Am i your priority? (Part-7,8,9page 13) - Page 9

Originally posted by: Nja91

This is incredibly sad. That she is so insecure, under confident and broken. Shiva has major making up to do.

Next part is out do read and comment.........

Originally posted by: mkc12345

Aww this was so sad 😞 😭

She feels so insecure in her relationship. She doesn't have anyone other than Shiva and even he isn't entirely her's 🥺

Shiva has a lot to do to make it up to her.

Great update 👍 😊

Next part is out do read and comment 🥰

Originally posted by: Prizi

Raavi's insecurity😭

She told him how she felt🥺

Awesome update

Originally posted by: Tanvi-Agrawal

Very beautiful❤❤❤

Mere paas sirf tu hai..... Par vo bhi mera nahi hai...... Vo bhi mera nahi hai........ " This lone ses to be so true

Raavi's insecurity is depicted bery nicely this chap really made me more connected to raavi's character.

U can Show dhara being the actual Villian means she is Doing all this deliberately she is mastermind behind all this insecurity

Will surely make a dark side for dhara as she is going to be one doing all this for keeping her upper hand on shiva......

PART-VI

I hugged her just giving her body warmth beacuse of continuous crying her body was becoming pale she kept on wailing and her tears were drenching my vest but soon she was calming and after sometime her crying stopped. I looked at her and she has slept still hugging me closer just like having fear of loosing me i kissed top of her head i made her comfortable on the bed and tugged her eith a blanket and slept next to her doing these my tears came out and i can't help to just hug her closer...........

This what she is for me my calm my home coming her gives me relief when she looks at me i feel like i am the most handsome her when she talks to me i feel that i am important when she bears my anger quietly so that i can vent out my feeling i feel like there is someone to listen to me............

She is always there for me but am i there for her.............

I don't know i have hurt her this much everytime she understands everytime she adjusts everytime she gets humiliated ...............

everything in our relationship is about me and everything in our relationship is making her vulnerable but she doesn't speak up........

Raavi the girl who was always expressive of her feelings ....... Is now quiet and that too for sake of me.........

The whole night i was remembering the moments i have neglected her........

I am actually breaking her......

For me she left her family but i can't even prioritize her over my family.........

I looked at her face once again and whispered a sorry in her ear and kissed her earlobe and said,

" Maine tuhhe bhut for granted liya hai raavi.......par Abb samay aa gya hai ki main apni chotti c family jo ki meri jimmedari hai......jis mein meri raavi hai uske liye jeeu........."

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Hey guys a really small update and that too after so long but don't worry next part will be out today or tomorrow...... So stay tuned and yes do tell me how it was and vote and comment so that i can write the next update more with more enthusiasm.......

Yours

ODETTE_DELUSION

Now he knows 🥺 and he will take care of her ❤

Finally he sees his flaws.

It's great he sees his faults and hopefully he will take care of her now. Great update ❤️

Originally posted by: Amy_march_02

Now he knows 🥺 and he will take care of her ❤

PART-VII

Morning rays seeped through the window disturbing sleep of a beautiful couple slept in each other's embrace having dry tears but still holding on each other.......

Soon morning rays disturbed sleep of shiva....

shiva wakes up and look at raavi he kisses get forehead once And inhaled her scent and thought,

"Ajj mujhe bhut kuch karna hai meri raavi ke liye...... "

And he goes out.....

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RAAVI'S POV

My sleep was broke by loss of warmth and i choose to get up......

When i looked at the place near me it was empty and a fear crept in my mind that what of shiva is angry from me because i have opposed his family and specially dhara bhabhi........

And before i could comprehend anything i saw the clock it struck 8:30 and god i was running late i have to make breakfast clean the house and what not and i ran to have a bath.........

Soon after Freshning up i went to kitchen but i hear some sounds and was ready to get a scolding from dhara di as she must have been doing Everything all alone........

When i entered the kitchen i was surprised it was Rishita.......

Yes rishita......

When did she came back and is she not upset anymore.....

But before i could ask her rishita turned and looked at me and said,

"Good morning raavi.... "

"Good morning rishita....."

