Am i your priority? (Part-7,8,9page 13) - Page 8

Originally posted by: mandira2

aw thanks for the lovely update!❤️

Originally posted by: Shivifan

waiting for next

Originally posted by: krishapatel_163

Waiting for next..!!

Pls update it soon!!

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Originally posted by: Tanvi-Agrawal

Update????

Do catch up and please give honest feedback about the same.....

As i think the story is going really monotonous..... ...

And if any suggestions to improve the track are most welcone.......

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

feeling so sad for raavi and dhara i really wish she can understand someone other then her mahantha

And i want her out badly......

Anyways do check the new update......

PART-V

Raavi was not meeting my eyes and crying.........

And her each wail and her each tear was breaking my heart....

I was trying to comfort her but nothing worked..........

I cupped her face and said,

"Raavi kisi ne kuch kaha kya tujhe......"

She nodded in a yes still her fave hidden in my chest and i made her look into my eyes still cupping her face and i spoke,

"Kisne bola....... Ikk dum sach batana main abhi khabar lekar aata hoon uski........ "

Raavi looked at me and than spoke hiccuping

"Ajj...... Competition ke baad...... Rishi......ta ...... Rishita ne kaha ki....... Main tere liye important nahi... Hoon...... "

"Aur tune maan liya...... "

She noded in a quick noo and said,

"Maine nahi mana par...... Par..... Fir usne kaha kii......... Teri priority...... Dhara dii..... Hai......... Fir.... Mfir... Sari family....... Aur pata nahi uske baad main hoon ya nahi........ "

I kept on hearing her and keep carressing her back with my one hand and carresing her cheek with my thumb........ And she again said,

"Maine pehle vishwas nahi kiya tha....... Par fir...... Fir.......... Tune competition ka saRa credit dii ko diya......... Mujhe bura lga fir main smjh gayi ki shiva apna pyaar nahi jatata.......... Par fir jab main milne aayi tujhe dhara dii beech mein aa gayi......... Aur main bheed mein ghum ho gayi......... Main toh tujhe dikh hi nahi rahi thi shiva....... Maine tab bhi khud ko smjha liya..........gadi mein main tere saath nahi baithi kio kii dhara dii ko baithna tha....... ghar aayi ikk baar bhi humne baat nahi kii maine koshish ki par isa lag raha tha mera hona na hona........ikk jaisa hi hai tere liye...........Main apne app ko kab tak samjhao shiva......... Ki tujhe pyaar dikhana nahi ata......... Mujhe hMesha lgta hai kii main bass ikk unchaha hissa hoon..........tere paas sab hai shiva........ Kaki, bhai bhabhi....... Mere paas sirf tu hai..... Par vo bhi mera nahi hai...... Vo bhi mera nahi hai........ "

And she again put her head on my chest and cried and says slowly,

" Maine apna sab kuch chod diya shiva......... Massi maa...... Anita dii...... Sab...... Kio kii tujhe pasand nahi......... "

She pulled out of my embrace and extending her dupatta in front of me and than said looking at me,

"Mujhe apni jindagi mein thodi c jagah de de shiva please.......... "

I hold her hands which she extended and nodded in a no and she said,

"Main kabhi kuch nahi mangugi....... Tu jaise kahega vaise reh lungi.....main dhara dii jaisa ban jaungi...........Par mujhe itni si jagah de de...... "

I was feeling so guilty that she is begging to me for ger right and i am a big failure can't even provide my lady love and security what she deserves........

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Hey guys....... I know i am very late but being very honest i don't have much clue that how this story should move further........

Please do help me with it..........

And please be honest woth your review on this part as i am not confident myself ehat i wrote cause of the long cut from the story line.......

Yours

ODETTE_DELUSION

This is incredibly sad. That she is so insecure, under confident and broken. Shiva has major making up to do.

Aww this was so sad 😞 😭

She feels so insecure in her relationship. She doesn't have anyone other than Shiva and even he isn't entirely her's 🥺

Shiva has a lot to do to make it up to her.

Great update 👍 😊

Raavi's insecurity😭

She told him how she felt🥺

Awesome update

Very beautiful❤❤❤

Mere paas sirf tu hai..... Par vo bhi mera nahi hai...... Vo bhi mera nahi hai........ " This lone ses to be so true

Raavi's insecurity is depicted bery nicely this chap really made me more connected to raavi's character.

U can Show dhara being the actual Villian means she is Doing all this deliberately she is mastermind behind all this insecurity