Am i your priority? (Part-7,8,9page 13) - Page 2

Originally posted by: Kristmas

This one hits close 😭

ugh reminds me of Raavi amd Rishita’s feelings being neglected at being left out of all planning 🥺

dil toots 🥺

but here’s hoping that this Shiva knows amd appreciates all that Raavi has done, is doing and will do for him ❤️

Shiva will surely support her😇

Originally posted by: Shivifan

please complete this story. This is somewhere reality check to everyone who loves Shivi. No doubt Shiva is gem person but is he a perfect husband? Kya Shiva bhabhi ki duniya se bahar nikal kr Raavi ke sache pyaar ko dekh ya mehsoos kr payega keeping aside his MAHAN BHABHI MAA from his married life? Ya hamesha ki tarh Raavi ko Dhara ki mahanta se compare krega as her shadow? Kya Shiva kbhi Raavi ke point of view ko smjh payega if in future she will not agree with Dhara somewhere? Kya kbhi Shiva Dhara ke against jakr Raavi ya uski self-respect ke liye stand le payega? I don't in sab questions ka answer kya hai but I really want to know ki Shiva ka pyaar bhi utna hi strong, utna hi pure, utna hi selfless hai jitna Raavi ka Shiva ke liye hai

Shiva actually need to seperate dhara from his marrieey life......

Originally posted by: Foxii

Nice, would like to read how the the story moves forward.

Hope they don’t do anything line that in the show

Stay tuned❣️

Originally posted by: Prizi

Even I want to knw where raavi stands in his life?? Is she just his setting (in his language)?

Lovely is dear

Originally posted by: sandrasheron

Awesome. Please do continue... eagerly waiting for the next part.

Originally posted by: Nja91

Great premise. Please write more...

Originally posted by: mandira2

This was so sad! I hope Shiva is able to realise Raavi's love! I really hope nothing like this happens! But to be completely honest, there is a big chance that this might happen. It was a lovely story! I hope we get to find out what happens next because I really want to know what Shiva thinks about Raavi!

It is basically a raavi's POV

PART-ll

I stood there pondering on rishita's words lost in my thoughts when Krish came and says,

"Bhabhi hum shiva ko gadi mein bithakar puri shaan se lekar jaa rahe hai....... Chalo.... "

I looked at krish and follow him. When we reached near the car Shiva looked at me and gave me one of his brightest smile and i forgot every negativities and ran towards him he forward his hand so that i could climb on the car and sit with him when i was about to grab his hand Dhara dii came and climbed on the car. I looked on and dhara dii says,

"Vo raavi abhi car mein jagah nahi hai toh tu krish ke saath aa jana..... "

i looks at shiva expectantly that he will atleast say something but shiva was just looking at me and again i left dejected from their and sit behind krish and all of us rode off towards our house.

Soon we reach pandya niwas and everyone started showering their love on shiva. Kaki and dhara dii were gushing around shiva. Whenever i tried to go near him and talk to him she was assingned some work.Finally dhara dii left his side and got a chance to sit with him and when i came forward Kaki says,

"Ae markundi gay chai nahi layegi.. . .. . .. Aur kuch meetha bhi bana lena.. . .. . Mera beta jeet kar aaya hai.... . "

I looked at shiva and he was already looking at me but how can he utter a word against his maa and i left seeing him busy with his family........ His family in which i was nothing..........

I entered the kitchen and remembered open the fridge and my smile got back on my face as my eyes fell on the shikhand i made for shiva in the morning because i know he will definitely win. And i made tea and came out to give him the treat. When served tea to everyone and proceeded towards shiva forwarded the bowl and said,

"Maine tere liye...... "

I was cut in between as dhara dii entered from thenmain door almost shouting saying,

"Surprise......... Mujhe pata tha ki mera shiva jeetega iss liye maine gajar ke halwe ka order de diya tha.........shiva ka favorite....."

And dhara dii started feeding him sharing their yaadon ki barat moment and my shikhand which i made just for him with almonds chopped without raisins and loads of cashew just like he loved was laying somewhere forgotten. And now i not just sad i was dejected as dhara dii said she knew he would win than why she ordered the halwa after the prize distribution i have seen her ordering after that. And what about me and my preparation. I left for my room and my tears came out which were telling me about my broken heart i was feeling lonely yet again........ That's what i feared and that's what he promised to be with me........ He asked me that i can find my every realtion in him but what if i can't even find my husband in him.........

Just like that sweet delegacy that i made was left unnoticed on the table.......

That's where i stand in his Pritoties just unnoticed........

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Thanks for giving such a great response on part I........

Hope you all like this part and is up to your expectations if this not please do tell me i will for surely consider your suggestion.

Yours

ODETTE_DELUSION

Oh Amrit!! This one hits so bad😒

Raavi has every right to feel bad and neglected. And it's Shiva's fault, he need to realise his wife's worth.

It's makes me sad seeing Raavi like this.

Also the fact that this can actually happen in show is making me more upset.

Hope to read Shiva POV soon. It's much needed.

Originally posted by: Nicky-nish

Oh Amrit!! This one hits so bad😒

Raavi has every right to feel bad and neglected. And it's Shiva's fault, he need to realise his wife's worth.

It's makes me sad seeing Raavi like this.

Also the fact that this can actually happen in show is making me more upset.

Hope to read Shiva POV soon. It's much needed.

I am basically eyeing to write it in raavi's POV but will try to write shiva's POV too.........