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shamrish

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: palzs
heya...good usage of the scripts ... Thanks Shraddha..
ritcha-sooorpanaka😆😆

good comparison... Thanks.. Glad that you liked it..
plz do continue... Sure ..Thanks once again for the support and appreciation.. Will be coming with concluding part shortly...

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shamrish

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: tanyashrivastav
hey shamrish ..amazing update ...Thanks Tanya... i sooo wish to see kunal confronting thakraal this way using such powerful dilaogues ...I am very eager to see how Kunal confronts Thakral after this court case ends.. Hope CV's do not disappoint us... making reference to Ramanya and Mahabharata👏 .. i really hope cvs read this and show something like this ..Thanks for thinking this way about CV's using my SS. Again Mahabharata comparisons did deliver strong social message.. Again really hope CV's do deliver strong social message in whatever they show with Thanal confrontation ..very well written ...cant wait to read the third part...witcha as supnakha😆 soo apt ...hoping to see siddhi calling witcha this... I hope so too Siddhi is getting bolder.. From Ritcha maam to Ritcha to Chudail. from aap se tum... Even Thakral sir became Thakral...

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shamrish

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: chitsss
Hey liked the dialogues between Thakral and Kunal , You know the mahabharata analogies are really nice and apt!!!Loved the fact you sent Ritch to an mental asylum😆😆😆 Thanks Chitra for ur kind words... As i mentioned, analogies do carry social message than just pure entertainment... Will try to summarize end of my concluding part..

Dhokebaaz Kamina Thakral hehe.. well amrish maybe you should start a namkaran forum , you seem to be pretty talented at that... Thanks for the same.. Lot of members on forum are pretty good at that.. we already have so many names for each character or character jodis... May be we can add some names i thought off as part of this SS...

Where is the third part hope its coming really soon !!! pls mere katir Thakral ka taang thudva dena 😆😆😆 Working on last part...Just being extremely busy last few days... Will try to get it out as early as possible.. Sorry for the delay... Will try to see what i can do with Thakraal...But knowing Kunal, he would not get violent that much to get into trouble again...will be leaving matters at the hands of law and justice..

Anyways really enjoyed this !!!! Glad to hear that , Chitra.

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Pooja

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: shamrish
THANK YOU PRAGYAA FOR TAKING UR TIME TO READ AND PROVIDING LONG FEEDBACK..👏👏👏
You made those dialogues more exciting with your comments and BG scores..
Appreciate the same..👏👏👏
Will respond to your individual comments later..
One thing i can say , may be i should provide my concluding part to you for editing and updating with comments and BG score.😉.
That would probably make my dialogues/script more enticing and appealing
👏

A jointly co scripted SS/FF..is a good idea 😉

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shamrish

@shamrish

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: poshah

I couldnt agree any more..laugh riot for sure 👏

Thanks Fariyal and Pooja for thinking this FF as a laugh riot..
Now we get into some serious talk in the concluding part... 😉

I so wish that CV's do not disappoint us at the end of this court case.. It is always entertaining to watch Thanal.. Both are amazing actors and Expressions both would give during that scene immediately after case ends hopefully is great and entertaining...

Thanks once again for your kind words... Running a bit behind in delivering the 3rd part...Stay tuned..

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shamrish

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: NaGeSwArI
wow...superb update buddy👏👏👏 Thanks Nags..

i loved this confidence Siddhi and the way she reply crocodile face Witcha😃😳😆
We are already seeing the transformed Siddhi in epi too.. Hope she continues that way..

Kunal as usual were mindblowing😍😍😍 Thanks once again...

Daddy Thakral😡😈😈

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shamrish

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: shumi.

Chudail... Dekha kaise yeh SatiSavitri ne apne Satyavan ko tumare Yama baap se bachaya. ...🤣 🤣

Shoorpanakha, Tum to meri Shaadi tudwane pe tuli thee na...🤣 🤣
gangajal se shuddhikaran karna padega... 🤣 🤣

. D.K. ka to Darpok Kutta Thakral bhi keh sakthe hai. 🤣 🤣

Taki Woh log jab jail se chootenge, to unka naya naam hoga. Nayeed zindagi milegi... 🤣 🤣

Tum to mama Shakuni se bhi battar ho... 🤣 🤣

Bhagwan Krishna ki Bhagwad gita sunane jaroor aaunga.. 😉 🤣 🤣

Kunal : Sanyaas main nahi , tum loge Thakral... Woh bhi Jail me... 🤣 🤣

Bhajan Keerthan tum sunaoge jail me, tumare jail ke saathiyo ko. 🤣 🤣

Dramebaaz Keerthankar Thakral ki Mahabharat adharit Keerthan... 🤣 🤣

Drama to karne me tum mahir ho hi...Upar se Keerthan... 🤣 🤣
Aab to cinemaghar ke bajay log jailon me aane lagenge..tumare keerthan sunne ke liye... 🤣 🤣

Ek jamane ke honewale Sasur ka to Khayal rakhna padta hai... 🤣 🤣

Thakral : Tum kya mera khayal rakhoge??

