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Posted: 2 years ago
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Great updates


Dhara😡, why did she have to stop them.

I hope she has to face angry shiva now😉

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Great update 👍 👏

Shiva brought Rishita home and is going out of his way to make it up to Raavi.

Dhara 🤬

Please update soon 😊

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Posted: 2 years ago
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PART-VIII

"Tum dono kahin nahi jaoge"

Dhara spoke.... Shivi turned around and Shiva says,

"Bhabhi par humara plan set hai gaumbi ne haan kar di hai"

Dhara spoke in attitude,

"Itna bada ho gya hai shiva tu kii sare faisle khud karega tune mujhse ikk baar bhi nahi pucha....... "

"Bhabhi plan jaldi jaldi mein ban gya aur kuch nahi....... "

Dhara started again her bacha jaap and Shiva started listening to her and telling that she is really important and Raavi was just standing there holding her bag in hand hers lips wobbled and dhara spoke in anger,

"Abb tu yehi khadi rahegi...... Tu ghar par nahi hogi toh kaise manage hoga rishita pregnant hai toh kamm kaise hoga sara........ "

Raavi just started to go back to room when shiva hold her hand and said,

"Raavi andar nahi jayegi bahbhi....

Maine apni biWi se vada kiya hai toh main use lekar hi jaunga......"

"Shiva main ghar ka sara kam kaise karungi.......Rishita bhi pregnanat hai........"

Rishita comes from kitchen and speaks,

"Mujhe koii problem nahi hai bhabhi.........Main do din ke liye aaram se manage kar sakti hoon.........aur aap toh hai hi.........."

Dhara looked at shiva and speaks,

"Shiva aise achanak se plan kaise bana abhi kal hi toh tu jeet kar aaya hai thoda time hamare saath guzaar fir kabhi chale jana....... "

And shiva says,

"Bhabhi abhi raavi meri priority hain.......... "

And he simply holds her hand and both move out of the house raavi kept on looking at shiva with mixed emotions as she was not able to comprehend what shiva said he said that she is his priority and that to in front of his bhabhi..........

She was elated and felt important

As soon as they moved out they sat in a cab and raavi went near shiva and entangled her hands with his bicep and rested her head on it...... Meanwhile shiva patted her head and said,

"Get ready for these 2 days my love....... "

And he planted a kiss on top of her head and she snuggled in more.

Meanwhile dhara looked at gaumbi and said,

"Gaumbi tumne unhe ijazat kaise di...... Tumne mujhse ikk baar bhui nahi pucha ki shiva ko bhejna hai ki nahi.......... Shiva toh bacha hai 2 din kaise rahega dur......... "

Gaumbi was about to retort when suman came in between and said,

"Kya tamasha laga rakha hai...... "

Dhara started her mellow drama and said,

"Dekha nahi maa apne bina bataye kaise chale gaye dono....... "

Suman cutt her in between and said,

"Mujhse puch kar gaye hai...... Mere bete ne mujhe bata diya tha aur dono miya biwi ikk saath jahan marji jayein hume kya......... "

"Apko pata tha maa...... Par mujhe kio nahi...... "

"Aee bhagodi ki beti....... Kya mujhse nahi pucha ka raag lagaya hai................ Dono ikk saath gaye hai shaadi baad kya kehte hai honeymoon par......... Toh kya tujhe saath mein lekar jaate....... Usne mujhse pucha......... Gaumbi se pucha abb kya court se order niklwa ke jata.......... "

Dhara was quite and suman said,

"Aur abb haan shiva bacha nahi raha hai... . .. . . Inn sabki umar abb khud bache karne ki hai.. . .. . . Unka khayal rakh tu par abb unhe apne aanchal mein samet ke rakhne chahegi toh vo galat hai.. . .. . .. . Unhe apni duniya khud basane de.. . .. . . "

Saying this suman went and all others too here dhara sat on the cot and was thinking on suman's words and was also becoming insecure of her place.......

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Hey guys!!!!!!!!

I know i am really late with the update and that too it is a short one but guys i am really running out of time.........

