Raina SS : Ek Ehsaas (last part) page 5 updated

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ananya2010

@ananya2010

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Such an emotional update, RaIna are true soulmates that is the reason Naina lost in thoughts reached the col storage where Raghav was inside and found out that Raghav is inside. Naina went running to the reception and brought him to rescue Raghav but its password protected, hope Raghav is safe. Kismat connection.

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Sowmiya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Heart warming update dear

Loved it!!

Naina ended herself reaching near the cold storage place without her intention being there

Her heart was restless sensing someone inside the cold storage

With in spur of time she recognized Raghav was the person inside

She was emotionally broken and was reminiscing time spent with him and was assuring thyself that nothing will happen to him

Her heart felt confession made Raghav realise his feelings and endurance for Naina despite of his wretched state !! It's true that love finds its way!!

Raina are true soulmates that their heart can recognize each other's warmth and presence

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Sowmiya

@anu5

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: anu5
Heart warming update dear
Loved it!!
Naina ended herself reaching near the cold storage place without her intention being there
Her heart was restless sensing someone inside the cold storage
With in spur of time she recognized Raghav was the person inside
She was emotionally broken and was reminiscing time spent with him and was assuring thyself that nothing will happen to him
Her heart felt confession made Raghav realise his feelings and endurance for Naina despite of his wretched state !! It's true that love finds its way!!
Raina are true soulmates that their heart can recognize each other's warmth and presence
😊

Thanks for pm

Will be waiting for the next update😊

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Vini

@Vinilight

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

awesome part 😊

add me in your pm list 😊

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Potterhead

@potterhead14

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: anu5

Thanks for pm
Will be waiting for the next update😊

your welcome 😃
your wait will be over soon😳

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Rverma

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

I LOVE your writing. Pls write soon. This is so beautiful!!

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Potterhead

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: vasantvarsha
I LOVE your writing. Pls write soon. This is so beautiful!!

thanks alot <3

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Potterhead

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

The Last Part

The manager came rushing there.
'Please open the door open it fast he is not making any sound'' Naina was completely in tears and she couldn't even talk properly.
The manager entered the code and as soon as he opened the Door Raghav , who was leaning on the door, fell on the ground.
His lips had gone purple and his face had turned pale.
'Raghav'' sighed Naina .
With the help of the waiters she took her to a room in the hotel.
'Ma'am don't worry we will call the doctor immediately''
'please give some more blankets'' asked naina.She took his shoes off and started to rub his feet , his hands. Naina wrapped him the two blankets and kept rubbing his hands.
Everyone got out of the room leaving them alone.
She took his head on her lap and kept rubbing his hand.
She couldn't stop her tears it kept on rolling down her cheeks.
'sorr'' eh'' Raghav mumbled.
Naina looked at him 'tumhe kuch chahiye raghav? Main kuch lao...
'Sorry'' raghav was bit clear this time.
'Raghav tum ...''
'mujhse saadi nai veer se dadi kaha tum maa udaas maine karli''
Naina understood what he was trying to say but she couldn't understand why he was saying all this now.
'Raghav dekho tum kamzor ho tum so jao...
'tum ansoon main nahi dekh sakta...'' He kept on mumbling making naina realize that he was actually talking unconsciously. She touched his forehead.
'Tum mera parivaar ho tumne mujhe apnepaan ka ehsas di'' he coughed
'shhh..shhee'' she caressed his hair.
'sorry maat ro..main tumha ansoo nahi dekh sakta''
naina closed her eyes
'maat jao naina mein mar jaunga maat jao mat jao'' raghav inhaled. Naina hugged him tightly.
'Nahi jaungi raghav kahi nahi jaungi..tumse alag main bhi nahi reh sakti raghav''
'mat jao'' he mumbled
The sun rose. Naina opened her eyes. Raghav slept peacefully on her lap holding her hand
She looked at him how peaceful he looked, how innocent his face was. After a while Raghav started to move a bit, she slowly took his head and put his head on the pillow and moved away from him. RAghav coughed she turned around and saw he was slowly opening his eyes.
'Raghav' she rushed to his bedside and sat beside him.
Even before opening his eyes completely he said 'naina''
'yahi hoon''
He opened his eyes and met hers. He tried to get up. Naina held him and assisted him to sit up.
'Main tumhare liye paani laati hoon'
'Naina'' he held her hand. she turned around and found him holding her hand
She sat down again.
They looked at each other.
'hum'' they both said together.
'acha mein'' raghav began but Naina stopped him
'kuch maat bolo Raghav, hum ghar chalk e baat karenge''
'ghar?'' raghav got confused 'tumhare maa k ghar jaunga main?''
Naina rolled her eyes
itna bhi nahi samajhta she thought
'nahi Raghav'' she looked down touched his hand and slowly looked up
'apne ghar''
Raghav had a huge smile on his face
'Ab dubara chor ke jao gi?''
'tum jane doge?''
'kabhi nahi'' and he held her hand tightly bringing a huge smile to her face.

Thanks alot for reading guys 😊