Corrupted---'Age is Just a number' Chapter 3 Updated

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Character Introduction
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Name: Naina Batra
age: 18
Student at : University of Arts and Science
Studying Arts to become a Fashion designer (2nd Year)
Happy, Positive, Bold, prankster, one woman army


Name: Rihaan Khurana
Age: 27
Profession: Teacher at University of Arts and Science
Teaches 1st and 2nd year's students English and fine Arts.
Nature : Strict, Man of principles and a cleanliness Freak.
Students secretly call him "Poker Face"




Minor Characters
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Zenobia: Naina's friend
Diloji: Naina's older sister. A divorcee and social worker
Indumati Khurana : Rihaan's Daadi and head of K-Empires
Harjeet Khurana: Rihaan's Mother, a widow.
Armaan Khurana : Rihaan's spoiled younger brother, studies at the same college but in Science section.


So here's an Introduction for my very first Fan Fiction on PMHMD. Although I like Arjun bijlani and raghav, but Vineet raina is BAE too and I like Naina-Rihaan's chemistry better. I hope you all will respect my choice . Criticism is most welcome but please refrain from using bad and mean language.

I'm jasmene by the way, a new member in PMHMD family 😊

Love-Jasmene😳

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yes jasmine ji... Please continue.. Even i like naina with rehaan...i looking forward for ur story.. Wish u best of luck..and ignore haters..
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Originally posted by: Misspakistanii

Yes jasmine ji... Please continue.. Even i like naina with rehaan...i looking forward for ur story.. Wish u best of luck..and ignore haters..


Hey Miss ( What's your name ? ) .. Thank you so much for the encouragment.😊
I'm a pakistani too😛...How're you doing ?
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Corrupted--"Age is just a number" Chapter 1

"Janey kon ho, par ho tum kahi'n
hai dill ko mere yaqee'n ..."

I wrote this line in my diary and looked outside the bus window. Small rain drops were falling and the roads were slowly turning from gray to dark gray as rain water was spreading on them. A cool breeze was flowing and I just wanted to get out of this bus and enjoy this weather but if I actually did that I would be late for my class, the early morning English class.

"Chal ninu apna stop is here" Zenobia shook me and I came out of my imaginery world where I was playing in the rain happily.

"Kia Zinu kitna mazey ka mausam hai you still want to go to college?"I asked her with an annoyinh expression.

"Baat toh tum aisey karta hai jaisey You dare to bunk "Pkoer face" sir's class." And we both laughed while getting out of the bus.

After 5 min's walk we were standing in front of our beautiful "College and University of Arts and Science" campus. The green garden area in front of college building was looking breath takingly beautiful and the blame goes to the little rain drops laying on the green leaves and grass. I've always had a thing for nature and it's beauty, specially roses. My room's balcony was nothing less than a green house or should I say rose house.

"Zinu you go to class first, I'll go to canteen to buy something"I told zinu and she left.

The canteen of arts section was on third floor and my class was on second floor. Music section was also on the third floor and while going toward canteen I could clearly hear some hindi movie song sound coming from the music room. I guess their teacher has't arrived in the class yet. I quickly grabbed something to eat from canteen fastened my foot steps. I looked outside and the rain was getting heavy and the roads were completely wet now. I could also hear a song playing in the music room.

Bheegi bheegi sadkon pe main
Tera intezaar karun
Dheere dheere dil ki zameen ko
Tere hi naam karun

I was lost in nature's beauty. I was't aware of who's passing by me and where I'm going to, My footsteps were slow now .

Khudko main yoon kho doon
Ke phir na kabhi paaun
Haule haule zindagi ko
Ab tere hawaale karun

The song was still playing. Lost in nature's beauty and song I bumped into somethig, something very wall like, I was going to fall so I closed my eyes but luckily a pair of hands held me. One wrapped around my waist and the other around the back of my nack to support my head. I opened my eyes and the blurred face started to get clear. It was none other than our "Poker face sir" Mr.Rihaan Khurana.

Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re
Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re
Karam re, karam re
Tera mujhpe karam hua re

Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re

The same poker face, strict and stern look with a rudeness in eyes, can look so handsome too. The closeness between us made my heart beat so fast and I could feel little sweat drops on my forehead inspite of the weather bein so cool, I felt something burning inside my chest and I could't decide whether it was the fear of getting caught by a teachern roaming around college when I should be present in class or something else?

"Miss Naina Batra, do you mind ?" He said in a stern voice.

"Huhh ?" is all I could say,because I was too busy thinking about the feeling I'm having , so I did't hear him .

'Nainaa" He said a little loud and more sternly this time and I realized the position we were in and grabbed his suit's collars to stand properly.

