*~Dilemma~* - PRadha FF - part 9 on pg5! - Page 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
#21

thanks nibs & sravs for your nice comments! haila.. i guess i'm addicted to this FF. i can't stop writing!😆😆

Part 6

all hell broke loose at the joshi household when radha announced she was getting married to pranay. everyone started talking at once & gesturing wildy that it took radha a while to calm them down. aaji had almost fainted from shock & had to be given a glass of water. "you're going to marry this murderer? he framed you for the murder of his wife when he himself mudered her heartlessly!!" aaji cried angrily.

pranay's bemused look immediately turned to annoyance & he nudged radha lightly & whispered to her to ask her aaji to keep quiet. "your aaji is insulting your future hubby & you're just watching? go do something." there was a hard edge to pranay's soft whisper.

radha immediately ran over to her aaji & tried her best to calm her down but aaji was inconsolable. her heart was aching that her granddaughter was going to make a murderer her life partner. "aaji.. try to understand my situation.. I've got no choice.." radha pleaded with her grandma but aaji took no heed of her.

"radha.. if you marry this man who sent you to jail, you're just digging your own grave! and if you still want to go ahead with your marriage, you better forget you ever had an aaji." with that she stood up & hobbled to her room, slamming the door shut.

the rest of the family members also talked among themselves & walked away from radha, shooting dirty looks to pranay. meghna was heard mumbling about how radha seemed to have lost her mind & avi was heard trying to calm her down.

radha felt two lone tears trickle down her cheek & tried to wipe it away before pranay saw it but he already did. "here.." he handed her his handkerchief & looked genuinely sympathetic as radha slowly wiped away her tears.

"look I know you are going to have a tough time convincing your family members but that's the only way you have. do it fast cos I want our marriage to take place in a week's time. you have very little time radha.. you better make your family understand your situation or else I'm afraid your brother might never see daylight again." pranay sternly explained to radha. his tone was firm & radha knew he meant every word he said.

"oh yes radha.. before I leave.. I want you to meet me tomorrow at 11 at my house. we have some important things to do. see you tomorrow & don't be late!" pranay remarked as he strode out of the house without even giving radha a chance to reply. radha watched him leave the house silently & turned back to the empty living room.

she was going to have a really tough time changing the minds of her family members but it was all for their own good. as radha pondered about the ways to convince her family members, her eyes came upon the handkerchief praany had handed her & despite herself radha found herself smiling.

pranay could be as nice as pie when he wanted to but also as stubborn as a mule. "what a peculiar man.." she thought to herself as she made her way back to her room. meanwhile pranay's mind kept flashing to the moment at radha's house where she shed a few tears because of her family.

pranay didn't know what happened but all he knew was that when radha cried, he felt bad. "I don't feel bad for anybody. why does radha have this effect on me?" pranay drove slowly back to his house, thoughts of radha running through his mind.

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Posted: 18 years ago
#22

Yay! First!

Leena, I didn't realise you'd put up part 5. Sorry😳

Well both parts were totally awsome and so cute😃

Pranay is such a sweetie pie😳, and he's falling for Radha, wether he likes it or not.

As for Megs, I'm about to shoot her soon😃😆 (When she said she wanted a similar sari, it was so typical of her)

Yuks

PS: Thanks for the 2 updates, and don't worry, just keep writing. we don't mind😃

Edited by queenyuks - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#23
awww...he feels bad that she's sad 😳 dude, you love her..you just don't know it yet 😉

awesome part leena!! another update soon, i hope? 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awww.. thanks yuks & sravi for those sweet comments.😳😳 where is nibs btw? she seems to be inactive the past couple of days. i miss her!😭

anyways, here's my latest chapter. enjoy!😃

Part 7

the entire family was pissed at radha. they barely looked at her through lunch & even as radha tried to talk to aaji, she could see meghna rolling her eyes in her direction. "aaji.. please will you give me a chance to explain myself?" radha begged her grandmother but she stubbornly turned her face away.

radha couldn't take the cold shoulder that her family were giving her & broke down completely. "why.. why are you all treating me like this?? I'm not marrying pranay because I want to, I was forced to agree to this marriage so avinash could be free from a prison sentence! pranay made me agree to this marriage if I wanted him to help avinash out." radha's pitiful cries sounded through the entire house.

as sobs wrecked her body radha felt a comforting hand on her shoulder. she found aaji by her side with tears streaming down her face as well. "radha! I'm sorry I misunderstood you. this old fool didn't see the sacrifice that lied behind your sudden shocking decision.. please forgive me child.." aaji hugged radha tightly.

