SS - Kunal Suspects Richa!! - Part 12,13,14 UpDt! - Page 12

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Posted: 13 years ago
Part – 10

At AC's school: AC's team had won the cricket match for their school and all the students and staff were celebrating the victory. AD played Tennis and he too won the match for his school!! So, his school students and teachers were also celebrating the victory. AC's school management had arranged for lunch for all the students, staff and parents who attended the festival. Both AC and AD's matches were completed in the morning session and both having won for their respective schools were pretty happy. As it was 15 minutes to lunch time, the school peons and help started arranging for lunch in one corner of the ground. A tent was put up temporarily under which the food would be arranged. There was enough place under the tent for people to stand and eat as it was a buffet! Some teachers from AC's school supervised the arrangements.. the lunch time would be for exactly an hour after which they had to resume the afternoon and evening session competetions.

AC was anxiously looking towards the school gate anticipating his father any moment. He knew his father said he would start in an hour and there was still half-an-hour time to expect him but he was impatient! Just then, AD came running to him and grabbed his hand and took him to a place which was far from the noise!

AD: So, did you talk to dad about mom yesterday? Did you tell him about me?

AC: (With a smile) Yes, I told him about you and mom!!

AD: Really?(excited and pleased to see a smile on AC's face) Kya kaha unhone?

AC: Maine pehle thumhare bare me kaha tho papa ne kaha ki woh coincidence hai! Phir jab maine mom ka naam liya.. unka face dekhne layak tha(he laughed)

AD: Arey Anand, bataa na yaar, kya hua exactly!! (AD was anxiously waiting to talk to his brother all morning.. but did not get a chance as both had matches in the morning session)

AC then told him how he spoke to his father and how his father reacted on hearing the news.

AC: Mujhe pata hai ki papa mom se bahut pyar karte hain.. kyonki jab bhi woh drink karte hain, tho mom ke bare me hi sochthe hain. Kabhi kabhi unka naam bhi lete hain. Lekin unhone mujhse ajar tak kabhi mom ke baare me kuch nahi kaha. Aur mujhe lagta hai ki unhe nahi pata ki main twin hun! Ab main bhi papa ko inti aasani se nahi chodoonga! Mujhe nahi pata ki kya hua papa aur mom ke beech me.. leki main papa ko acchi tharah jaanta hun.. jab tak mom unke life me wapis nahi aayegi, woh aage nahi badenge!!

AD: Kaash main mom ke baare me bhi kuch aisa keh sakta. I love mom but I am not that close to her yet. Mujhe sirf itna pata hai ki woh bahut udaas rehti hai. Main unhe hasaane ki koshish karta hun,, tho woh has leti hai lekin woh dil se nahi hasti! Shaayad woh bhi dad ke baare me sochthi rehti hai. Lekin Anand, main mom ke baare me itna tho jaan gaya hun ki woh bahut acchi hai! Kabhi kabhi strict hai lekin ab mujhe pata chal gaya hai ki woh jo bhi kehti hai or karti hai, meri bhalayi ke liye!!

After hearing AD's words, AC wanted to meet his mother.. he longed to meet the person whom he had only heard about when his father was drunk and almost unconscious. She must be a very good woman because papa loves her so much and is unable to forget her even after all these years!!

AC: Anand, maine aaj papa ko yahaan bulaya!! Maine bahaana banaya ki coach unse baat karna chaahte hain.. woh abhi aate hi honge!! Main unhe tumse hi milwana chaahta tha!!

AD: Kya, tumne dad ko yahaan bulaya? (Excited and at the same time confused)Maine mom ko bhi aaj yahaan bulaya!! Mujhe pick up karne ka bahaana banaya..lekin tumse milwana chaahta tha!!

Just then a white car stopped outside the school gate and from it none other than Siddhi stepped out!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
enjoyed a lot 👍🏼... you guys write so beautifully which CV's definitely havent even thought about it ... if they keep following this forum... they can get so much of beautiful scenes which they can Ctrl+C & Ctrl +V

Keep Writing Hima 👏

- Arthi
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow .. getting interesting .. please update the 11th p;art soon ..cant wait
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Posted: 13 years ago
interesting...😊...plz do continue soon...lookslike kunal is going to meet siddhi...😉...
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Posted: 13 years ago
interesting , awesome pls update the next part soon 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi

Awesome. waiting for the next part

norzar
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi ,Hima
i am sorry for commenting soo late ...
coudnt log in since a few days due to work...
just read all the updates ...
nd i am really speechless,cant describe i words how much i am loving this SS...
its very very well written ..
the way you are potraying the story is indeed great ...
each nd every update is soo interesting ...
if cvs really go thru our forum ...nd they really need to copy paste this entire SS ...
would love to see the show also progessing this way
cant wait to read wat happens next ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Hima
its awesome yaar pls continue and let us know about the way Kunal is going to kick Richa desparately waiting for it👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry for the late update guys! Power cut and my laptop crashed!! Here is the last update for tonight!! If all goes well, with the power and laptop.. Tomorrow will be the Grand Finale😉
Once again, thanks for all your support.. pl. like and comment if you enjoyed them!! because that is the only way I will know if I am on the track or drifted apart!!

