SS- O sathire- RICHA UGLY TRUTH-PART5 UPDTD PG-7

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Friends with this agla janam iss janam promo ..and the accident we all are pissed off ..so i thought chalo CVs any ways show what they want to ..so why cant we think and come up with richa exposure track in two shots of this small Short Story... so here is
PART 1
Kunal and siddhi were very badly bruised and are lying down uncounciuosly '.on the ground'with blood bleeding from kunals hands'..

Dried leaves and dust covering them as a blanket only faces were seen '.and their bodies were completely covered with dry leaves of autumn as mother nature want them to be safe with its breeze 'and the mother earth becommng the mattress and mother nature taking them into its lap to give them that solace for the pain they both have taken for the past nine years '.the tired, depressed souls who were desperately looking to end up in each others hug are still alive with their breath uneven with last flash of scene they both sharing their last eyelock with loads of love and volumes of deep devotion and dedication for one another which is acting as oxygen for them in that state'

With the breeze moving on to give them the fresh air while leaves covering them as a warm hug '. Though their bodies are separate, souls praying for one anothers safety, looking at the love which was tested at each and every phase of their life the sky too vented its pain and the sky violently thundered and lightening started and the power of the lightening fell on their eyes as an electric wave to revive them '..and the tears of the sky fell on these love birds as drops of rain '.slowly their eyeballs started to move as an indication of regaining their senses'.and its siddhi who first opened her eyes'.and slowly her senses got intact with the reality as to what happened and where they are '..once she regained her senses she uttered only one name its Kunal Kunal

With loads of effort in that bruised state she turned her head and saw her kunal lying down there with no reactions '. She gathered the shattered pieces of her energy to call out his name and slowly moved to him very close took his head in her hands and said '

"Kunal kunal aap utiye kunal'ek baar aankhe kholiye kunal'..ek baar dekhiye '. Aap ko kuch nahi hoga kunal 'mere jeeteji aapko kuch ho hi nahi sakta'mein zinda hu yehi iss baat ka proof hai ki aap bhi zinda hai aur dekhiye na kunal..mein sab kuch tik kardungi'.dekhiye utiye mujh..aaap mujhse naraaz hai na'gussa hai na ki meine aap ko chod diya ..toh aap chup kyun hai kunal utiye ddaatiye mujhe kunal"

Saying this loudly she keeps her head near to his chest and she found his heart functioning and she tries to wake him up but no go'.. she moves further and she gives artificial respiration to Kunal by blowing air from her mouth to his '.and with the force of the air she gives him'.kunal starts coughing heavily and with the severe cough movement he opens his eyes only to see his siddhi whether she is safe ..and says siddhi siddhi slowly his eyes are getting closed and its blacking out for him '..

Worried siddhi slaps him to make sure he is awake'.and again blows air .. she looks at the surroundings there is no glimpse of support for her 'she moves here and there to find some source to help them but no go' time is testing her love '. She slaps kunal and after slapping him for few seconds he again opens his eyes and again says siddhi'

Her heart is shedding blood looking at her love lying like that she bursts out cries out loudly '.looking at her desperate state of saving her love every the mother nature breaks its silence and it starts raining heavily'.. with the rain drops'on his face he gets to open his eyes and slowly gathers his energy and with her support he gets up 'slowly they become support for each other and stands up and starts heading towards some direction with a hope of moving out that valley'.

As they move from there they see some pond'..and they both go there '.. and siddhi makes him sit there under a tree ..with her saree she starts cleaning his wounds'' both were feeling damn hungry' but there is nothing around' they decide to fill their stomach with water '. While she is cleaning his wounds 'he looks at her 'eyes '.. and tries to understand what she is ..today what he is seeing at the moment and what he went through all these years coz of her and what she was earlier '.. every single thought was contradicting no match for her words and her actions '

He decided to break the silence of 09 years '.. caught her hand and stopped her from cleaning ..and said

:" Bass bass siddhi ab aur nahi'' aaj tujhe mera saaamna karna hi hoga'.."

Siddhi: kya aap kya baat kar rahe hai

KUnal: pls siddhi tu ek taraf mujhe paison keliye chod di thi 9 saal pehle '.aur aaj mere liye marne keliye kyun tayar hogayi thi..tu tho abhay se shadi karne vaali thin a '.. phir teri khushiyon ke barein me bina soche tum mere liye kyun apni jaan ko khatre mein daal di' bataa siddhi

Jab bhi mujhe rcha ke saath dekhti to jalan hoti hai tujhe

Agar jab mujhe nata hi nahi toh eh sabkyun.

