Pandya Store|Episode Discussion #244 - Page 17

Originally posted by: mpks1

Its still the same night

Shiva- Raavi scene.

Shiva is lying on the bed, looking up on the ceiling, thinking

Raavi comes there with a glass of milk, keeps it on the side table. Shiva sits on the bed after seeing her and smiles at her. He asks her to sit beside her. She leans on his shoulder.

Raavi says, “ 7 saal intezaar kiya meine iss pal ka, 7 saal”

Shiva nods his head and says, “ jaanta hoon, soory Chipkali, dil se sorry, mere dimaag ke loche ki wajah se kali fokat tere dimaag ka locha kar daala meine”

Raavi asks, “ ek baar phir se bolna”

Shiva asks, “ kya?”

Raavi says, “ chipkali”

Shiva holds her cheek, “ Meri Chipkali, I love you Chipkali”

Raavi says, “ I love you too mere bandhar”

Both hug. Then Raavi sats, “ accha accha, dwayi khaayegaa”

Shiva nods yes. Raavi gets his medicine abd some water. He takes it. Raavi asks, “ aur chahiye, pani?” Shiva nods no.

Raavi says, “ waise accha hia tu ne uss Noodle Pari se shaadi nahi ki, warna issi oaani mei tujhe dubaake, zor se maarti, Police ke dande padte woh alag”

Shiva says, “ bas kya? Tujhe lagta hai tere alawa kisi aur se shaadi ho sakti hai meri, arrey MKBKB hai tu tere se peecha chudaana itni aasaan todi na, aur wause bhi dekh le ye Gajni iss Sajni ka saajan wapas bana”

Raavi laughs and says, “nautanki”

Raavi continues, “ accha mein kya bol rahi thi, end moment pe teri yaadash wapss aagaye, toh hum kal subah mandir chale, Bhagwan ji ko Thank you bolne ke liye”

Shiva nods his head yes and says, “ ek number! Meine bhi yahi soch raha thaa ki, apun ko jaana chahiye mandir”

Raavi says, “ haan”

Shiva says, “ ek baat bolun kya. Todha na ajeeb sa lag raha hai”

Raavi says, “ matlab?”

Shiva says, “ matlab mereko aisa lag raha hai ki woh Arushi naam ki Chudail wapas meri zindagi mei naa aajaaye, todha matlab”

Raavi remembers what Arushi said in the Temple, trying to convince Shiva to marry her and she would even love Mitthu more than Raavi.

Raavi gets worried, “ tu mujhe dara kyun raha hai, dekh itni minnatein ke baat tu wapas mila hai, mein tujhe wapas nahi ko sakti”

Shiva says, “ tu gadhedi ki gadhedi hi rahegi, mein tujhe dara nahi raha hoon, jo mere dimaag mei chal raha hai tujhe bata raha hoon, aur kuch nahi”

Raavi asks, “ sach bata tujhe Arushi se pyaar hogaya naa?”

Shiva says, “‘ poore ke poore dobi haintu, aisa ho sakta hai kya, ki meri chipkali aur mere beech koi bhi hai” hugs her, “ dekh mein tujhe sirf ye bol raha hoon, meri ek galati ki sazaa mere poore parivar bhigte uske haathon, aur kuch nahi”

Raavi says, “ Shuva ausa kuch nahi hai, tu ne Shweta ko woh karte hie dekha thaa naa shayad issliye tujhe lag raha hoga, par har koi ek jausa naho hota”

Shiva sats, “ teri baat mein samaj raha hoon, phir bhi”

Raavi cuts him off, “ Bas, abhi abhi yaadash walas aayi hai naa toh hum dimaag pe zyaada zor nahi denge, abhi tu so jaa, kal subah urtke pehle mandir jaayenge, phir Doctor ke paas jaayenge aur unhe sab batayenge, teek hai”

Shiva smiles and nods. Raavi gets up but her dupatta is caught in the bed, she falls back on Shiva..

