo use sirf hurt karegi so usne us hirni ko chod diya....

A. Bohut acha kiya hiran ne....

N. But us hiran ki na ek problem hai...

A. Kyun... Kya hua...

N. Us hiran ki na ek baby hiran bhi hai and he can't live without her... And he is thinking ki kya karna chahiye....

A. Simple.. Hiran ko na apni baby ko apne paas rakhna chahiye....

N. But us hiran ki aur ek baby hai... Agar use bura laga to...

A. Nahi lagega... The other baby will. Understand hiran...

N. U r sure....

A. Yes... 100%

N. Arya do u wanna know ki hiran koun hai...

A. Yes... Koun hai...

N. Wo hiran mean hun arya...

A. Iska matlab...

N. Yes arya.. I have a baby and mein use apne saath rakhna chahta hun... Par I wanted to be sure ki use tumhe koi problem nahi hogi na...


Arya was now thinking about the story she just heard... She was too young for all this but she can sense that her Gennie was sad for being away from his baby... She knows how it feels when ur father is not around with you.... She was just seeing Minni and Neil... Finally atta cupped Neil face and asked... .


A. Toh kya veerbalika tumhari heroine nahi hai...

N. Of course arya.. Tumhari veerbalika hi Nero heroine hai...

A. Sach...

N. Yes arya... Trust me...

A. Veerbalika tum batao... Kya Neil tumahara hero hai...

M. Yes chutanki... Yeh Sab kyun pooch rahi Ho...

A. I trust you Neil... Aur mujhe tumhare baby de koi problem nahi hai....

N. Sach...

A. Yes...


Neil hugs arya....


N. Thank you choti madam......chalo finish ur breakfast... School. Bhi jaana hai na...


Neil and Minni explains her the consequences of the case... How ppl will pass stupid comments about them but she have to be strong and should not be tensed or scared of that as the both are there to protect her from anything.... Later Minni made her ready for the school and sent her with Rani...


That's it guys.... Hope I made some justice in the trio talk... Please tell me if it's not good....

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