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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
Nice start
Naina very mischievous
Whilst rehaan is her teacher a clean freak
N always manages to catch her
But secretly is as attracted to naina as she is to him
Looking forward to reading further
Thanks for pm nice looking keep em comin
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Corrupted--"Age is just a number" Chapter 3

"Present day"

3rd Person's POV

After getting detention for 2 hours Naina again cursed her love for nature. After college hours were over, Naina told zenobia about her Detention and asked her to go home first and inform Diloji the same. Naina was going toward detention room but a teacher stops her and ask her to go somewhere else as the detention room is being used for something else right now. Naina decided to go to Poker face's office and ask him about where to complete her punishment. She entered his office with permision.

"Hello Po...Sir" Naina hardly managed to control herself from letting the secret name "Poker Face" out her mouth.

"Jaha'n tak mujhe yaad hai, aapko iss waqt detention room main hona chahiye" He said without greeting her back.

"Woh sir kia huva na, main gai toh thi detention room magar waha'n se mujhe Aastha mam ne wapis bhej diya, or abb jab punishment k liye koi jagah nahi toh punishment ki kia zaroorat toh main ghar jaau'n?" She spoke in one breathe and started to leave without hearing his reply.

"Wait Ms.Naina, Bring that chair here and sit here silently for 2 hours" Rihaan ordered naina and she relucantly followed.

"It's been 20 minutes since I'm sitting here, Its so boring. Is se acha toh main detention room mein thi yaa toilet saaf karte huve" Naina murmured under her breathe.

"Keep quite Ms.Naina, I'm checking Weekly test papers." Rihaan shouted a little.

"Sorr..." Naina was about to appologise when she saw a cockroach near her chair crawling toward her. She screamed her lungs out and jumped off her chair like a monkey and landed on Rihaan's lap, who faced his moving chair toward her direction after hearing her scream. Naina held his collars tightly, shut her eyes and curved her legs on his lap, shouting "Bachao, Bachao.

"Miss Naina...NAINAAA" He shouted to bring naina out ofb her startled state.

Naina opened her eyes and looked at him, still scared.

"Cockroach kab ka jaa chuka hai" He said assuring her.

She slowly turnd her face to see if its actually gone or not, once satisfied she let out a relieved breathe and looked back at Rihaan. There faces were mere inches away with naina sitting on his lap, her hands around his neck now and his hands holding her waist to prevent her from falling.

Dum dum udti hai dua..

Dum dum udti hai dua
Sau pankh laga tere naam ke

Dum dum udti hai dua..

Dum dum udti hai dua
Sau pankh laga tere naam ke

Naina's POV

It's happening again, I'm feeling different. I know I'm in a wrong position but why is my heart relucant to move away from him ? I can feel his warm breathes falling on my bare neck, and it's making me crazy. I'm holding his neck, I want to slip my hands from his enck to his head and hold his hairs. This is wrong. Why I'm being like this. This is not so me. I never had this kind of feeling for any other man. Does't mean I never met a handsome man in my life, in fact I've met younger and more handsome men in my life than Poker face but getting near him still makes me feel the way I never felt. I want him to lean his face a little closer, and feel me, taste me. What is he doing to me ? I'm feeling "Corrupted" .

Mera dil faqeera ho gaya
Mera dil faqeera ho gaya
Chal diya woh tere dhaam pe

Dum dum udti hai dua
Sau pankh laga tere naam ke (x2)

Rihaan's POV

She's doing it again, making me feel something I should't feel. Her hairs smell so good. I want to slide my fingers through her silky hair strands. Her sking is so soft. What would it feel like to dig my finger softly in her skin. And her eyes, the same big, round, brown eyes. Speaks louder than her words do, and I can clearly read them and I don't know why but my heart is sure that I'm the only one who can read these eyes like a book. But I also know I should't cross the line between a student and teacher's pure relation. But why is my heart so relucant to listen to me. With each passing second I spend with Naina I'm getting "Corrupted".

Aankhein kitaabi
Tu khole toh padh loon
Kajal si likhi chhapi
Kahaniya teri mere saiyyan

Baatein batashon si
Zubaan pe rakh dun
Halke se pighlengi
Bole tu chakh lun main saiyyan

Dum dum udti hai dua
Sau pankh laga tere naam ke (x2)

3rd Person's POV..

Naina was the first one to come out of her train of thoughts. And with her sudden moment of getting up Rihaan too came back to his sense. She quickly got on her feet and turned to leave when Her Dupatta refused to let her go because it was stuck in Rihaan's belt. she looked back and Rihaan also looked at her.

Saiyaan ve teri baatein
Poonji si maine batoriyan ve
Armaano ki maine
Bhar bhar ke rakh li katoriyan ve

Dum dum udti hai duaa..
Sau pankh laga tere naam ke

Tere rang rangeya ye aasmaan

Rihaan helped her untangle her dupatta. The atmosphere was extremey awkward.

"You can leave for today" Rihaan said composing himself and returning back to his "Poker face" mode.

Naina noded positively and picked up her bag and left.

So here's another chapter. I'm extremely happy that my FF got noticed and many lovely souls commented. Thank you all so much for the encouragment. This chapter might be short and not so interesting because I'm short on time nowadays. I promise to make the next chapter long and interesting. Please do comment and tell me how are you liking the story so far. Critisism is most welcome. Refrain from using bad Language.

Love-Jasmene
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
Congrats on your story

Characters seem interesting

looking forward to read your story

sorry for such late response
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
Liked the update.
Please do send frd request to all those who have commented. So that it's easy to PM them.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
Congratulations on your story

This is such an Interesting and Captivating story
just love every bit of it
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
Welcome to the Forum
Congrats on the New Story.
I am RaIna fan but lot every bit that you have written.
Awesome story waiting for the love to blossom between Naina and Poker Face.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
nice update short but cute one
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
nice story...do a index
easy to follow
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
Naian is a mess...
continue soon.

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