SS-Court case- Kunal-Thakral scenes-Updt-Final-Pg7 - Page 2

Originally posted by: shamrish

Thanks Nags, Payal, Salman and Savz for your kind feedback and appreciation..

@Pragyaa/Tanya/Payal : Glad to hear that you liked Mahabharata equate part of the SS... You would get to see more of that in the next part and hopefully enjoy it too..
Small Hint..Even Thakral is curious to know..😉

@All : As i mentioned , everyone on the forum is focussed on Sinal, so i thought of starting something focussed on Thanal.. Especially moving forward, we are going to see more of Thanal for Kunal at professional level...

Again this is my 1st humble attempt with inspiration drawn from our more popular creative and talented writers on this forum [ Shumi, Pooja, Purvi, Kshiti, Rani, Nidhi , Nancy and many more... Apoligize if i have missed anyone else's names].
If i have managed to entertain even 1% of what these folks do for us, i will be happy...

Originally posted by: snmalik4

Good Start Amrish.

Thanks Salman Bhai..

I really like you used my line "Kunal Chopra ki Biwi" 👏👏👏
I really liked that line...plus Kunal has started to use that too... I thought it would be more effective in Thanal scenes... Let us hope we actually get to see after this court case...

I am really waiting for Witcha-Siddhi part... also if possible i would like to see Kunal-Witcha Confrontation... All the Best...
Thanks.. U would get Witcha-Siddhi part in the next one... I would see what i can do to accomodate Kunal-Witcha.. To be frank was not planning on one, since i was focussing more on Thanal... Thanal convo's have equally high impact ...

Originally posted by: pragyaa

hi amrish😊...

great post👏👏... Thanks Pragyaa... I am just a novice.. Techie attempting something 1st time..

ur post is really special for its thanal part👍🏼👍🏼 Thanks once again... Everyone is focussed on Sinal, so thought of adding some extra flavour on the forum, just like we see in the epi with Thanal...

really enjoy the conversation specially the mahabharta character's resemblance Thx.. U would get to see some more mahabharata related... Hope u would enjoy...
😆😆...thanks so much for writing😊 Thanks to folks like you for taking the time to read my beginner writing...

please write the next part soon... Hopefully will have in a day or so... Hope you would like the next ones too..

Originally posted by: tanyashrivastav

hey amrish wonderful OS ...👏...
Thanks Tanya...
everyone over here is thinking only abt sinal OS's .but you thought abt thanal nd presented it soo beautifully...loved it lots... Just thought of having some variety on the forum...Plus pretty soon we will see more of Thanal in epi as well.. So someone had to start on Thanal too.. Hopefully we will get more folks writing on this equally popular jodi..

i hope in show also we get to see such takraar btween thanal... I hope so too as these 2 create very good impact with their dialogues and acting...

i loved every bit of the OS, the way you have brought Mahabharata into picture is too good...
My thought was to get Kunal to make understand Thakral indirectly by giving examples..
I chose Mahabharat as a base and got an idea which attempted to develop into this effort.. Gr8 u liked it..

i soo wanna see kunal mouthing such dialouges to thakraal...do update the final part soon..
Sure.. Working on next.. Infact due to some addl requests, i am going to see if i can make 2 more parts instead of one.. Hope u would like the next parts too... Working on getting sequencing right which is so important to look all realistic..

Originally posted by: pinkeye

Amrish, it is really nice. Really liked it. Typical Kunal. 😉
Thanks Payal.. Appreciate the same..

Thakral and his video games. 😆 😆 Mahabharat video game? 🤣

We have seen Thakral playing video games already.. Since i was working on this Mahabharata theme and idea, thought of linking the 2 together to give it bit more impact...

Please continue it , and will be waiting for the next part. 😊

Thanks.. All of you are putting addl pressure on me.. Hope i deliver the next part to all of ur satisfaction..

Originally posted by: Savz_uniqueblis

nice we getting sinal n thanal FF/SS/OS ,so in future may get other characters too , our forum becoming full fledged. nice start n takral know playing video games too in ur SS, nice thanal scenes, looking fwd for ur next updt, thanks for the PM

Originally posted by: poshah

thanks a lot Amrish. and sorry for the late response...just juggling things around..No worries Pooja.. We all are busy...I understand since we both are in the same field..I should thank you for taking your time to read this..and thanks for considering my writings so good..I am just an ametuer writer with just some articles written on web...I guess then i am a baby learning the tricks of the trade..😉I liked the SS...Thank you...all the dialogues between Kunal and Thakral were good and while reading the OS I realised, we need someone like Thakral all along in the serial..else how can we see this side of Kunal ever..That is what i was thinking while we were all focussed on Sinal so far. In Epi, pretty soon we would get to see more of Thanal.. looking forward to the next part please.. Hopefully u would like the next part as well.. Would be out today..Stay tuned..

Good one for sure ..it brought a smile on my face 😊 Glad to hear that...Definately i am under pressure to live upto expectations from great writers like you..

Originally posted by: shumi.

great start dear...without any loops after the end of judgement you promptly ended all the characters👏... Thanks Shumi... Tried not to have any bloopers or editing blunders 😉

Waise main tume mahabharat ka video game deta hu khelne ke liye. Jail me bahut kaam aayega. Uss game me jabhi bhi Arjun aaye, to mujhe yaad karoge. 👏👏...exactly...good point dear👏

Meri biwi to Do Dhaari talwaar hai. Ek to wakil , upar se Kunal Chopra ki biwi!! 👏👏...superb combination!👏 Thanks... Kunal used it a few times in epi.. One of forum member also mentioned.. Thought of using it ...


Tum to Mahabharat ke Bheesma pitama nahi ho, ki aurat ke saamne tum hatiyaar daal do.
Waise, tum to Dhritarashtra se bhi battar ho... Dhritarashtra to janam se aandhe the.
Rajgaddhi ki lalsa aur beta Duryodhan ka pyaar ne , une aur andha bana diya.
Apni hi bahu Draupadi ka vashtraharan hone diya.Apne sare beton ko kurbaan kar diya kurukshetra ki jung me. .yaar tum tho poora mahabharat iss SS mai laali.👏...👏...👏waise my knowledge about mahabharat is very poor Thanks.. Glad you liked it..Pls wait for my next part.. Would get more Mahabharat info..

Kunal : Kaunsi Pahunch... Thakral D.K...huh.. Dhokebaaz Kamina Thakral. 👏👏 hahaha...🤣 Thanks.. U will see more names in the next part..


Richa who is like standing like a zombie. zombie !!!!😛 i love this word...😛 I came up with another name for her.. Again in the 2nd part..

Amrish !😃...you amazed me😛...great knowledge of Mahabharat...👏 Thanks Shumi.. Watched whole serial so many times...can't believe that it is your first effort😲...excellent effort👏...keep it up👍🏼... Did win few essay competitions in school but really 1st time story writing on public forum which is totally different ballgame. Thanks for the appreciation especially from one of most popular and creative writer of this forum.. Thank you..and pl PM me😃...cuz u know i may not notice it...Will do.. Infact the 2nd part will be released tonight..Stay tuned..

thanks for giving such a wonderful piece of work😃...i am very very happy to see more and more people are getting impressed by sinal and coming out with all their talents...👏 Feel flattered by your comments. You are one of the forum writers who inspired me to write this up..Thanks once again..