Kunal : Video game.. Woh bhee Mahabharat wala, Naamkaran agency, Bhajan Keerthan.. y 🤣 🤣
... Sudharoge to jail se jaldi chutenge...Bahar mai intezaar karunga...Dubara case me jail bheejaunga... 🤣 🤣

haas haas kay my stomach is hurting🤣...great thinking👏 ...keep it up👍🏼

Thanks Shumi for your kind words and appreciation..
As i mentioned before, you are one of the members who inspired me 👏👏 to work on and present this SS on a public forum ...
Oops..Sorry to make your stomach hurt...Hope it has recovered by now.. 😉
Anycase we get into more serious talks in the concluding part..

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shamrish

@shamrish

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

One thing i can say , may be i should provide my concluding part to you for editing and updating with comments and BG score.😉.
That would probably make my dialogues/script more enticing and appealing
👏

A jointly co scripted SS/FF..is a good idea 😉

I fully agree Pooja... I can try to come up with some interesting plots.. 😉
All we need is talented and creative writers to present it .. 👏👏
👏Anyone??

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shamrish

@shamrish

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Everyone,
I know all of you have been waiting eagerly for the concluding part of this Thanal SS.
Apologize for the delay in getting it out as i was tied up last few days..
Thank you for your overwhelming response to previous 2 parts..
Sincerely hope you would enjoy this one as well...

NOTE :
All BG Scores in Brown are courtesy of my Fellow IF Friend Pragyaa
My big thanks for her time and help to add those apt scores... ⭐️👏👏

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End of Part2:

Kunal : Video game.. Woh bhee Mahabharat wala, Naamkaran agency, Bhajan Keerthan.. yeh sab tume jail me hee kaam aayenge...
timepaas karne...
Yeh meri mupht salah hai...
Soch lo...Itne acche kaam karoge...thoda sudharane ke liye... Sudharoge to jail se jaldi chutenge...Bahar mai intezaar karunga...
Dubara case me jail bheejaunga...
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PART3 :

Thakral gets angry 😡and holds his hand up and was about to hit
Kunal (how dare you thakraal 😡😡😡).. but holds his back in pain...

Kunal: Manhaani ke saath saath , maarpeet ka bhi charge lagaunga.. uspe bhee case karoonga...Phir to double museebhat... 👏👏👏
(ek se do bhale do se bhale char )

Thakral gets really angry now..😡😡
😡
Thakral : Tume to mai... [ and holds his back and says ouch... same time neck pains too...cannot balance himself...Calls his driver..His driver comes to help him...]

Kunal [smirking and taunting Thakral😛😛]: Abhi to tume sahare ki jarurat hai.. Khudh to Akele kuch kar nahi pa rahe hai... Mujhse kya ladoge???

Thakral [ While driver is holding him to take to the car, turns ]
Kunal..., Khud ko Mahabharata ka Arjun samajhte ho na...👍🏼👍🏼
Main yeh pratiyga karta hu..tume to jail nahi... main to iss zindagi se hi gayab kar doonga.. hamesha ke liye.. na rahega Kunal na rahegi Siddhi...😭

Kunal [ getting irritated] : Thakral... Tume jitni pratiyga karni hai karo...Mera to aab koyee kuch bigaad nahi sakta..👏👏👏

Meri family mere saath hai.. Peechle samay to Ritcha ne mera saath chodh diya tha... Lekin iss waqt, Meri biwi Siddhi mere saath hai...👏👏(jeet jayenge hum tu agar sang hai zindagi har kadam ek nayee jung hai)

Iss jung me, hum dono milke tume khatam karenge...(ek aur ek gyarah)

Thakral [equally irritated]😡😡: Maine kaha naha..Siddhi ko tumare saath saath khatam karoonga...😭

Kunal [ gets really angry now] 😡😡😡:
Thakral...Waise tumne bahut bol liya. Abhi mere bolne ke din aa gaye hai...
Uss din kya kaha tha. Jail jane ki tayari karo. Boriya Bistar bandho. Mera ulta samay aa gaya.(kya hoya tera vaada woh kasam woh iradaa)

Ab Dekho tumari bari aayee hai yeh sab karne ki. (aa dekhe zara kisme kitna hai dum)

Tumari batein, Tumari Degree, Tumara 40 saal ka tajurbha, tumara shatir dimaag, tumari phaltu chaale, sab bakwaas...

