SS- O sathire- RICHA UGLY TRUTH-PART5 UPDTD PG-7 - Page 2

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I wish this happens in the serial. nice update.😛😛
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awww Sree...sueprb one yaar
i hope Monday's epi turn out be sth like dis
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good one.. just wonder when we all can think so much and write so beautifully then why cant these people , who are paid for this
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@sree awesome update...hope for da same to happen in show too..
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sure loved it !

just want something like that to happen in the real episode too!

very good writing !
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Great update 👏
Hope some thing happen on the similar lines in the show.
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Sree, Very beautifully written 👏Awesome
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PART 2

KUnal: jhooot bilkul jhooot'' tu mujhse kyun bag rahi ho siddhi

SIddhi: Kunal ab in sab baton ka koyi matlab nahi hai'aap shaadi shuda hai aap apne zindagi mein aage bad chuke hai..toh pls aap apke zindagi ke barein mein apni pariwaar ke barein mein sochiyen in sab cheezon mein nahi

KUnal with frustrated mind catchs siddhi tight and pulls her towards him ''''''looking straight into her eyes '.his looks piercing through her eyes scanning her mind '..as to what she is hiding ''..searching answers for his questions '''

Matlab tu sach nahi bolegi'. Tik hai siddhi'mein aaj tujhe humare uss reishte ki vaasta deta hun '. Who rishta jo kabhi humare beech mein tha who pyaar jo humare beech raha karta tha aur shaayad aaj bhi zinda hai' mein us saat ki vaasta deta hu siddhi jab hum dono ek dusre ki pyaar mein kho gaye the '. Mein un palonki vaastha deta hu siddhi jab tum mere liye jeeya karti thi'.. in saaari yadon ka vaastha deta hu siddhi meri sar ki kasam khake sach bataooo''.

" Nature also is eagerly waiting' for a mothers heart to break her silence of 9 years ' silence before a violent heartstruck '.. earthquake'. Is seen everywhere with the storms hising '.. and the surroundings waiting for her to burst out '"

SIddhi:

Falls on her knees with tears dwelled up in her eyes '.the ocean waters in the form of tears in her eyes are waiting for the blast of Tsunami '' kunal anxiously tensely looking at siddhi as to what she is upto '.. and finally she screams '.out'loudly ''''''.Mujhe maaf kijiye kunal''''''.mein mein bataungi toh aap ki zindagi barbad hojayegi'aapki shaadi toot jayegi'''.mujhe pata hai ki mera sach aapki zindagi ko hila degi'''. Aap bardaash nahi karpayege kunal'''. Mujhe darr lag rahi hai'' kunal'''. Lekin ab mein sach chupa bhi nahi sakti aapne un saare palon ka vaasta jo diya hai'''..lekin aap mujhe ek vaada karna hoga'..ki sach jaanne ke baa aap richa se door nahi honge'..

Kunal: Kya meri shaadi yaha pehle se tooti hui hai aur tujhe richa ki parvah ho rahi hai'''. Mein tujhe un sare yaadon ka vastaa diya husiddhi chay sach jitna bhi bhayanak ho mein daronga nahi '. Saamna karunga siddhi bata sach kya hai'.

SIddhi: kunal who mein rohit ko zinda pakadke vikram aur me use chupaye the lekin richa ne use bachake who khud apne bhai ki murder kardi'

Mere ikatte kiye sare sabot mitadi'aur ghar mein maa toh buri terah se toot chuki hai'' mujhe keh rahi thi ki ..kisi bhi tereah se '. Aapko ghar wapas lane keliye'..

Mere saaamne sab kuch khatm hota jarha diikhayi derahatha'.. zindagi ke age raasthe ki raaho mein andhera cha gayi'..

Tab mein richa se mili toh unhone '.mujhe'. ek baat kahi 'mein job hi kiya aap ko bachane ke liye kiya agar mein tni buri nahi banti 'to aap kabhi bahar nahi aapate'..

Kunal: Shocked'.. not knowing what to say''' tu mujhe bachane keliye meri hi zindagi se door jaane ki itna bada kadam utayi siddi''

Ek minute jab tum richa se mili to '' abhi tu kehrahi thi ki unohone tujhe ek bat kahi 'kya baat hai who siddhi'.aur tu ' humare bacche ko maarne keliye nurse ko kaha aise kaise soch liya siddhi..mein aaj tak eh baat maan ne keliye tayarnahi hu..

Siddhi: Meine baache ko maarne ki baat ki''..jhoot bil kul jhoot'.

Sach to eh hai kunal ki

Jail mein mujhe sulekha ji mili thi'.woh meri khayaal rakti thi'kuch hi dino me hum dono maa beti ki terah rehne lage the 'uss raat '.mujhe jab painsshuru hua tab mein bahot naazuk thi'..

Mein aapke aani ki intzaar bhi kar rahi thi kyunki mujhe pata hai aapki jaan humare bache me basti hai'.

Mein apke bte ki maa bani '.ek bacha hua tha '. Aur mein behosh ho gayi'.. uske baadjab mujhe hosh aya toh sulekha ji ne mujhe bataya ki mera bate mara hua paida hua tha'.. iss baat ko sunke meir jaan nikal gayithi'.. mein himmat toot chuki thi'..lekin mujhe usi din phirse labour painsshuru hogayi aur mujhe aur ek baccha paida hua tha'..