Part ' 11

In the Maternity Ward: The nurse was continuosly apologizing for having bumped into Kunal and dropped his phone. As Kunal looked at her and recognized her, his expression changed from 'that's alright' to 'how dare you!'. He was expecting to meet this lady but never thought he would directly bump into her! He snatched the battery from the lady's hand and started fixing it into his phone without loosing eye-contact with her. Kunal looked at her with contempt and also as if she might run away if he did not maintain eye-contact. Seeing him eyeing her with so much dislike, the nurse became defiant!

Nurse: Maine sorry bola na.. ab aise kya dekh rahe ho? Galthi ho jaathi hai.. Meri galthi thi, isiliye sorry bola.. aur kya chaahte ho tum?

Kunal: Lagta hai aapne mujhe pehchaana nahi!

Nurse: Tum kya Prime Minister ho jo main thumhe jhatke me pehchaanlu?! Ab hato mere raaste se!

Kunal: Oh! Tho aap un logon ko bhi yaad nahi rakhthi jinke zindagi se khelthe hain!!

Nurse: (in a defiant voice) Yeh aap kya keh rahe hain? Maine aisa kuch nahi kiya! Maine aapko pehle kabhi nahi dekha! Aur maine kisi ki zindagi se khilvad nahi kiya!!(getting angrier)

Kunal: Theek hai.. main aapko aur suspense me nahi rakhoonga... Bata hi deta hun! Main Kunal Chopra hun.. Siddhi Chopra ka pati!!

Hearing this, the nurse suddenly went into a state of shock and gasped so heavily that if there was anyone else in that corridor, they would have heard her! After a few seconds she came back to her senses, grabbed Kunal by his hand and took him outside where no one could hear them! She was so scared that she was sweating profusely and stammering for every word!

Kunal: Dekho mujhe sab pata chal chuka hai! Agar main thumpe case karoon na tho jis jail me thum kaam kar rahi ho na.. vahin thum khaidi ban jaaogi!

Nurse: Dekhiye saab.. Us din jo bhi hua, usme main maanthi hun ki mer galthi hai.. lekin maine tho paison ki laalach me aakar kiya saab! Woh madam ne tho aapke bacche ko Siddhi se door karke use maardalna chahthi thi!

Kunal: Kaun madam?.. Richa?

Nurse: Haan saab.. Richa naam thi unki.. unhonehi bacche ko maarna chaaha aur jab aapko dekha tho unhone bacche ko aapke havale kar diya!! Aapke jaane ke baad Siddhi ko doosra baccha paida hua.. main phone karke Richa madam ko inform karne hi wali thi jab Sulekha ne mujhe dhamki di! Sulekha doosre bacche ko Richa madam se door rakhna chaahti thi thaki Siddhi ko kam se kam ek bete ka sukh mile! Isiliye hamne Siddhi ko jhoot bola ki unka pehla beta mar gaya!! Mujhe maaf kar dijiye saab(she collapsed crying and pleading at Kunal's feet)

Kunal: (With disbelief)Tumne kitna bada zurm kiya hai thumhe pata bhi hai!! Tumne Siddhi ka, mera, aur hamare do beton ke zindagi se khela hai.. Ab tum mujhse maafi maang rahe ho? Nahi.. is galthi ke liye main thumhe kabhi maaf nahi kar sakta!!

Saying this he left the nurse crying and pleading behind him!

At AC's school: As Siddhi stepped into the school premises, AD ran towards her and hugged her! AC stood on the spot looking at his mother from a distance. AD dragged his mother by her arm to the place where AC stood!

AC: (AC looked at Siddhi for the first time and his first thought was..My mother is so beautiful! No wonder papa is unable to forget her!!) Hai!!

Siddhi smiled at AC and ran her fingers along his hair as an acknowledgment! She was surprised to see that both AC and AD looked so similar!! She instantly remembered her first born who had been taken away by Richa during birth(she assumed Richa must have killed the baby.. as told by Sulekha) and tears welled up in her eyes.

AD: Mom, meet Anand! (he pointed towards AC)

Siddhi: (taken aback a little)Anand!?! Tum dono ke naam bhi ek hi hain? Tum dono tho dikhne me bhi ek jaise ho!!

AD: Yes mom, isiliye tho main aapko Anand se milwana chaahta tha! Pata hai mom, Anand apne dad ke saath rehta hai! Unke dad ek lawyer hain!! Aab bhi tho lawyer hain na mom, shaayad aap inke dad ko jaante ho!!

Siddhi: (Talking to AC)Beta, kya naam hai tumhare dad ka? Shaayad main unhe jaanthi hun!

AC: Mere papa ka naam Kunal Chopra hai!!!(with a twinkle in his eyes to a shocked Siddhi!!)



Edited by hima2012 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb SS
And beautifully written...Loving it
😳 Waiting for the next part..

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