"Shit I'm going to get detention" I mumbled to myself.

"Detention for 2 hours. Now go to your classroom" He said and immediately took out hand sanitizer from his pocket and used it.

"Ohh gosh, what a freak" I again mumbled to myself on his habit of cleanliness. But it did't go unheard by him this time.

"What did you just say?" He asked with same stern look and voice .


"Umm nothing Pooo..*Cough--Cough* Sir, Rihaan sir. Main toh bass yeh keh rahi thi k aap bhi toh class k bahar hain na tohtechnically abhi class start nahi hui and I'm not late so why detention" I asked him putting on my "Masoom ladki" look.

"For your kind information Miss Naina class 10 min pehle start ho chuki hai aur main attendence bhi laga chuka hoon or wohi principle ko deney jaa raha hun" He said and walked away.

I was cursing my liking for nature. It always causes me trouble some how and most of the time it happens around "Poker Face". Likeit happened 3 weeks ago in "Agriculture section"...To be continued--

Pre-Cap : "3 Weeks ago" Naina gets locked in Agriculture Section's green house.


I hyope you all like this chapter. I will post pictures of Naina-Rihaan's dresses in the comment section because I myself am studying Fahion designing and I love to explain dresses nd styles. Please do comment and like this FF. Even if you don't like it Criticism is always welcome. Refarin from using bad mean language.

Love-Jasmene
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Corrupted--"Age is just a number" Chapter 2

"3 Weeks ago"

"Yaar Ninu yeh tum kia karta hai ? agar humko yaha iss section main kisi ne pakarh liya toh?"Zenobia's tension was increasing with each step we were taking.

"Zinu, tujhe nahi aana toh matt aa. Main toh woh rare and exotic plant jo indonesia se import ho kar aya hai botony students k liye, woh dekh kar hi rahungi"I told her.

We somehow passed the security check and reached at the Agricultural section's building. Suddenly zenobia got a call and she had to leave and I was left alone to do this dangerous task. It was dangerous because we were bunking history class + Students without Botonist ID cards are't allowed in "AS" ( Agricultural Section ). But "Naina batra" is not stupid, I already borrowed an ID card from a close friend who study botony. I managed to enter the Botony lab. All the students were in classrooms as its the last class of evening and 15 minutes later the campus will be closed.

"Thank God poker face ki class subha main hi khatam ho jati hai warna yeh mauqa nahi mill paata mujhe"I was over joyed to fool everyone and come here.

I started to look here and there in search of that plant. The botony lab was my most favourite place in this University. After finishing my Fashion designing course and earning some money to pay "AS's" fees I'll join botony classes for sure. I kept searching . I was in hurry because only 9 minutes were left for the campus to be closed and I hade to get out of this lab 2 minute early because the doors will get locked automatically as no student is allowed in here any other time after Lab classes.
I finally found that plant. Not by seeing it but by it's smell. I've read about it, it smells like rotten flesh. After following the smell I finally saw it.
I was so proud of myself. For taking the risk which was worth it. I absolutely adored this plant. A rare and exotic plant only found in Indonesia's forests. But my happiness did not last long because I heard someone entering the lab so I quickly hid behind a table. I looked at time and only 4 minutes were left , I had to get out 2 minutes early. I poppedn out my head a little to see who's in the lab and I only saw a tall, well physique figure wearing blue jeans, white shirt and black jacket. He was arranging some files, a little away from the lab door. I found this opportunity good and crawled carefully. The floor was dirty with wet mud.

"Gosh do they ever clean this ?'I felt angry as my clothes were getting ruined.

The person was still arraning files but he suddenly stopped and my heart skipped a beat because I was right behind him, few inches away on the floor crawling like a baby in the mud. But luckily he just lifted his hand looked at the time and continued arranging files. I thanked God and started crawling again. I was looking at floor when suddenly my head banged into something. Confused, I looked up and my heart stopped for a second because the figure standing in fornt of me was none other than our "Pkoer Face" "Rihaan Khurana" .

"Miss Naina Batra, I don't even get shock to see you doing wierd stuff" He said with the same stern face and strict voice.

'Sir woh main..Woh na main..Sir" I was feeling as if someone poked a knife in my neck.

"Are you going to stay on floor like this forever Ms.Naina ?" He said and I realised what he meant.

I immediately got up but the wet mud on floor made my foot slip and in order to save myself from falling, I held his collar but it was of no use because he also fell with me, he fell Atop me.His hands were on floor close to both side of my shoulders and his chest was on mine. I forgot about the fear I just had while getting caught by a tteacher for bunking class and roaming in restricted area, now I was more afraid of him hearing and feeling my heart beat, because it was't normal. It never happened before. Not that I never touched a male body, my many friends are male and I hug them too, but I never had this feeling. He lifted his head and looked at me and I felt something again. It should be embarrassment right now but it was't, I felt...I felt shy. I could feel his his warm breathes meddling with mine because of the proximity of our closeness.