Romantic scene on Mast Magan. They look at each other. He kisses her hand and forehead. They both stare at each other and the scene ends with a hug

Surprisingly their scene was for 6 1/2 minutes with no interruption, no back and forth, still less than Bailbuddhi- Psycho first meeting scene which was for 9 minutes🙄

Shiva is hella lucky to get Raavi as his wife. Though, I can't say the same thing for Raavi.😕

Originally posted by: Plvs-Vltrx

Shiva is hella lucky to get Raavi as his wife. Though, I can't say the same thing for Raavi.😕

I agree! I didn’t feel the same vibe with them like before. The guy does mistakes after mistakes yet forgiven easily by Raavi every single time until he commits yet another mistake in the future. Most of all never keeps up his promises 🙄 It was a lollipop to cool the fans down. Instead if talking about Mitthu, what kind if trauma the child went through, brilliant Kandya Store writers made them talk about Psycho Gobarwaali 🙄

Originally posted by: mpks1

I agree! I didn’t feel the same vibe with them like before. The guy does mistakes after mistakes yet forgiven easily by Raavi every single time until he commits yet another mistake in the future. Most of all never keeps up his promises 🙄 It was a lollipop to cool the fans down. Instead if talking about Mitthu, what kind if trauma the child went through, brilliant Kandya Store writers made them talk about Psycho Gobarwaali 🙄

Psycho Gobarwaali can fo whatever she wants to do with bkb. Dhe can target zombie. No problem.

Just stay AWay from Raavi’s life. Raavi should not trust her . Shiva hopefully this time stay strong with raavi. If makers try to create Gobarwaali problem in shivi life then hopefully show will shit down. As fans won't tolerate Gobarwaali in shivi life

Finally next morning

Rishita calls Natasha, Chiku, Shesh, Mitthu “ jaldi aajao, chslo ”

Natasha and Shesh come out of the room in their uniform.

Natasha asks, “ kaisi lag rahi hoon mein? Celebrity charm toh ksm nahi hogaye naa?”

Rishita pinches her cheek, “ arrey bilkul kam nahi hua meri princess”

Then Rishita turns to Shesh, “ areey mere superstar”

Raavi pinches Natasha’s cherk, “ kisiki nazar na lage, kitni pyaari lag eahi hai”

Just then Mitthu comes there, Rishita says, “ Mitthu itni cute lag raha hai”

Chiku comes down in his uniform ready to go to school.

Bhabima follows him

All 4 standing in the aangan.

Shesh (Dadaji of Kaandya Niwas🙄) “ Chiku tu ne poorani uniform kyun pehani hai , hamare jaise nayi uniform kyun nahi pehani hai”

Chiku looks at Bhabima with a sad face

Shesh continues to shoot his mouth, “ Badi Maa aapne Chiku kp new uniform kyun nahi pehnaya hai, aapko pata hai new class = new uniform”

Bhabima says, “ oye mere natkat shaitasn, ye uniform nayi hai abhi 3 months pehle hi li thi, jab choti ho jaayegi, unhe bhi nayi uniform aajaayegi”

Chiku angrily asks, “ jab 3 nayi uniform mangayi hai, toh rk aur aajaati toh kya hota”😳😳😳

Bhabima says, “ Chiku, ye teenon aapke school mei naye naye jaa rahe hsi naa toh inle liye nayi uniform lene padi, aur Maa toh haneshaa ause hi karte hai naa, aapki ek uniform choti ho hasti hai hum ek naye le aste hain, iss mei kaunsi nayi baat hai ki tu itna gussa kar rah gai”

Chiku says, “ nayi baat ye hai ki mujhe pata nahi thaa ki aap meri maa nahi ho par abb pata hai”

He snatches his backpack from Bhabima.

They only showed Rishita’s poker face as part of the reaction to Chiku’s outburst didn’t even bother to show Raavi’s reaction.

Chiku runs towards the entrance to go out. Otger kids were about to go out. Just then a mohalle ki aunty comes there calling for Dhara.

Sge says, “ Dhara, Dhara , arrey kaise maa- baap hai tum log, itni gambeer samasya ke baad bhi tum log bacchon ko school bhej rahe ho”

Rishita asks, “ kya bast hai Kaki?”

