After the court session... UPDATED PG:3...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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😊Guys this is first time m writin ...so plz do leave the comments ...

After winning the case:
court:

RAJ: siddhi bete mujhey pura bharosa tha ki tuhii case jheeteygi ...
seema interrupts in between and says ..kyu nahi jheethii.. papa .aakir apne pati ..kunal bhaiya sey itna pyaar jo karti hain... aur unhi ke liye toh yeh din raat mehnat karti thii...
aapko hi nahi hum sabko iske upar barosa tha...
😊
SIDHI: thanku papa, thanku bhabi. aj main bahot khush hu ... akir kunal ko court ne nirdosh sabat kar kiya...par...

RAJ: par kya?

SIDDHI:papa woh..
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RAJ: siddhi abh apne papa se phir sey kuch chupa toh nahi rahi hoo??
SIDDHI: nahi papa aisi koi baat nahi hain ..main toh bas yeh soch rahi thi ki kaash apki tarah kunal ko bi mere upar barosa hota mujhpey (reg. the case) toh kitna acha hota...

RAJ: siddhi bete ...tum kunal ke nature ho jaanti hoo nah woh zaroor samjhega.. todha sa waqt lagega...

SEEMA: haan siddhi... dekna kunal bhaiya bhi yehi soch rahe hongey...ki aakir siddhi ne case jeet hi liya😊

SIDDHI:kaash kuch aisa hi hoo bhabhi...

at chopra's house:


SEEMA: chalo kuch aacha pakatey hain ghar mein khushi ka mahool jo hain...

RAJ: kyu nahi bai...zarrorr...

SIDDHI: haan bhabhi aaj mein kumal ka kuch fav. banati huu...😊

SEEMA: aacha...koi aaj bahut hi khush lag raha hain ...kya baat hainšŸ˜‰
SIDDHI:😳

SINAL'S ROOM:


kunal opens the door ...finds siddhi folding the clothes...

SIDDHI: apke liye chai lati hu...

KUNAL: maine poocha tumsey???

SIDDHI:par aap toh hameesha ghar aane ke baadh toh chai hi petey hoo toh maine socha...

KUNAL: toh???? aaj peene ka mann nahi hain... aur dekho mujhey thodi der akela chod doh... samjhi... case ka jheet lii aapne aap ko mahan mat samjh lena...attitude to dekho... hameesha kuch nah kuch musiibaat...

SIDDHI: attitude??? chai lati hu ..karke bolne mein aapko attitude aa gaya??musibaat???? main aap ke liye musibaat huu?? jo bhi kariu aapko galat lagta hain..
aakir kitna baardash karu main bhi..

KUNAL: kisne kaha bardaash karney ko haan?? pata nahi yeh divorce kab ho jayega ...hamara tab sab apne aap theek ho jaayega..

then later he realizes "yeh mainey ka keh diya"

SIDDHI:😲

siddhi leaves the room and starts thinkin abt their good tyms...(abhii mujhey main hain kahii... song keeps p[layin)

kunal at the other end keeps thinkin.. d same sweet kinda romantic moments which happened btw them...

suddenly a kinda jerk he gets nd strts thinkin ..yeh mein kya soch raha huu...
then aftr repeated thoughts of mixed emotions...
he thinks...:"chahey main kitna bhi aapne aap se lad lu.. main siddhi ko tallak nahi dey sakta...main uske bina jee nahi sakta...
mujhey uske upar bina lisi waajah ke gussa hogaya...

(i knw this is so not of kunal's type ) bt still...)


in the mean tym everyone hpn to have their dinner...after askin repeatedly sinal deny to have their dinner...

At around 10:30 kunal comes out of the room ...
and see's siddhi ... bein utterly dejected nd lost...

he goes to her and says ... eeeyy...khana nahi khana hain kya ? bhook lagi hain...
chalo khana kahte hain...

SIDDHI:mujhey nahi khana
KUNAL: nahi khana????

SIDDHI : haann
KUNAL: par kyuu.šŸ˜•
SIDDHI: kmeri marzii
aapko kyu batavu main...

KUNAL: aacha...toh...theek hain main kha leta hoon...jab bhook lagegi tabh pata chalega..
šŸ˜‰
SIDDHI: 😔

Kunal acts as if he is enjoying the meal... and see's all the dishes made are his favourite one's


m sorry if u guys didnt like ...nd plz dnt mind if there are any mistakes...

vl continue if u guys like itt... all the suggestions are whole heartedly accepted...

plz be frank and do leave ur comments...


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome Palz. All dialogues are in line with what we can expect from each character.
Are you coming with the next part too?

I also thought of one more scene immediately outside the court , end of this case


After Thakral loosing the case, imagine Thanal scene :

Thakral running away from press to his car and slips on stairs again like other day.
Kunal comes and holds him.

Kunal :
Thakral sahab. Kitne baar Ghiroge. Ek to pehle se gale me Patta dala hai.

Abhi Kamar me bhi dalwake dubara wheel chair pe baitane ka plan hai??

kaha gaya aap ka 40 saal ka tajurbha?? Ab to meri biwi ne bhi tume haraya, court me...

Ab to vakalat chodge, video game khelte rahiyo, wheel chair me baitke. agar khel sake to
...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update mate...thnx for sharing
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome Palz. All dialogues are in line with what we can expect from each character.
Are you coming with the next part too?

I also thought of one more scene immediately outside the court , end of this case


After Thakral loosing the case, imagine Thanal scene :

Thakral running away from press to his car and slips on stairs again like other day.
Kunal comes and holds him.

Kunal :
Thakral sahab. Kitne baar Ghiroge. Ek to pehle se gale me Patta dala hai.

Abhi Kamar me bhi dalwake dubara wheel chair pe baitane ka plan hai??

kaha gaya aap ka 40 saal ka tajurbha?? Ab to meri biwi ne bhi tume haraya, court me...

Ab to vakalat chodge, video game khelte rahiyo, wheel chair me baitke. agar khel sake to
...



you can call me shraddha😊

yeah plannin to...only if ppl liked it😊

nd yeah after the court session kunal statin to thakral was awesummšŸ˜†šŸ˜†
Edited by palzs - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome😃 continue writing
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it very nice..plz contintue it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey good one shradha...
do continue soon...
i really enjoy reading such good SS or FF's...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@Palz...very good...plzz do continue.. šŸ‘
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its was awesome palzs plzzz keep on writing ...as per the current i don't think u get to see enough sinal scenes so these kinds of piece of writing help me atleast to get a bit relaxed...
i'm eagerly waitin for the nxt part!!!!!!!!šŸ˜›šŸ‘
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice OS/SS . nice sinal scene,hope they show it in show too.keep going

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