"Itni hairaan kyon ho....... "

"Vo tum kab aayi mujhe pata nahi chala....... "

"Kisi ko bhi nahi pata........ Acha tum andar toh aao...... Thodi chai lo fir aram se batati hoon...... "

I went towards her we both had our tea and rishita spoke,

"Raavi maine kal jo bui kaha mujhe maaf kardo...... Please........ Maine gusse mein bol diya tha.... Par mujhe apni haar par aur dhara bhabhi se narazgi ki bhadas sab maine tum oar nikal di.......

Aur jo muh mein aaya bol diya.... Mujhe nahi pata tha ki uska tumpar itna gehra asar hoga..... "

I got teary eyed and said,

"Par vo sab jhooth bhi toh nahi tha......... "

Rishita came near me and said,

"Raavi kabhi kabhi hum apni shikayaten kisi ko batate nahi hai.......... Aur fir compromise karke jite hai......pat hamare partner ko pata hona chahiye ki humare man mein koii malal toh nahi hai....... Main janti hoon tum shiva se apni insecurities dhara bhabhi ki shikayaten iss liye nahi batati kio kii shiva gussa man jata hain....... Tum apni jagah sahi ho....... "

"Main itne dino se andar hi andar sab kuch daba rahi thi par kal sab bol diya aur dekho ajj subah se shiva mujhe nahi mila...... Vo jaroor gussa hoga mujhse...... Itni mushkil se hamara rishta juda hai aur maine fir sab kuch kharab kar diya....... ".

" Raavi agar tumhe lagta hai ki tumne sab kuch sach bata kar galat kiya toh tum galat ho.... ... Ajj shiva aaya tha mere paas usne hi mujhe samjahya aur vapas aane ke liye manaya..... Kabhi kabhi sirf baat kar lene se sab theek ho jata hai........ "

"Shiva ne tumhe manaya....... "

Rishita nodded in a yes and said,

"Tumhara shiva tumhara intezaar kar raha hai abhi apne kamre mein hoga...... Jao..... "

I nodded and moved towards my room........ And opened the door her stood shiva with a sorry placard in his hands and making a puppy face.........

My tears made my way out and i ran and hugged him.......

He kelt the placard at side and hugged me back and said,

"Rona toh band kar....... Dehydration ho jayegi tujhe....... Kal se roo rahi hai bass....... "

He wiped my tears and cupped my face and said,

"Acha chal Mere saath ghumne chalegi jyada din nahi bass 2 din...... "

I loked at him and asked,

"Par kahan...... "

"Surprise hain........ "

And i said,

"Par shiva ghar ka kamm..... Aur fir koii manega nahi...... "

"Vo sab meri jimmedari hai tu bas ikk kam kar 2 din ke liye bag pack kar aur hum chalenge...... "

I nooded but he pulled me in his embrace more tightly and said,

"Ayee raavi......... Aise karegi kya..... Agar main apni raavi ko bolta na ki kahin ghumne jaa rahe hai toh uski jo muskan hai na vo uske kano tak paunchti aur vo uchal kudd kar mujhe bhi apne bachpane mein shamil kar leti...... "

That was it...... I have never expected shiva to bring stars and moon for me but i have always wanted him ti take little steps and make me feel important.......... Though it was just him asking me out but for me he has removed his guard and came out of his comfort and that's a big step for him to take.........

And i gave my wide smile to him which made his face also lit up and i can feeling our hearts getting intact again and he patted my cheek and said,

"Chal abb packing kar le..... "

And i nodded and tip toed and kissed his cheek and went to do my work as if nothing hapoened and shiva looked at giving his "nauranki hai meri biwi" Look and moving out smiling........

Soon i packed the stuff and shiva came to me and hold my hand and me both moved out of our room......

Gaumbi was standing in the aangan and shiva said,

"Gaumbi main aur raavi 2 din ke liye bahar ghumne jaa rahe hai "

And gaumbi nodded and smiled and wished us a good journey and i was really happy and we both started to move towards the door but soon dhara bahbhi's voice cane and said,

"Tum dono kahin nahi jaoge..... "

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Hey guys!!!!

There is you update i know i am running late but sorry for the delay and soon i will come back with update of this story and will finish it with 1 or 2 updates........

Hope you all like it and do shate any ideas if you want to be added in the story....

Yours

ODETTE_DELUSION