Mujh jaise haraa hua insaan ke zindagi mein aake tu ne pyaar ki mujhse ..aur mujhe pyaar karna sikhaya'.. bharosa ki mujhpe aur mujhe bharosa karna sikhaya aur ek din achanak tu hi us bharose ko thodke 'apni pyaar ko chodke kyu mujhe akelepan me chodke chaligayi siddhi

Mujhe begunah saabhit karne keliye '. Tu apni jaan dav pe lagadi '. Molestation case mein toh uss din court mein tu mujhe mujhrim kyu kahi thi tu'aur mujhe saza dilwana chahti thi rohit ke case mein '.. kyun siddhi'aur to aur'.richa ne aake mujhe save ki'' jab ki woh apne hi bhai ke saath keli hai raveena ke matter mein'.

Taazub ki baat eh hai ki ..tu thakral ke saat deal ki..agar tu ne uske sat deal ki hai ..toh '.. thakral ko teri riha ke baarein mein pata chalta lekin kuch khaber nahi thi'' aur to aur ..woh divorce papers '. Kya hai siddhi

Aur agar tu mujhse door jana chahti ho aur mere baccha ko janam nahi dena chahti ho toh'.. tu use apni kok me saans kyu lene diya siddhi..use paida hone ke baad nurse ke haatho dekhe marwaane keliye '.kya?

Bataa siddhi ..in saare sawalonka jawaab aaj mujhe chahiye''''..9 saal 9 saaal meine is paheliyon ko samjhnahi payaa lekin ab aaj jobhi hua hai hum dono ke beech is ke baad 'mujhe sare sawalon ka jawaaab chahiye'''.aur tujhe koyi rastha nahi hai ab baat chupaane ka'''''

Jab bhi mein teri aakon mein dekhta hu to wahi maasumiyat bolepan aur pyaar chaav nazar aati hai'. Lekin teri harkatein kuch aur kehti hai kyun'''''. Siddhi bata kyun'..

Tujhe is diwan parivaar kaha mili''tum in logon ko kaise jaanti ho'''..aur tum unlogon ke saat kyun reh rahiho siddhi'''.

SIddhi after listening to all his questios dumb struck'. Stands there looking at him 'like a stone'''.

Woh kunal '. Mein '.woh '.

Nahi siddhi ..aaaj tujhe batana hi hoga'.

Siddhi: Nahi kunal'.. jobhi saalon pehle meine kahi thi wahi sach hai'..

KUnal: jhooot bilkul jhooot'' tu mujhse kyun bag rahi ho siddhi

SIddhi: Kunal ab in sab baton ka koyi matlab nahi hai'aap shaadi shuda hai aap apne zindagi mein aage bad chuke hai..toh pls aap apke zindagi ke barein mein apni pariwaar ke barein mein sochiyen in sab cheezon mein nahi

KUnal with frustrated mind catchs siddhi tight and pulls her towards him ''''''looking straight into her eyes '.his looks piercing through her eyes scanning her mind '..as to what she is hiding ''..searching answers for his questions '''

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NOTE: My dear friends, if you like this SS please hit like button, and pls comment. Dont be silent readers yaar...
Edited by Sreearabhi - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Good one... How I wish Monday's episode turns out to be like this!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow ..loved the SS ..if only cvs could also show something along these lines ..but NO how can they ..they love OTT nonsense soo much after all🤢
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved hope mon epi show something similar to this 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Di so nice SS. want to see something lik tis in our show tmrw. fingers crossed. patha nahi wat s in store for us frm cv's
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice SS. Hope monday episode will be similar like this.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Fantastic Sree,
i am eager to see such an episode in parichay.. where without anyones interference these two can question n answer about their 9yrs period of longing fr each other. Instead unnecessary talk, its better to burst out their pain n doubts in straight form.. Hope CV's read thos story and folow atleast to 20 - 30% of it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sree awesome ss👍🏼
cv's r hell bent on dragging with richa's crap...
i hope cv's show something like this...
but they r postponing all the good tracks coz of their love on richa 😡😡

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Posted: 12 years ago
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brillantly written...👏 wish c.v's use their brains 😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks for this update Sree! I hope something like this happens on Monday! It would be great to see both K and S teaming up to kick R out!

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