Aunty says, “ arey news channel nahi dekha hai kya? Shehar mei Alien aaye hue hain, lal hari loght niksl rahi hai, 4 logon ko maar bhi chukke hain”

Chiku says, “ par Alien toh hamare dost hote hain, woh toh bahut acche hote hain, him e movie mei dekha hsi”

Aunty says, “ arrey bacchon ye movie nahi hai haqeeqat hai, kuch bhi ho sakta hai”

Rishita says, “ ye aap kya bol rahe ho, kyun fizool ki baatein bacchon ke dimaag mei daal rahe ho Kaki,rehane dho aap, ye alien walien kuch nahi hai, sab bakwaas ki baatein hai”

Prerna comes there and says, “ No, Rishita di, UFO’s naa US aur Canada mei bhi paaye jaa chukke hai, so ye jo keh rahi hai naa, woh agar sach nikla naa hume lightly nahi leni chahiye”

Bhabima gets a phone call from her mother.

Rishita asks, “ aap kya bol rahe ho Bhabi?”

Bhabima says, “ nahi kuch nahi”

Rishita says, “ toh chalo naa late ho raha hai” ushers all the kids outside.

Chiku is going ahead

Raavi who had nothing yo say or no dialogue takes Shesh and Natasha and Rishita takes Mitthu.

Bhabima stops Rishita, “ Rushita sunn naa tu aur Raavi bacchon ko school le jaaoge, woh mujhe kahi jaana thaa suddenly mujhe yaad aagaya”

Rishita says ok

Kids leaves with the moms.

Shesh’s big mouth again to Chiku, “ tu buta mat masn Chiku, hamare Sagi maa hai naa woh tumko aliens se bacha legi badi maa teri aski maa nahi hsi naa issliye aliens se darr ke nahi aayi tujhe chodne”

Chiku looks at Bhabima, she goes inside to talk to her mom. Chiku leaves for school.

Sorry to say, I am a mother but they are giving Shesh dialogues beyond his age not going well with me. At this age kids talk about Real mother, adopted mother is not good🙄🙄 The writers need to tone down his dialogues. Just because the child actot can act and too smart in picking up his lines, doesn’t mean they can just make him say inappropriate things for his age🙄

Chiku is going through mental confusion, so can understand but what’s with Shesh shooting his bog mouth.

Neither Raavi nor Mitthu had any dialogues worthwhile in this scene 🙄🙄

Originally posted by: Lovely2021

Psycho Gobarwaali can fo whatever she wants to do with bkb. Dhe can target zombie. No problem.

Just stay AWay from Raavi’s life. Raavi should not trust her . Shiva hopefully this time stay strong with raavi. If makers try to create Gobarwaali problem in shivi life then hopefully show will shit down. As fans won't tolerate Gobarwaali in shivi life

NO EXPECTATIONS!
Knowing these writers for a long time, they will purposely screw up to irritate the fans. So if ut happens, Raavi should kill him and the gobarwaali just like she said and should not regret🙄

Bringing a new girl for Shuva every year and Raavi fightung to save their marriage is the only track writers can think for them🙄

Chiku’s classroom.

All the bots and girls atleast look like teenagers while Chiku is a 8 yr old kid.

What kind of a setup is this? Can’t they get some kids if his age, instead briugh teenagers to sit in his ckassroom, that too some of the kids are twice as tall as him🙄🙄 Poor casting and poorly directed scene🙄

Chilu is thinking Bhabima questioning him about stealing the doll and the aangan scene where he gies and hides behind Shweta when Bhabima continues her tirade about him failing his exams, lying, being a badatameez. He then remembers Shesh asking why he hs wearing an old uniform. Chiku talking back to Bhabima and Shesh further instigating him about Bhabima not being his real mom.

Just then a kid ( who looked much older than 8 years) starts bullying Chiku in the classroom

“ abbey oye Alien ke shakal ke, teri shakkal poori alien ki jaisi hai”

Other older kids laugh at the joke and hi-5 each other.

Chiku gets angry, pushes the kid down and both start fighting. Other kids are cheering the kid who bullied. He pushes Chiku down but Chiku goes after him, fight continues

Teacher comes inside the classroom, sees them fighting and separates them. Other kids rush to their seats.

She says, “ what nonsense is this? Ye kya .ladayi jhagda laga rakha hai, students remember this kind of behavior is not going to be tolerated in the school and both of you are suspended for the entire day today, go and stand outside the class”

Chiku is the first one to go out abd stand followed by the other kid.

