After the court session... UPDATED PG:3...

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Pooja

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

nice one palz !! Just got me thinking, whats with hindi..everyone is writing in hindi only these days 😉

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shamrish

@shamrish

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: palzs
Awesome Palz. All dialogues are in line with what we can expect from each character.
Are you coming with the next part too?

I also thought of one more scene immediately outside the court , end of this case

After Thakral loosing the case, imagine Thanal scene :

Thakral running away from press to his car and slips on stairs again like other day.
Kunal comes and holds him.

Kunal : Thakral sahab. Kitne baar Ghiroge. Ek to pehle se gale me Patta dala hai.

Abhi Kamar me bhi dalwake dubara wheel chair pe baitane ka plan hai??

kaha gaya aap ka 40 saal ka tajurbha?? Ab to meri biwi ne bhi tume haraya, court me...

Ab to vakalat chodge, video game khelte rahiyo, wheel chair me baitke. agar khel sake to...

you can call me shraddha😊

yeah plannin to...only if ppl liked it😊

nd yeah after the court session kunal statin to thakral was awesumm😆😆

Thanks Shraddha for liking Kunal's dialogues after court case end.

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stuti

@stuti123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

hi..the OS was lovely..loved reading it..do continue soon..😊

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annie_mckinnen

@annie_mckinnen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Bahut ache, bahut ache. Please continue. Nowadays we only have SS/FF/OS for company 😆

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tanyashrivastav

@tanyashrivastav

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

hey palz the OS was fantastic...loved reading it...do continue soon...

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stuti

@stuti123

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

hey dear , wen ll u continue the next part...cant wait to read it...

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gaya3sp

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Too good shradha...
Continue soon yaar...

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palzs

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

thanku so much people.😊.gna update u the next part very soon with sinal romance ..😉

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Sonia Rachel John

@awesumsonia

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: palzs
thanku so much people.😊.gna update u the next part very soon with sinal romance ..😉

waiting for dat dear

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palzs

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Posted: 13 years ago

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CONTD:

siddhi: inko toh bas apni hi padi hain... kabh sey inka intezar kar rahi thi...aur yeh toh aaram sey kha rehee hain... akdoo kahike...😡

KUNAL: while eatin... yeh samajti kya hain apne aap koo... ghiss jayegi kya agar meri maan leti toh... aake kha toh sakti hain nahh... par nahi madam ko toh bas joh maan lagey wahi karengii...

pachtayegi raat ko..pakka... nd he giggles😉

SIDDHI:keeps starin at kunal...

KUNAL: suddenly turns back and sees siddhi staring at him...

he feels a bit uneasy...

he sees siddhi's eyes are full of tears...

his heart gets melted away...

nd unknowgly he walks towards siddhi with the plate and goes and says...

aeyyy(with softened tone)dekho tum roya mat karoo...jab hasti hoo toh zyaada achi lagti hoo...

SIDDHI: mein chahey jo bi karu aapko kya farak padta hain...aap kahiyein nah.. aap utke kyu aagaye...

KUNAL: 😕 acha dekho m sorry mujhey tumpeh iss tarah gussa nahi hona chahiye tha... abh woh sabh baatein chodo chale khana kha lo...

SIDDHI: 😭 mujhey nahi khana...

KUNAL: as he cant see siddhi cryin goes more closer to her nd says... aaeyy agar nahi khavogii toh aur gussa karunga... chalo muuh kholo...

nd he starts feeding her... nd siddhi njys the carin nature of her husband.. nd thinks...yeh kab samjhegey ki mein inkey bina nahi jee pavungii.. chahe kuch bhi hoo jaye mein innsey kabhi alag nahii hoo sakti hoo

KUNAL: kitni massom hain yeh..bewajh chillata rehta hoo..iss par...kassh mein iss sey keh pata kii...mein... suddenly he gets a jerk and he gets reminded of anand... nd has tears in his eyes...

SIDDHI: kya hua aapko ?? aapke aakho mein aasu??

KUNAL: kuch nahi ..chalo khana katam ho gaya .. chalo chup chap soo jaavoo...

SIDDHI: jab yeh mujhsey itna pyaar kartey hain toh bata kyu nahi detey...

kahi inhey abhi bi yeh toh nahi lag raha ki mein anad se pyaar karti huu..insey nahii????😭

Kunal goes to freshen up... after comin he sees siddhi wearin her night suit sittin on his half berth... he admires her beauty... nd looks into her eyes... siddhi keeps starin at him expectin him to say something...

kunal undergoes thru mixture of emotions nd finally says to himself ... haan siddhi meri patni hain usey pura hak hain apney pati ka pyaar pane ke liye...hann anand yehi chahta tha ki siddhi hamesha khush rahe...anad ka pyaar apna jagah.. aur mera apna jagah... mujhey apney patni sey pyaar karney ka pura haq hain... with these thoughts he goes towards her nd unknowngly they end up huggin each other tightly...

then siddhi realizes and gets herself freed ... and turns away nd strts goin towards the bed... kunal grabs her wrist nd pulls her close towrds him... with this act of kunal's... they have an eye-lock...

after couple of seconds kunal says..aaeyy.. with his softened romantic voice..by holdin siddhi nd pullin her mre closer... says...

kya tum mujhey dil mein basaney ki ijazat doogii??

mujhey tum aapna bananay ka izajat doogi??

tum meri zindagii ki ek hassen lamha hoo

phoolon sey saajaney ki ijazat doogii??

main kitna chahta hoo kis tarah batovu tumhey...

mujhey yeh aaj bataney ki ijazat doogii???

tumhari chand si ankhoon mein chand sa chehra

mujhey yeh shaam sajaney ki ijazat doogiii...

with sayin these lines he himself ended up havin tears in his eyes nd says... siddhi plz maine sabko chod diya hain..tum mujhey chodke maat javvoo...

drumstruck by his words 😳... siddhi doesn knw wat to say... she hasnt seen this side of her hubby .. without sayin a word she hugs kunal tightly nd says..."kunal mein aapke bina jee nahii sakhtii""

guys plz do leave your comments.. nd lemme knw if u want me to continue..

if u feel its borin... i wont continue...

Edited by palzs - 13 years ago