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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Drashtilove
lovely start...
both are trying to deny relation but in heart both actually like each other... hate veer poor raghav

thanks alot😊

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan
Omg nice start
hope niana will reach there soon

haha thanks
you will have to read the next par for that😉

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Posted: 8 years ago

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~'~ Part 2'~'~

Raghav was getting cold with every passing second, his hands and legs all were freezing. He kept on hitting the door harder hoping someone would hear him and come for his help. But soon his legs had given up and he sat down on the floor, leaning on the door.

The lift door opened and Naina came out lost in her own thoughts. She just couldn't get him out of her mind. She was still thinking about those cards, pictures and that phone call
Kam?likin who tou mere paas a raha hain''
Jhota kahi ka grunted Naina and soon she realized it was not her destination.
Yeh tou basement hain main yaha kaise...uff'' irritated she was about to go away when a sound grabbed her attention.
yeh awaaz kaha se a rahi hain'' she got puzzled
She looked here and there but still couldn't find the source. But some force stopped her from leaving she just didn't want to leave it.
'Mujhe aisa kyun lag raa hain ki yeh awaaz kuch kehna chah rahi hain'' she again started looking and following the sound she reached THE DOOR.
She ---- her ear against the door
'awaaz tou yeha se a rahi hai''
She looked through the small window on that dor and she saw a pair of legs lying helplessly on the floor.
'hai bhagwan andaar koi phaasa hai'' she said out loud
Raghav moved a bit hearing her voice...he knew the voice...he knew it it was his Naina's
How badly Raghv wanted to scream to her tell her that he was trapped inside but his body did not support him. There wasn't a little bit energy left in his voice that he could use call out Naina's voice.
'Naina'' mumbled Raghav.
It was almost soundless for any other person but for Naina even that soundless call was enough to understand that she knew the person inside.
She touched the door and trembling asked 'Raghav kyat um ho andaar?'' the door kept on banging.
She let out a long sigh and closed her eyes. Rubbing sweat from her forehead she said 'Dekho main tumse ab ek savaal puchungi agar answer YES hai tout um do baar darvaze par awaaz karoge aur agar NO hua tou phir Ekbaar''
She gulped and putting both her hands on the door she asked 'Raghav kyat um andaar ho?''
The door banged once. Naina sighed in relief but then the door banged again, her eyes widened and a chill ran down her spine.
'Raghav tum andaar ho?'' the door banged twice again.
Naina covered her mouth with both her hands to prevent her from screaming but she could hold her tears. She completely broke down in tears and kneed down infront of the door.
'Raghav...raghavv'' she started crying. She couldn't believe that her 'friend'' was suffering so much that he could even use his voice. Soon she pulled herself together, she knew it wasn't time for her to break down she had to save him. She got up and said out loud 'Raghav..tum tum chonta maat karo tumhe kuch nahi hoga main main abhi ati hoon''
She ran to the lobby in search of some help and soon found the receptionist
Excuse me, listen listen someone is trapped in the cold storage please please help..it's my husband''
Even the receptionist got shocked hearing her words and he ran down to the storage room with Naina.

'Ma'am the door has been locked and it can only be opened with password''
'so open it! Don't you know the password?'' she asked impatiently
'no ma'am sorry only my manager knows...can you please wait here I will just go and bring him'
Naina didn't even think once before doing what she did next. She grabbed him by the collar and pinned him against the wall 'listen my husband is trapped inside he is so critical that he is not even able to breathe proper SO HURRY UP GO AND BRING THE MANAGER DON'T MISS A SINGLE SECOND'' she realized him and immediately he ran away from there.

Naina sat down beside the door and leaning against it and placed her hand on the door. Call it destiny or call it connection her hand was just there where Raghav's hand was on the other side. On the other side, however situation had gone worse he started to freeze and was giving up to the cold. His eyes were getting so sleepy that it got really difficult for him to stay awake.
'Raghav'' called out Naina in a trembling voice. She tried really hard not to cry but couldn't stop her tears.
'Raghav dekho please sona maat,tum sun rahe ho na Raghav?''
Raghav banged the door but only he knew how much energy he had to put for a simple hit.
She tilted her head and placed it on the door

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4N_UxqHuJYY (for better glance into Raina's world please do click on the link and then read the rest 😊)

'Tumse narazz bhi nahi reh sakti main...rehne hi nahi dete ho tum''

'kabhi apni bhole paan se tou kabhi sirf apni mojudgi se mera maan behla dete ho...''tears rolled down her cheeks.
'kyun sanjana se pyaar karte ho tum raghav''

Raghav's hand moved a bit.

Naina scratched the door abit 'aur kyun mujhe itna farak paar raha hai
kyun andaar se tut ja rahi hoon main?kyun raghav?

Jab tum dard mein hote o tou kyun mujhe dard hota
FB ...raghav getting the injection and naina feeling the pain

Tumhare ankhon se ansoon behtein tou meri bhi ankhein bhar jaati hain
FB..raghav getting insulted in the party and naina feeling the humiliation

Tum kisi aur ki taraf dekhte ho to tum hein marne ka maan karta
FB..raghav's 'love collection''

Yeh saare ehsaas mujhe kuch keh rahi hai likin main woh sunna nahi chahti likin tumhe khona bhi nahi chahti Raghav...main hamesha tumhare saath rehna chahti hoon...hamesha''

Each and every word coming out of her mouth touched his soul.He wanted to get out and hug her and tell her what he had for sanjana was not love and what he had for her was more than just friendship...
soon the banging stopped and Naina opened her eyes to realize there was pin drop silent. Raghav had stopped making any sound.

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

beautiful update
naina reached there and understood raghav is inside
in this situation realization drawn upon him ...
his feelings is clear now

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

So heart touching update..beautifully written they are truely soulmate..naina was the one who understood raghav is there..hope he will be fine loved the last past finally he realised his feelings for naina is more than friendship

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Yashfeen

@Bhatakti_atma

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Lovely update..

Feeling so bad for Raghav.. Hope he is fine..

And naina's words.. Loved it..

Update soon and thanks for the pm

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shamina

@Sakkiyah

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Nice update...
Eagerly waiting for your next update
Thanks for the pm

Edited by Sakkiyah - 8 years ago

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Omg this was an emotional update
poor raghav
thank God naina reached
Awww she confessed it though indirectly but did
update soon
N do pm m

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Potterhead

@potterhead14

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan
Omg this was an emotional update
poor raghav
thank God naina reached
Awww she confessed it though indirectly but did
update soon
N do pm m

thank you
yes definitely i will

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Potterhead

@potterhead14

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Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Drashtilove
So heart touching update..beautifully written they are truely soulmate..naina was the one who understood raghav is there..hope he will be fine loved the last past finally he realised his feelings for naina is more than friendship

sometimes i just so want the realization to happen in the show as well

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