Aapko pata hai kunal humara ek beta hai use sulekha ji apne paas rakhe parvarish ki hai'.abhay diwan ka beta'.anand '.woh hi aapka beta hai'.pata hai humare bte ko aapka naam bhi pata hai'meine bataya..use'.. who bilkul aape gaye aap use baatkarenge na' toh aap apki humshakal usme dekhenge'

KUnal'. Leaving about asking the details of the deal thzt richa forced siddhi for 'knowing about his another son '..living with siddhi '.. with happiness'..took her face in his hands'siddhi aaj tak tune mujhe eh baat kyu nahi bataya'.. kyun chupyai siddhi

SIddhi: mein darr gayi thi kunal'. Aapke zindagi mein ab aapka beta aur patni hai 'lekin mere zindagi mein aap ki ansh anand hi tha'agar mein aapko eh sach batadi toh aap mujhse anand ko cheenlenge'.isi darr se mein sach chupayi''..

Kunal takes siddhis face in his hands '.. kisses her on forehead'. Eyes and cheeks'. And says '.siddhi mein tujhse kuch poochna chahta hu'. Kyaa tum aaji bhi jab mein tere kareeb ata hu to mujhe mehsoos karti ho'.teri saanse ruk ruk ke chalti hai'..kya tum aaj bhi umjhe apne kareeb pakar '. Us gehra pyaar ko jeesakti ho kya? With his intoxicated eyes he goes even more close to her '..

9 years of longing '.craving is coming to an end in his heart feeling her so close to him knowing that he has another son who is with his lady and wanting to hear and know that she still loves him and she wants to be with him forever 'he wanted her to confess this as he was the one who was hurt by her '.though her sacrifice is way beyond the serenity of love '..her separation broke him from inside but now after listening to the half truth revealed by her his instincts started to chin up and look at himself as a man who was loved by his love'.. who was not betrayed by his love''..

The passion the intensity in his eyes are making siddhi irresistant'. He moved forward and was about to get intact with her lips ''siddhi lost in his intensified, passionate, and intoxicant looks '.confesses that " Haa kunal, mein aaj bhi aapse unta hi pyaar karti jitna mein pehle kiya karti thi 'shaayad is lambi judayi ke baad mein pehle se bhi zyada pyaar karti hu'mein aapke bina kuch nahi hu''kunal ke bina uski siddhi kuch nahi hai adhoori hai'..and she immerses herself in his love'.."

Kunal after her confession places his hand on her bare back as she was wearing back less boluse'. His fingers passing passionate messages to her instincts '' looking at his love so close and so transperant after a long time '' and kisses her all over '..

Though she wants to forget the world and live in his love '.. her brains from some deep rotten drains pops out and her hand pushes him away '.. and says

KUnal eh galat hai'.. hum dono aisa ek hona '. Nahi kunal mein kisi aur ki shaadi ko kaise '. Tod sakti nahi '.. kunal shayad hume yaha se nikalna hoga'ab

KUnal confused hurt to the core '.and says 'siddhi mein koyi ajnabee nahi hu 'tumhara pati hu siddhi '.eh tum kyaa bole jaarahi ho '..

SIddhi: Pati? Kaha ka pati? Humari divorce ho chuki hai'aur aapki aaj richa hai mein nahi '.

Kunal even more irked to hear this from siddhi '.shouts ' kaha ka divorce 'jab mein us divorce papers pe sign kiya hi nahi'.. aaj bhi hum dono legally pati patni hai'''''siddhi

WE both share a legal marital bonding even today got damn it'' RICHA MERI BIWI NAHI HAI'. RICHA SE MEINE SHADI KIYA HI NAHI '.MEIN ANAND KO KHONE KE DARR SE TUJHE JHOOT KAHA HAI KI MERI SHADI RISHA SE HUI HAI SAB JHOOT HAI

SACH TOH EH HAI KI ANAND TUMHARA AUR MERA BETA HAI'.TUMHARA PEHLA BACHHA JO TUJHE MARA HUA BOLAGAY THA '.WOH MARA NAHI'.. MERE PAAS HAI'..

Richa ne mujhe di ai lekin dete waqt ek jhoot kehke di hai'

SIddhi: SHOCKED'Startled to know the truth that her elder son is alive'..

Aap ki himmat kaisi hui mujhe itni ghatiya jhoot bolne ki'aap samajhte kya hai apne aapko'.. aur richane kehdiya aur aap maan bhi liya ki mein humare bte ko maarne waali thi'''

Wah kunal chopda wah'aaapki samajh ki dat deni padegi'

Aaj tak aap jitni bhi baatein mujhe sunayi who sab mein bhool sakti hu'lekin'.

Arey aap mujhse mere bte ki sach chupana chahte hai toh tik hai lekin aap richa ki naam se mere bte ko jodne ki himmat kaise ki..aur who jooota dikhava mere saamne???????/

Kunal''siddhi mein '

Siddhi: Nahi kunal mein ab kuch nahi sungi aapki'..

KUnal not knowing how to stop her grabs her close to him and gives her a lip lock '.

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Next Part to be continued...

Edited by Sreearabhi - 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: shweta_r

Good one... How I wish Monday's episode turns out to be like this!

thanks swheta i am glad that u loved my attempt ...
Edited by Sreearabhi - 13 years ago

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