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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hima, I am love'in it 👍🏼 👏 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: rainbowgirl

Hima, I am love'in it 👍🏼 👏 🤗

Thanks Ramya🤗
Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow!!! awesome! just loved it 👏 Good job!!! Waiting even more eagerly for the next part. Keep up the good work 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi Hima
Very nicely written. Keep you anticipating what's going to happen next. I like the self talk in part -two where Kunal's has complete trust in Siddhi and wants to go and meet her...
Keep it up Hima. Good work👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow superb plz continue soon👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice updates hima 👏👏👏👏👏 pls update the next parts soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part – 5

Kunal: (thinking to himself)Haan!! Meri Jhansi ki Rani tho aise hi thi.. sabhi problems apne upar leke apni khud ki parva kabhi nahi karthi or kabhi kisi se darthi nahi!!!(amused at this thought of his JKR)

Jailer: Waise Mr. Kunal, aap Siddhi Chopra ke bare me kyun pooch rahe hain?

Kunal: (caught offguard.. did not know what to say. He quickly thought on his toes and said) Maine aapse kaha tha na ki mein ek lawyer hun.. jo case mein ab lad raha hun, woh bilkul Rohit Thakral ke murder case se similar hai.. isliye mujhe Siddhi Chopra ke bare me jaanna jaroori hai (stammering and thinking quickly.. hoping the Jailer would buy it and not question him further)

Jailer: Accha.. Mera yahan theen saal pehle posting hui thi.. In theen saalon mein mujhe Siddhi ke Khilaf ek bhi complaint nahi aayi. Infact, bina previous records dekhe, main aapko yeh keh saktha hun ki jabse unka arrest hua tha.. thabse, unke khilaf koi complaint nahi hoga.. Isiliye tho hamne unka naam recommend kiya jaldi rihayi ke liye!!

Kunal: Kya aap mujhe bata sakte hain ki woh jail se release hone ke baad kahaan gayi hongi? Main unse personally jaake milna chaahta hun!(he added quickly to make sure the jailer did not raise further doubts about his enquiry)

Jailer: Mujhe uska information tho nahi hai.. ek minute.. main Exit register check karta hun.. shaayad unhone apna address kuch likha ho?! (He opened the exit register to see if Siddhi had mentioned any address.. after a couple of minutes, he said) Yahaan tho unhone blank chod diya.. address bhi nahi likha!

Kunal felt let down by this piece of information.. he wanted to atleast get her address.. so, he could meet her in person.. he had so many questions on his mind about her behavior that he wanted answers from her now!! Also, he did not understand where else she could have gone. Did she go to Kapil's house? But then, he had met Kapil 2 days ago and Kapil did not mention anything about Siddhi. Moreover, Kapil had also broken all ties with her.. so, she would not go there! Suddenly Kunal had a thought!

Kunal: Sir, aap is jail me mujhe Siddhi ke kuch acche dost se milwa sakte hain? Jo use acchi tharah jaanta ho? Shaayad Siddhi ne unhe bataaya hoga ki woh release hone ke baad kahaan jayegi?!!

Jailer: (Thinking for a few seconds) Haan Mr.Kunal!.. Women's jail ka warden, Mrs.Khanna, kaafi close thi Siddhi se. Siddhi bhi unhe apni maa maanthi thi! Shaayad woh aapki madat kar sakthi hai.. main abhi aapko unke paas bhejtha hun! (He raised his voice and called)Constable!!

Kunal felt a bit relieved after hearing the jailer's word!!

Constable: (Came into the jailer's office and saluted) Yes Sir!

Jailer: Aap please Mr.Kunal ko Women's jail ka warden Mrs.Khanna se milwayiye(he ordered)

Constable: Yes Sir!

Kunal thanked the jailer and shook his hands and walked behind the constable towards the Women's jail. As he was walking across the ground which separated the Men's and Women's jail, his phone rang!

Kunal: Hello!(Seeing the call was from AC's school.. he quickly took the call)

AC: Papa! Ham match jeet gaye papa!!(excitedly)

Kunal: Arey wah! Congratulations Anand!

AC: Papa! Hamare coach aapse milna chahthe hain. Hamare team ke sabhi parents ko bula rahe hain. Woh hamare performance ke baare me baat karna chaahte hain! Kya aap aa sakthe ho?

Kunal: Anand, ab main kuch jaroori kaam mein busy hun. Abhi tho nahi aa saktha. Mujhe thoda time lagega.

AC: Koi baat nahi papa.. aap apne kaam poora karke hi aayiye.. tabtak mein yahan school me practice karoonga apne friends ke saath.

Kunal: Shaayad mujhe ek ghanta lagega yahaan. Tu wahi khel apne doston ke saath, mein lunch time tak aa jaoonga!

AC: Ok papa!! Bye!!

Kunal put his phone back in his pocket as they entered the Women's jail!! A lady constable enquired about Kunal and his purpose of visit. The constable who brought Kunal with him gave her all the necessary information and left. The lady constable asked Kunal to follow her. She took him into a room which was not well ventilated. There was just a table in the room with 2 chairs. A few papers were scattered on the table. She showed him the usual guest chair and asked him to wait for the warden.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey... thats goood hima..

You are shaping the story in interesting way...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Posted: 13 years ago
#69
Very nice. Its getting more interesting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you Gayatri and Harjas!!

Guys, I don't know how exactly the jail and the law system works.. I am only imagining things as I have seen in films. So, if there are some mistakes, kindly forgive me!! Please follow the story rather than going into these technical details. For example: I don't know if there is an exit register in actuality.. just made it up😛 So, once again, pl. ignore these details if I am wrong!

Thanks
Hima.

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