Agar yeh saab acche kaamon ke liye prayog karte to tumara bada naam hota...Lekin tumne jhooth ka sahara liya..
(jag mein jo karta hai accche kam marke bhi zinda rehta uska naam)

Tumne kaha B.R. Chopra ki Mahabharat TV pe Dekhee...Jo hum saarone bhee dekhee.. Lekin tum kuch seekhe samajhe nahi..

Aab yeh K.R.Chopra tume Kanoon ki Mahabharat dikhayega.. Sikhayega..Samjhayega.. Woh bhi saree duniya dekhegi..TV per...👏👏👏

Yaad rahe ramayan/mahabharat ke samay se jeet akhir saachayee ki hi hoti aa rahi hai aur aage bhee honewali hai...👏 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

Tumne mere peechle 6 saal barbaad kiye...Meri family ko rulaya...
Aab dekho main tumari kya haalat karta hu...👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

Waise bhi court me tume jo karari shikast dene me mazaa hai na, woh baki jagah kaha??... 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
Tum jitne baar jail se chootke aaoge, utni baar tume dubara jail bheejwaunga...
Tume itna tadpaunga, itna rulaunga , ki sirf iss janam hi nahi, agle 6 janam bhee tumara peecha nahi chodunga...
Main tumare khvabon me bhee aake, tumari raaton ki neendhe bhi haraam karunga... 👍🏼👍🏼👏👏👏👏(mere khawbon me tu ,meri needein me tu )

[Thakral is thinking how come Kunal came to know that he comes in my dreams..
Thakral's selftalk...
Thakral thinks did rohit leak this to Kunal??..
or may be Raveena told Kunal?? May be she doublecrossed me???..
After all she is Kunal's sister...
No.no.. She is so dumb...She cannot do that...

OR did Kunal bribe Rohit to be on Kunal's side.. Rohit is dumb...

How come Kunal is always few steps ahead of me.
Am i getting so old that i am losing my skills, touch ?? ] 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
(SochA Nahi thA Taqdeer Yaha Layege)

Kunal [ typical style😛😛]: Kya soch me pad gaye Thakral sahaab... Jail ke sapne dekhne chalu to nahi kiye??
Waha bhee peecha nahi chodunga...Yaad rahe...
(Tera picha na chodunga bhej do chahe jail me)

Jaate Jaate, Kunal Chopra ki bhent leke jao...
Ghatiya Thakral ke liye yeh Ghatiya Shayari Suno...

Tumne to mujhpar jhootha case lagwaya
Aab main tumpar Saccha case lagwaoonga

Tumne mujhe 2 din ke liye jail bheejwaya
Main tume sari zindagi ke liye jail bheejwaoonga

Tumne mujhe 40 ghanton ke liye jail ki hawa khilayee
Main tume agle kamse se kum 40 saal ke liye jail ki hawa khilwaounga👏👏
[Since Thakral is already old, another 40 yrs would be remainder of his life too.]

Tumne mujhe kaha jail ke liye sab samaan bandho
Main jail ke liye tumara boriya beestar bandhoonga

Tumne mujhe kaha mera ulta samay aa gaya
Main tume kahtha hu ab tumara ulta samay aa gaya

Tumne teesre hearing ke baad mujhe kaha , meri barbaadee ki, woh tumari aakhri chaal thi
Main tume aakhri hearing ke baad kehta hu , yeh tumari barbaadee ki , meri pehli chaal hai 👏👏

Tumne mujhe kaha meri family se akhree baar milo
Main tume hamesha ke liye , tumari jail ki family se milwaounga 👏👏👏

Tumne meri biwi ki vakalat ka career khatam karne ko socha
Main tumaree beti ki zindagi ka career, pagalkhane bhejke khatam karne ka sochoonga 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👏👏👏

Tumne mere peechle 6 saal barbaad kiye
Main tumare agle 6 janam bhee barbaad karoonga 👏👏👏

Tumne uss B.R. Chopra ki Mahabharat Dekhee
Tume iss K.R.Chopra ki Mahabharat aab main dekhaounga 👏👏🥳

B.R. Chopra wala Mahabharat 18 din me khatam hua
K.R. Chopra wale Mahabharat me tumara har case 18 ghaante me khatam karoonga..

Tumne Kurukshetra ka DharmaYudh dekhaa..
Tume Kunushetra ka KanoonYudh main Dekhaounga👍🏼👍🏼👏👏🥳🥳

Tumne mujhe barbaad karne ke upaay soche the
Main tume barbaad karne ke upaay sochke rakhe hai 🥳🥳👏👏

Yeh Kunal Chopra ka Style hai.
Aur tum Kunal Chopra ke sabse bade Dushman ho.👏👏👏
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[ Thakral is angry but smirks that Kunal still thinks of him as his enemy, worthy opponent. This means Kunal is still scared of him.
He vows he would get back at Kunal and starts to think of his next plot...
Helped by his driver, he walks towards his car but falls down...holding on to his knees now...](bure kaam ka bura nateeja)

Kunal : Thakral...Gala, Kamar, Pair.. Maine kaha tha..
Kahan kahan pattha lagwayenge... 👏👏
Abhi pehle Haathon me lagwane [ Jail ke bediyaa] ki liye taaiyar rahiye..