Natasha is walking in the hallway sees Chiku standing outside asks him, “ tu yahan kya kar raha hai?, aur tere kapde gandhe kyun hai”

Chiku lies, “ mein ckass mei ghur gaya thaa”

Other kid says, “ ate Chiku, jhoot kya bol raha hai, bolna usko ki tujhe hero banke mujhse fight karni thi, issliye teacher ne hum donon ko ckass se bahar nikaal diya” ,

Originally posted by: mpks1

NO EXPECTATIONS!
Knowing these writers for a long time, they will purposely screw up to irritate the fans. So if ut happens, Raavi should kill him and the gobarwaali just like she said and should not regret🙄

Bringing a new girl for Shuva every year and Raavi fightung to save their marriage is the only track writers can think for them🙄

Exactly and fans are tired of it. Due to The gobar track fans went ballistic and SP gad to warn PS. Hopevthry font mess with shivi story now.

Gobarwaali can run after xombie to extract her revenge on bkb

Todays episode is CLASSIC case of why this team of creatives need to be replaced.

1. There is a couple that came out of memory loss blah - 7 years of ordeal for wife, young anxious Child
Instead of giving scene with him, good conversation about just them;

Their child is not even shown having moment with them (while we get shwta chikoo dhara scenes in same episode)

They bring in family troubles in talks, not concerns about How Raavinraised Mitthoo & survived all these years.

(Family troubles are & will be never ending thanks to chudail Bhabhi)

2. there is mahaan couple. Who is given such scenes multiple times. Where they just romance , slurp & talk about themselves only. Family jaaye bhaad mein.
Mainly husband praising his chudail for all her successful kaands.
this was right after fraud Shaadis she pulled - 2 vouples were disturb, crying. One couple was in doldrums with husbands missing memory.

But majaal hai these mahaan bother about it.

Long 3/4 episode long scene was this. Conversation, song, romance all! (Pic credit Kinshuk M.’s tags)

Priorities & story telling of alien creatives!

Originally posted by: spdp

Todays episode is CLASSIC case of why this team of creatives need to be replaced.

1. There is a couple that came out of memory loss blah - 7 years of ordeal for wife, young anxious Child
Instead of giving scene with him, good conversation about just them;

Their child is not even shown having moment with them (while we get shwta chikoo dhara scenes in same episode)

They bring in family troubles in talks, not concerns about How Raavinraised Mitthoo & survived all these years.

(Family troubles are & will be never ending thanks to chudail Bhabhi)

2. there is mahaan couple. Who is given such scenes multiple times. Where they just romance , slurp & talk about themselves only. Family jaaye bhaad mein.
Mainly husband praising his chudail for all her successful kaands.
this was right after fraud Shaadis she pulled - 2 vouples were disturb, crying. One couple was in doldrums with husbands missing memory.

But majaal hai these mahaan bother about it.

Long 3/4 episode long scene was this. Conversation, song, romance all! (Pic credit Kinshuk M.’s tags)

Priorities & story telling of alien creatives!

What lowlives this entire writing and creative team are. I get pissed at the director and the technical crew present at the shooting, especially the dialogue writer and the reader who prompts the actors. I only feel bad for the workers doing hard labor on the sets like spot boy, make-up, hair, costume department, light men, people who out up the sets. Otherwise top writers and technicians get in my nerves when I watch the various BTS segments.

Gautam cannot think anything beyond Dhara, thart’s his character, they have made him a selfish older brother now, sho was never like this before. They made him a PC, Bhabima’s nimboopani man adding nothing to the story🙄

As for Shiva- Raavi scene ,did nit cut it is all I can say about it🙄 How can you not include their kid in the conversation. He is part of their lives🙄

Futile to expect anything good from this team but they better remember:

In this chudail Vs alien drama:

1. Dhara bhagodi gobar chudails should just focus on each other. To destroy the other they should not go after Raavi / Rishita/ their Pati’s & kids.

Because cheif chudail dhara cares nothing about them.

2. Remember GOMBI is dhara’s pati. Any thing happens to Dhara/ her mom/ her chudail sis : gombi must be shown to go save them.

Anything to Rishita: dev should step out for his 2 children.

Shiva is still shown under medication, He should focus on his wife & his child which none of these others prioritize.

he shouldn’t be pushed to save Gombi’s wife or Dev’s wife.
Let ‘Male lead’ gombi do that.

Else it almost looks like chudail groomer Dhara’bhabhi’ has abused devar Shiva for all her other assignments. So much so that dhara’s mother has also heard Dhara shiva ke kissey. Not dhara gombi ke.