"now I don't want to see my radha being unhappy.. no more tears!" aaji managed to make the tearful radha crack a smile. after giving radha a cup of hot tea to drink & making her promise to take a rest, aaji gathered the rest of the family members in the living room.

"we have to let radha go through this marriage.. she has got no other choice." aajji dejectedly took a seat on the sofa. "yes why not? she'll be able to live in the lap of luxury all her life while we rot in this grimy chawl." meghna remarked nastily. "meghna! don't forget she is doing all these so that you don't have to spend the rest of your life visiting your husband in jail." aai cut in & meghna turned as red as a beetroot.

she mumbled something to herself & went into her room & avinash followed her like a faithful puppy. both aai & aaji shot each other a knowing look & were going back to their room for their afternoon nap when aai saw the door was still slightly ajar. as she went to close it, she spotted a bag by the side of it. "what's this?" aai wondered aloud picking up the bag. she found a dry cleaned dark blue salwar that belonged to radha.

she took it right away to radha who was dozing off in her bedroom. "radha.. isn't this the salwar you wore out today morning? what is it doing outside our door in this bag?" aai was curious & it showed in her tone. radha's mind went back to pranay's home where she had changed into the pink saree & had left the salwars behind in the bathroom.

"oh god! aai, I totally forgot about my salwar but it was soaking wet.. how could it have dry cleaned unless.." her mind immediately went to pranay. "unless what radha?" now aai was even more inquisitive about how the salwars suit landed up at the front door.

"nothing aai.. I'm feeling very tired now. can you please let me rest?" radha gave aai one of her sweetest smiles. aai had to oblige though her expression said otherwise. after aai left radha's thought went into overdrive. was it pranay who left the salwar outside the door? why didn't he come in? was he eavesdropping on the parivaar's conversation? if so what was his motive? radha had so many questions running through her mind that her head ached more at that point.

pranay himself wasn't too happy either. he had found radha's salwar in the bathroom. it was soaking wet & there was no way he was going to take it to radha that way so he had made a servant take it to the nearby laundry shop to get it dry cleaned even allowing the man to use his car.

"since when did you start worrying about radha or what she'll think of you pranay?" he had asked himself but had no answer. after the servant returned pranay has personally gone to return the salwar to radha when he accidentally heard the conversation between the family members.

radha's tears, hurt voice & the rest of the family's words had a strange effect on pranay. he actually felt hurt. "what are you hurt by anyway? you framed that girl & sent her to jail, she could have even been hanged. you think she'll jump in to marry you?" pranay's conscience questioned him. having had enough of the internal turmoil, pranay proceeded to pour himself another drink. at least he could be sure the liquor didn't hate him.

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Posted: 18 years ago
#25
awww...I love seeing Pranay being human...oh wow...he actually feeeeeels
😲 😳 😆

awesome part Leena!! 👏 So the family is now ready to "accept" this
marriage 😳 can't wait!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#26
Aww... my poor baby Pranay's feeling bad. Thats sho shweet.
And I'm glad Radha's family's on her side again.
Can I slap Meghna?
Waiting for the next one!

Yuks
Edited by queenyuks - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#27

sorry for not updating sooner people. i was lacking inspiration till today. lols!😆😆 anyways. hope you all like this chapter.😃

Part 8

radha woke up the next morning with a splitting headache & high fever. she dragged herself out of bed to the dining area where the rest of the family members were tucking into piping hot puris.

"aare… here comes radha. come radha have some puris while they're still hot." aai smiled at radha sweetly. "no aai.. I don't feel like eating anything.. I don't feel too good. can I just have a cup of tea?" radha mumbled. now her throat was also hurting. it must have been the rain she thought.