Saying that, Kunal moves away from there... and starts walking towards his waiting family but notices Ritcha sitting in her car.
Gives Siddhi a glance and tells her to give him few min.. He walks toward Thakral's car... Gives a hard stare at Ritcha...

Kunal : Ritcha...Jaleel Aurat... Aurat kya.. Aurat kehlane layak hi nahi ho...
Aurat ke naam me tum ek kalaank ho... 👏

Pata nahi woh kaunsi manhoos ghadi thee 😭😭😭jabhi mujhe tumse pyaar ho gaya tha...
Mujhe yeh sochke khroddh aata hai ki maine ek jamaane me tume chooha..gale lagaya.. pyaar kiya...dosti nibhayee..chee..chee...

Maine tumse saacha pyar kiya tha...aur nibhata bhee ...agar tum mujhe chodke nahi jaati..jabhi mujhe tumari sabse badi jaroorat thi...(acha sila diya tune mere pyaar ka)

Lekin tum kya jaano.. Pyar kya hota hai...
Mujhe to lagta hai, tumne kabhi mujhse pyaar kiya hi nahi... 👎🏼👎🏼
Tume to sirf ek hoshiyaar aur sundar saathi chahiye tha ghumne ke liye..
Tumare dosto ke saamne numayish karne ke liye..
Tumare uss lifestyle pe main yogya nahi tha...

Tum to pyaar kya.. Dosti ke layak bhee ho nahi..Dost kehkar peet pe choora marnewali...👎🏼👎🏼👎🏼👎🏼(dushman na kare dost ne woh kam kiya)

Accha hua meri Shaadi ho gayi Siddhi se jisse main pehle nafrat karta hai.. Samjauthe ke Shaadi jo thi.. Lekin main usse samajh nahi paya tha...

Pyaar, jeevan, rishta, shaadi yeh saab ki Paribhasha Siddhi jaanti hai.. Usse main bahut seekha... 👏👏
Seekhte Seekhte pata nahi kaab mujhe usse pyaar ho gaya..👏👏
Lekin woh ghadi to jaroor aachi thi jisne mujhe siddhi se milaya..shaadhi karvayee..pyaar karvaya..(kismat se tum humko milo ho)

Tumare jaise girgit ke saath zindagi bitata to mere janam narak hi baan jaata.. Yama bhee mujhe lene ke liye nahi aata.. 👎🏼👎🏼👎🏼👎🏼
Aab to Siddhi ke saath zindagi to swarg ban gayee hai... 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👏👏👏👏

Tumne jo mere saath kiya hai, sochta hu tume zor se chaate maroo.. tume maroo.. pitoo...tume to zinda hi nahi rakhna chahiye..
Lekin purane Pyaar aur Dosti ka lihaaz karke main tume maroonga nahi...Upar se Tum jaise aurat ko markar main paap kyon karu..

Hah.. jaate jaate ek Waada toh zaroor karta hu...
Tume PaagalKhane jaroor bhejunga👏...
Koshish karoonga ki tum zindagi bhar wahi per raho (jaa chudail).. Taki aur ladkon ko mere jitna dukh bhogna na pade...👏👏👏

Saying that , he gets ready to leave from there.. All along Ritcha was like zombie and just gazing..
She moves her eyelids to look at Kunal..Tears in her eyes... She tries to call Kunal but he has already left from there...

1 month later:

Breaking news... Reporter says shahar ke jaane mane vakil D.k.Thakral pe museebaton ka pahad toot pada hai...then they show some segments...

Kunal won the Manhaani case against Thakral 👏...
Judge orders Thakral to pay Rs 1crore as compensation and warns Thakral that if such false case repeats again, he would temporarily lose his license and would be disqualified from bar council..

Ritcha has been undergoing physiatrist treatment but is not going well.. She is getting more violent day by day..
Physiatrist recommends thakral that Ritcha be sent to hospital for further treatment...and says that if things do not improve, she may have to be admitted to mental hospital.. as she is showing signs of being mentally sick.. 👏

Sinal also decided to file another case against Thakral for workplace discrimination and harrassment...They also report Thakral to women's organization..They truly corner Thakral from all sides.. 👏👏👏

Chopra family have also moved out of rented flat in Chembur and now into a bigger house in Bandra... 👏👏
Kunal tells Raj that he is trying to get Thakral vacated and would want to move into Thakral mansion... 👏
(Dukh Bhare Din Beete Re Bhaiyya Ab Sukh Aayo Re)

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Disclaimer :
This is a fictional story and not intended to bash any characters either from serial or Indian mythology

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