"Background Music"

Saanson ko saanson mein dalne do zara
Dheemi si dhadkan ko badne do zara
Lamho ki guzarish hai yeh paas aa jaaye
Hum... hum tum...
Tum... hum tum...

"Rihaan's POV"

I looked into her eyes, the big round beautiful eyes and felt like drowning. I know I'm not suppose to feel this. She's an eighteen years old student and nothing else. I'm not suppose to see her as a girl but just as a student. But my eyes refuse to listen to me and are rebelling against my will. The more I look into her eyes the more I feel "Corrupted".

ankhon mein humko utharne do zara
Baahon mein humko pighalne do zara
Lamho ki guzarish hai yeh paas aa jaaye
Hum... hum tum...
Tum... hum tum...

Saanson ko saanson mein dalne do zara

"Third person's POV"

They both realized theit awkward position and strange feelings and decided to get up but the wet did't allow them to. Rihaan straightened his arms and tried to get up by balancing himself on his hands but the slipped on mud and his head banged into Naina's. she signed him to stop and wrapped her arms around his waist and turned over. Now he was on floor and she was atop him. her long black hairs covering the right side of both their faces.

Salvatein kahin karwatein kahin
Phel jaaye kajal bhi tera
Nazron mein ho guzar tha hua
Khwabon ka koi khafila
Jismo ko ruho ko jale do zara
Sharmo khaya ko machalne do zara
Lamho ki guzarish hai yeh paas aa jaaye
Hum... hum tum...
Tum... hum tum...

Saanson ko saanson mein dalne do zara

She then placed her hands on his chest, adjusted herself and got up. she then offered a hand to "Rihaan" but looking at her dirty hand he looked at himself laying on floor covered in wet mud. His expressions explained how miffed he was. After all he is a cleanliness freak. He got up by himself and gave naina an angry look. He was trying his best to clean the mud off his clothes but in vein while "Naina" found this chance to escape but to her surprise the door was already locked. She could't even use her friend's ID card. She turned back to collide with Rihaan again but this time they did't fall. She looked at Rihaan and he understood everything. Lucky for Naina Rihaan's teacher ID worked. They both were now out of the lab but the campus was very dark. Rihaan used his mobile's flash light and they both came out of campus. None of them spoke a single word. Naina knew she's going to get detention the other day. Good for her Zenobia was waiting for her ooutside the campus and when she saw both Naina and Rihaan covered in mud, coming out from same building at the same time she wanted to tease both of them but seeing "Poker Face" there she kept quite and left with naina. The next day Naina did not get any detention, instead she got the punishment of cleaning toilets after school.😆 To be continued...


Pre-Cap: "Present day" Rihaan's mother "Harjeet Khurana" and "Naina" gets into an argument. Armaan Khurana causes trouble for Naina.

I hope you all like this story. But I highly doubt if anyone is even reading it ? There're no comments. If I don't get any comment on this chapter either I will discontinue writing because of lack of readers. I understand as everyone here is RaIna fans. Criticism is most welcome. Refrain from using bad and mean language.

Love-Jasmene


Edited by Chashmish786 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow... What a beautiful story. Well written... Im so in love wiyh rehaina
Please continue the story.. I like how u explain rehaan as poker face
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I was blushing like an idiot while reading ur corrupted ff.Their forbidden romance is quite interesting. Your writing does real good justice to romance genre. I feel u, even my SS took 2-3 days to get noticed. One kind lady took notice of it due to which i got a couple of viewers. But i wonder if they would read my SS if not for other couple. One thing for sure i would complete my SS even if it is for my single digit viewer. Please do PM me if you continue it in future.
U r actually a better writer than i am.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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though I am a huge raina fan rehaan naina too have food chemistry. in fact drashti has great chemistry with the 2nd heroes too.abhinav,avinesh,gunjan and vinit. rainy atmosphere and rehaan naina scene with sanam re song was romantic. plant scene was described well.fall scene with hum tum bgm was romantic. punishment was funny.
please try to add pics of the characters too according to the scene
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Posted: 8 years ago
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First of all I m not a Rehaan naina pair fan still I m reading this ff bcs one of my good friend recommended me to read this story and I m not disappointed after reading it either...you are a amazing writer..naughty naina is enjoyable to read her antics are cute..and her calling him as "poker face sir" is cute...nice work keep it up 😊

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