Let me know your views on the same and also vote........

And please do mention a calm and a solace place where you think shivi can go spend some time together..........

Yours

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Posted: 2 years ago
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PART-IX

RAAVI POV:-

I am really feeling different today shiva choose me over everyone else never in my whole life anyone did this for me all the time people have made me feel second but he put me first............ First of all.......... And now we both are sitting together my head on his shoulder his hand caressing my hairs make me feel home all the abandonment i have felt all my life is making way out...........

I looked at shiva and he was looking out his being closer to me and how his hands were carresing my hairs was just making me secure we were moving across the roads cold breeze making the way more loving and shiva says,

"Puchegi nahi kahan lekar jaa raha hoon.............."

I just don't know i kept on looking into his eyes deeply and he joined our foreheads and whispered very slowly,

"Agr aise hi delhti rahi na toh jo iske baad hoga vo yeh cab vala dekh nahi paega........ "

And i shyed away my cheeks heat up and i don't know when i just hide my face in his chest and he laughed lovingly and pulled my cheeks and after that patted them and brought me more closer.

And soon tge cab stopped here and shiva said,

"Chal Baki log hamara intezaar kar rahe hai....... "

"Kon log.......... "

"Abhi pata lag jayega....... "

And we moved out of cab and shiva's friend arrived he came and hugged him and said,

"Kitne time baad mila yaar tu.........."

And he saw me and said,

namaste bhabhi......... "

And i replied he came towards me and said,

"Bhabhi pure do din abb app iss bandar ko bhul jao.......... Apko dikhate hain ki hum kaise masti karte hain....... "

And i smiled happily and he trying to annoy shiva said,

"Aree bhabhi haste huye kya lagti hai app........ "

And shiva comes and encircle his hand around his neck and said,

"Ae bhabhi ke saath flirt karega....... "

And he said chokingly,

"Aree nahi bhai...... Main toh dekh raha tha ki tu bhabhi ko lekar kitna possessive hain......... Abb pata lag gya nahi bolta bhai kuch..... "

And we all laughes out loud.... Soon all tge other couples who were friends of shiva accompained us and than one of them named vishal said,

"Bhabhi vaise manana padega apne shiva ko badal diya hain hum kabse keh rahe the ki kahin ghumne chalte hain aur yeh hamesha mana karta tha........ Kal iska call aaya ki sab apni biwiyon ke saath trip par chalte hain................. "

And shiva spoke,

"Toh...... Meri shaadi ko toh abhi 3 hafte huye teri shaadi ko 3 mahine bhabhi ko kahin lekar gaya tu................ Par mujhe meri biwi ko Honeymoon lekar aana tha toh maine socha tum jokeron ko bhi bula loon vo kya hai na hamara entertainment hota rahega...... "

And they all four boys started bickering and teasing each other and soon i jammed up with their wives and we all were talking...... I really neede a break from all the stuff going in my mind and meeting new people and seeing shiva all chill what can be better than this........

And we all sat in the resort car and reached our rooms and shiva asked me,

"Kaise lagi jagah...... "

"Bhut achi hai shiva........ "

And he just engulfed me in a hug and said,

"Pata hai ajj rohit keh raha tha ki shiva........... Teri life mein sabse achi baat gar kuch hai toh vo Raavi hai.......... "

I looked at him and asked,

"Tujhe bhi yahin lagta hai kya...... "

And he said,

"Mujhe toh lagta hain ki meri life hi raavi hai...... "

And he raised his eyebrows i lowered my gaze smiling lovingly and he kissed my cheeks i looked at him and he said,

"Honey moon hai hamara..... Mere paas pura license hai....... "

And there was a knock and vishal said loudly,

"Bhai........ Fresh hokar khana kha le ikk baar........ Fir disturb nahi karunga sari raat teri hi hai........ "

And shiva said,

" Aa rahe hai hum..... Tu nikal yahan se....... "

And i laughed at his reaction and he said,

"Zyada has mat...... Puri raat hai mere paas..... "

He said last words little huskily and than moved our winking at me leaving me behind blushing like an idiot........

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