"radha you look terrible.. why don't you come with me & we can go see a doctor after breakfast?" aai asked radha while the rest of the family members looked on in concern. meghna however was unperturbed & continued eating as if nothing had happened.

radha refused her mother's offer to accompany her to the doctor's. she had to get to pranay's house by 11 or else he would make a big fuss about her punctuality. pranay was very particular about being on time.

pulling on a sweet pink sleevless salwar that her sister anikita had gifted her, radha left for pranay's house. her head felt so heavy during the journey to his house that radha feared she would topple over any moment.

a new servant opened the door for radha & let her in with a small smile. pranay was sitting by the rocking chair near the fish tank reading the morning newspaper.

"good morning radha! you look great & you're right on time." he nodded approvingly. "shall we go? you said you wanted to go out somewhere right?" radha snapped at him tiredly. "wow wow! look who's in a cranky mood today. fine sweetie. let's go!" pranay smirked as usual.

radha started to follow pranay out of the door when she felt the world start to spin. and a few moments later, she slumped to the floor, totally unconscious. pranay who was talking to radha suddenly felt her absence behind him.

turning around he found radha on the floor. she seemed to have fainted & was completely unconscious. "radha.. radha..wake up!" pranay tapped radha's cheeks lightly but she didn't move.

he then shouted at the servants to bring some water as soon as possible. even after water was sprinkled on her face radha didn't gain consciousness. pranay immediately called his family doctor who told him that she'd be there in 20 minutes.

while the doctor was arriving, pranay lifted radha up into his arms & carried her to his bedroom. she was burning hot. "no wonder she was so cranky. she is ill." pranay though as he carried her up the long flight of stairs.

"she'll be alright after a few days of complete rest mr pranay. just give her the medicines I prescribe & she'll be alright. when she wakes up, give her some hot soup & then the medicine. by the way. who is this young lady?" the doctor questioned with a smile.

pranay coloured slightly & replied that the lady was his wife to be. the doctor congratulated him & left while pranay remained with radha. she woke up after 2o minutes & enquired groggily about where she was. pranay explained what had happened after she fainted & radha looked shocked.

"you carried me all the way here?" her eyes were growing bigger by the moment. "of course I did. I couldn't drag you up the stairs could i?" pranay replied smirking yet again. this time radha coloured slightly. she attempted to get out of bed a few minutes later but pranay wouldn't let her.

"the doctor said you need complete rest. so you rest here & I'll call up the bridal shop & ask them to bring their lengha over here so you can pick one for our wedding. ssshhh.. no more talking. you rest while I call the shop." pranay silenced radha & left the room. despite herself, radha found a smile caressing her lips.

maybe this guy wasn't as bad as she thought him to be. he seemed genuinely concerned for her. or is he putting up an act? radha's mind was in two different tracks but she decided to brush aside all those thoughts & rest because she didn't know if she could afford to faint again. "pranay might not be there to catch you.." her heart said & radha found herself smiling once more.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Leena, have I ever told you I love your ff?
Yaar you know how to keep me hooked.
I atill hate that Meghna.
And Pranay is sooo cute 😳 . He genuinely cares for Radha, he just doesn't know it yet 😃
Waiting for the next part!

Yuks
Edited by queenyuks - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😆 😆 I love Pranay...should i have dragged you up the stairs? what a sweet way to talk to his fiance 😳 😆

awesome part Leena!! ooh shopping for the wedding...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Aww; you missed me!!🤗

Sowwy jaan; I've been having problems at home so couldn't be as active as I wanted to be!😳

But I missed this FF sooooooo much!

Haila; so much happened while I was gone!

Megs character was brought out perfectly....made me want to yuck!😆

I love Aai and Aaji!......seriously; these two lady's rock!.....One of my fav scenes was Aaji giving it back to Megs!😉

Haila; PR scenes were just 😳😳😳

They're both falling.....and bad!😉

He actually called her sweetie!😲

And carried her up the stairs!😍

Is it possible to fall in love with the same person more than once?!🤔

Oh well; I just did!😳

Blooper: Pranay himself is a doctor!😆

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